So that was the last chapter? What did y'all think? I'm in the process of writing the sequel, but I'll get posting as soon as I can. I'm taking any suggestions for what to put in the sequel, as well as anything that could be improved. I have a feeling the biggest complaint is going to be the length of the chapters, so I can fix that. Anyways, I better get back to writing. Look for the sequel! ***** ~KaratePunk~ ***** P.S. I don't have a name for the new one yet- when I figure that out, I'll get it posted.