Yay!!!!*jumps around all excited* someone reviewed ^_____^ I think I'm gonna die from happyness...well, anyway, I'm thinking of bringing a muse...but I dunno who...well I will think about it. Enjoy!
Well people, I'm supposing you've played the game, so I'm not rewriting every scene, and I'm making up a big part. ^_^ Hope you like it. Oh, yes. The group is the following: Kevin, Duran and Lise; Kevin being the protagonist. Oh, and I'm doing what I can with Kevin's speech, so don't hit me... -_-U

Chapter 1: The Mana warriors

Kevin and Duran woke up. They where weak and confused.

"Where are we...?" said Duran rubbing the back of his head.

"Seems jail..." Kevin pointed the jail door.

"Damn it!" Duran kicked the bars "Let me out!"he shouted.

"Umh, you folks where caught too?" Said a female voice.

They approached the wall from where the voice was heard.

"Somebody there? Where is this?!"

"I'm Lise of Rolante.I was on my way back from the Holy City when they captured me. But don't worry, leave it to me. I think I can get us out of here."

"Hey quiet!" A beastman coming shouted.

"Excuse me!"said Lise loudly "I think I ear digging back there, someone could be ecaping!"

While she tricked the beastman in the jail, Duran and Kevin looked at each other, sharing a grin. Lise opened their door, and they all went out. They agreed in escaping together.

They regained their health at the golden godess and were about to go out, when they heard a moan.

"What was that?"said Duran, looking around.

"It sounded like someone in pain."said Lise worried.

"I smell...blood."Kevin sniffled around, following his nose, and Lise and Duran followed him.

They walked down a corridor with empty jails, and Kevin stopped in font of the last one.

"I will open it" Lise leaned forward and forced open the door with her spear.

It was very dark inside, and she could not see anything. There were muffled sounds coming from a dark corner.

"Someone's there! Hey! Are you OK?"

Nobody answered.

"Smells of pain"

Lise neared the corner and pushed it to the light whith the stick of her spear. It was a girl; more or less of her age, and seemed unconsciencious. Her clothes were strange, and her stomach was bloodied, a gash on it.

"She's hurt! We should get her out of here."

"How will we carry her? She can't walk."

Kevin leaned over the girl, she smelled nice, apart from the pain and blood. He picked her up. "Kevin carry her, Duran and Lise fight." They all agreed, and ran out of there.

They found some wolves, nothing too hard, and went for the harbor. They rushed to the ship and Kevin put the girl down in a cabin.

They went out to let her rest. While they listened to Lise's story, the girl slept.

To be continued...

Sorry, this one is bad, I know...^_^U
I posted this as soon as I saw the reviews. So you know, the earlier you review, the earlier the next chapter is posted. No reviws = no new chapters. I don't care if the review only says you've read it, that's enought for me.