Hi!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah, I know, I said I wasn't gonna write until I got 5
reviews, but hey! I think three in one day is good enough! *smile* If
you're one of the people who have reviewed for me, please read da bottom
after da story. That means you too, K'han. o.o I hope I spelled that
right. Anyways, onta chapter. 5? 5!! Please review when you're done
reading. I wanna know if people are actually reading my junk or not.
Arigatou.
Disclaimer: I don't own Final Fantasy 7. I wish I did, I know someday I won't, just lay off and don't sue me.
Vincent trudged along, leaning on the wall of the canyon for support. He still couldn't help but think that someone or something was following him. 'I really wish I had cure. This pain is too much.' Vincent was pulled from his thoughts by an earsplitting shriek. He turned around quickly, being rewarded with a major burst of pain. Vincent winced and got down on one knee, heaving and grasping his pained sides. He looked up through hazy eyes and saw a shadowy creature approach him. Before he could see its face, he blacked out.
About the same time as the above.
The group, minus Cloud, Cait Sith, and Sid, were sitting out under the stars when they heard a loud crunch behind them. Everyone turned to the open space where the Highwind had been. A giant Monster reared and let out an ear-piercing screech. Yuffie screamed at the pain and Barret "accidentally" hit her on the head and shut her up. The monster landed with a thud and got ready to charge the group. The group pulled their weapons out and got ready for battle. Barret gave an exasperated moan and prepared for battle. "Of course! They start to attack once Cloud leaves!" "Suck it up, Barret!" After yelling at Barret, she focused her attention on the current battle.
Back to Vincent.
Vincent's eyes fluttered open. He stared into nothingness, waiting for his eyes to adjust to the dim, light-like thing above his head. Once his eyes were adjusted, he looked around. It was pitch black! He had adjusted his eyes for nothing! 'Damnit!' He started to get up, expecting to receive his usual reward of severe pain, and wasn't. The pain was gone! Vincent was relieved, and then turned to where the light had been. A monster stood next him, odd tentacle-like thing with a light on the tip atop its head. Vincent reached for his gun on his belt. It was gone! Vincent got up with a bound and turned, ready for a fistfight to the death. He was rewarded with a hand, offering his gun. "Yours?" Vincent looked at his gun and then at the monster. Do to the little light atop its head, Vincent's eyes couldn't adjust to see its face. "Yes, thank you. Who or what are you?" The creature seemed to tilt its head at the question, as if he didn't understand. Vincent shook his head in disbelief. Vincent packed his gun in his belts and looked up at the creature. Vincent sweat dropped and bowed. He then turned and left the cave-like place the creature had brought him. Shortly after he left, Vincent heard heavy footsteps behind him. He turned and saw the creature. "Me? You?" Vincent shook his head. "No." Vin turned and took one step, to be echoed by another. The creature was still there! Vincent turned. "N-O, No." "Me? You? Yes?" "No." "Yes?" "No." "Yes?" Vincent threw his human arm into the air and turned to walk on. "Fine, but I'm not going to take care of you." The two walked on through the canyon.
And to the group.
Yuffie fell back on the sand, happy to be alive. Barret walked over to the edge of the canyon with Red. "I wonder if he's still alive. It looks kind of deep." Red looked down into the canyon. "Vincent's not that week, Barret. I know he's still alive." Barret sighed. "We can hope so." Red turned and headed back to the fire. Barret looked down into the canyon again. 'Hoping is all we can do for now.'
Well? Good? Bad? Ideas are welcome. PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!! Arigatou. Now for the thank you's to 4 people.
Koko Kung ~ I'm glad you're reading it! *GLOMPS!* Thank you, I'm glad you think it's good. I changed the rating for you, thanks for the tip! I know you're right about it, too! *smile*
Split_Coas ~ Thanks a ton for the help with Red XI's name! See? I continued! *GLOMPS!*
Nasoon ~ Yeah, Red sounds better and is easier ta spell. Thanks for the tip! *GLOMPS!*
K'han ~ You. I don't know what ta say to you except THANK YOU!!!!! *GLOMPS!!!!!* You were the very first person ta review for me! Oh! Thank for the motivation on the last chappy, too! *wink*
Disclaimer: I don't own Final Fantasy 7. I wish I did, I know someday I won't, just lay off and don't sue me.
Vincent trudged along, leaning on the wall of the canyon for support. He still couldn't help but think that someone or something was following him. 'I really wish I had cure. This pain is too much.' Vincent was pulled from his thoughts by an earsplitting shriek. He turned around quickly, being rewarded with a major burst of pain. Vincent winced and got down on one knee, heaving and grasping his pained sides. He looked up through hazy eyes and saw a shadowy creature approach him. Before he could see its face, he blacked out.
About the same time as the above.
The group, minus Cloud, Cait Sith, and Sid, were sitting out under the stars when they heard a loud crunch behind them. Everyone turned to the open space where the Highwind had been. A giant Monster reared and let out an ear-piercing screech. Yuffie screamed at the pain and Barret "accidentally" hit her on the head and shut her up. The monster landed with a thud and got ready to charge the group. The group pulled their weapons out and got ready for battle. Barret gave an exasperated moan and prepared for battle. "Of course! They start to attack once Cloud leaves!" "Suck it up, Barret!" After yelling at Barret, she focused her attention on the current battle.
Back to Vincent.
Vincent's eyes fluttered open. He stared into nothingness, waiting for his eyes to adjust to the dim, light-like thing above his head. Once his eyes were adjusted, he looked around. It was pitch black! He had adjusted his eyes for nothing! 'Damnit!' He started to get up, expecting to receive his usual reward of severe pain, and wasn't. The pain was gone! Vincent was relieved, and then turned to where the light had been. A monster stood next him, odd tentacle-like thing with a light on the tip atop its head. Vincent reached for his gun on his belt. It was gone! Vincent got up with a bound and turned, ready for a fistfight to the death. He was rewarded with a hand, offering his gun. "Yours?" Vincent looked at his gun and then at the monster. Do to the little light atop its head, Vincent's eyes couldn't adjust to see its face. "Yes, thank you. Who or what are you?" The creature seemed to tilt its head at the question, as if he didn't understand. Vincent shook his head in disbelief. Vincent packed his gun in his belts and looked up at the creature. Vincent sweat dropped and bowed. He then turned and left the cave-like place the creature had brought him. Shortly after he left, Vincent heard heavy footsteps behind him. He turned and saw the creature. "Me? You?" Vincent shook his head. "No." Vin turned and took one step, to be echoed by another. The creature was still there! Vincent turned. "N-O, No." "Me? You? Yes?" "No." "Yes?" "No." "Yes?" Vincent threw his human arm into the air and turned to walk on. "Fine, but I'm not going to take care of you." The two walked on through the canyon.
And to the group.
Yuffie fell back on the sand, happy to be alive. Barret walked over to the edge of the canyon with Red. "I wonder if he's still alive. It looks kind of deep." Red looked down into the canyon. "Vincent's not that week, Barret. I know he's still alive." Barret sighed. "We can hope so." Red turned and headed back to the fire. Barret looked down into the canyon again. 'Hoping is all we can do for now.'
Well? Good? Bad? Ideas are welcome. PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!! Arigatou. Now for the thank you's to 4 people.
Koko Kung ~ I'm glad you're reading it! *GLOMPS!* Thank you, I'm glad you think it's good. I changed the rating for you, thanks for the tip! I know you're right about it, too! *smile*
Split_Coas ~ Thanks a ton for the help with Red XI's name! See? I continued! *GLOMPS!*
Nasoon ~ Yeah, Red sounds better and is easier ta spell. Thanks for the tip! *GLOMPS!*
K'han ~ You. I don't know what ta say to you except THANK YOU!!!!! *GLOMPS!!!!!* You were the very first person ta review for me! Oh! Thank for the motivation on the last chappy, too! *wink*
