Author's Note: I am changing my dialogue style so that you do not
get confused
Holy s-t! Chris ran out the door
with his pistol, following the guy who just took the computer. Chris shot
at the guy three times ,but missed. Then he ran out the door started his
car up ,and followed the guy.
The guy shot at Chris's left arm ,but missed. Chris aimed for the guys tire, and nailed it. The guys car went spinning out of control ,and hit a wall. Chris walked over to the car, and opened the door, all there was, was a bit of blood ,and a gun. No computer no jacka-s said Chris furiously.
Chris was in some hot water right now. Chris went back to the apartment, and grabbed his cellular phone, and left. He went inside his car, then went to the mall. When he arrived at the mall he went to get some food, and clothes. He went to GAP, bought some jeans, and a Hawaiian shirt. Then he went to the Pizzeria.
Chris: Hey I want a small individual pizza, and a Pepsi.
Pizza girl: OK that will total out to $6.00 please.
Chris: (Gives her six dollars) Here.
Pizza girl: (Givs Chris a recipe) Your order will be ready in about fifteen minutes, thankyou.
Suddenly his cell phone rings. *ring ring ring*
Chris: (presses talk) How do you know where I am!?
Jose: Never mind that I need you to get out of there now for some reason a gang knows where you ,and where I am.
Chris: I might have something to do with that.
Jose: WHAT!!!?,what the he------, you know what forget it just get the hell out of there now!!
Chris goes to the exit of the mall when suddenly he notices a group of people all dressed in black, and he sees a lot of guns in their hands. He notices the exit is gaurded by them also so he goes to the back exit, gaurded also.
Chris: Shit shit!
Chris: (presses *69 on his phone)
Jose: Hello?
Chris: They are gaurding the exits!
Jose: Oh,no go to the Cigar shop I know the guy that owns it and ask him if you can use his back door ,and if he does not believe you just let him talk to me.
Chris: (runs to the cigar shop) Hey can I use your back door.
Cigarshop owner: Use the regular exit
Chris: There are gang members gaurding the exits.
Cigarshop owner: What do you know about that!
Chris: Here a friend of your is on the phone ,and wants to talk to you
Cigarshop owner: Hello?
Jose: Look Fred let my man out he is with us Cubans
Cigarshop owner: heh heh heh I am not Fred I am with the Black robe gang ,and my name is Jason heh heh heh.
Jose: O s-t Chris get out of there!!!
Chris: So he told you right?
Jason: Sorry ,but there is no way out(knocks Chris out with his shotgun)
Author's Note: Oh, no Chris got tricked what is going to happen next! Reviews are wanted.
The guy shot at Chris's left arm ,but missed. Chris aimed for the guys tire, and nailed it. The guys car went spinning out of control ,and hit a wall. Chris walked over to the car, and opened the door, all there was, was a bit of blood ,and a gun. No computer no jacka-s said Chris furiously.
Chris was in some hot water right now. Chris went back to the apartment, and grabbed his cellular phone, and left. He went inside his car, then went to the mall. When he arrived at the mall he went to get some food, and clothes. He went to GAP, bought some jeans, and a Hawaiian shirt. Then he went to the Pizzeria.
Chris: Hey I want a small individual pizza, and a Pepsi.
Pizza girl: OK that will total out to $6.00 please.
Chris: (Gives her six dollars) Here.
Pizza girl: (Givs Chris a recipe) Your order will be ready in about fifteen minutes, thankyou.
Suddenly his cell phone rings. *ring ring ring*
Chris: (presses talk) How do you know where I am!?
Jose: Never mind that I need you to get out of there now for some reason a gang knows where you ,and where I am.
Chris: I might have something to do with that.
Jose: WHAT!!!?,what the he------, you know what forget it just get the hell out of there now!!
Chris goes to the exit of the mall when suddenly he notices a group of people all dressed in black, and he sees a lot of guns in their hands. He notices the exit is gaurded by them also so he goes to the back exit, gaurded also.
Chris: Shit shit!
Chris: (presses *69 on his phone)
Jose: Hello?
Chris: They are gaurding the exits!
Jose: Oh,no go to the Cigar shop I know the guy that owns it and ask him if you can use his back door ,and if he does not believe you just let him talk to me.
Chris: (runs to the cigar shop) Hey can I use your back door.
Cigarshop owner: Use the regular exit
Chris: There are gang members gaurding the exits.
Cigarshop owner: What do you know about that!
Chris: Here a friend of your is on the phone ,and wants to talk to you
Cigarshop owner: Hello?
Jose: Look Fred let my man out he is with us Cubans
Cigarshop owner: heh heh heh I am not Fred I am with the Black robe gang ,and my name is Jason heh heh heh.
Jose: O s-t Chris get out of there!!!
Chris: So he told you right?
Jason: Sorry ,but there is no way out(knocks Chris out with his shotgun)
Author's Note: Oh, no Chris got tricked what is going to happen next! Reviews are wanted.
