Thanks Sapphira for the review....it lets me know that at least someone is reading this. Please tell me whether I should keep writing or not.
Yes, I am going into the unknown by killing off Sophia but somebody had to try....
don't get me wrong. Sophia and Luke are my two absolute favourite characters and
that's why I made the replaceement an identical twin. She has the same personallity
as Sophia but she is stronger and more defiant due to the Change. I hope that
because of the Sophia thing, people will still read this. I picked Sophie because I
didn't want to go far from the original.
*= Sophia's thoughts=*
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Chapter 3: If I Fall
She couldn't take it anymore so she ran. She ran as images kept floating
through her mind. Luke in his wolven pelt. John laughing at some joke Sophia had
made. Presley as she told Sophia that Luke would lose interest as soon as she
flipped. Then the worst one hit her, as all the emotions rushed through her. As the
image of Luke and Presley's bodies entangle together swam before her eyes, she
fell to the ground... clutching her heart. Her every breath was torture as she stayed
kneeling on the ground. She had lost track of time when she heard and smelled Luke
coming up behind her. She quickly submerged the images to the back of her mind
and turned her venomous eyes towards him. "That was you last night... wasn't it,"
he asked softly. She turned away from the hurt she saw in his eyes. He had no right
to feel like that after what he did to Sophia... what he did to them. *But he never
ment to hurt us Sophie. Let him meet us on the grounds that I left... we are stronger as one.* He stepped around her so they were facing each other. "I heard what your father said... that you were linked to Sophia... then you must know everything she did..." he trailed off. She looked away, "It seems so long ago... it took so long for me to get here but the sceanery was worth it. I'm afraid of being alone without Sophia. I was never really alone at any time in my life. I thought I had it in me to be strong for both of us... I used to be so sure. There I was, stronger then ever... and now... here I am... blaming her for dieing and letting me live. She shouldn't have done it. She had SO much more to live for. You're right... it was me last night. Just before she started to change... when she was kissing Scott... she came in screaming and I never stopped to listen to her one wish... a place for her somewhere in this world where she could belong... It's only now that I realize that it's my wish too. It seems so easy now to just stay inside a shell... everything I dreamed about when I was a child... it looks like a good place here if you take away the past... I think I'll stay for a while." He smiled slightly, "You really are like her. She was strong and she cared about the world around her." Sophie sighed and whispered to herself, "And if I fall, I will find a way to my hands. I'm the only one who can help me find my feet again." He looked at her in confusion, "What?" She shook her head. "It's a twin thing... Sophia came up with it. It means that when your down, your twin always knows how to chear you up... and you can do the same for them. Therefore... and if I fall, I will find a way back to my hands. I'm the only one who can help me find my feet again." She sighed deeply again, "Nevermind, just leave me alone... you've hurt me enough by hurting my sister... I feel what she feels,
remember? Or have you lost that in your sudden lust? After all, I am exactly like Sophia and she lives through me. So you think that hitting on me won't be hurting her memory... you're wrong." *But he's right. I knew that it wasn't meant to be. I knew and that's why you lived... it's all in the prophecy... just ask Sherman.* With that, Sophie started to walk away but Luke grabbed her arm.
Presley watched as Luke grabbed onto the girl's arm. Sophie looked just
like Sophia but stronger and more defiant. She watched as the girl twirled around, a
growl coming from deep in her throat and fangs had appeared in her mouth. Within
a blink of the eye, Luke had five deep gashes on his cheek. She ran out from where
she was hiding and stepped infront of a shocked Luke. He hadn't expected Sophie's
reaction to be like that. A sneer spread across Sophie's face, "I see your fuck buddie has finally decided to join us instead of spying." *Ouch, one hit on the pride for our team. Finally, she gets a phrase she can't react to.* It was Presley's turn to show her shock at how Sophie had known she was there and how she would say that outloud. Sophie looked past her and at Luke with another growl, "Never ever try to make me do something I don't want to." *You do realize that he is going to be even more attracted to you..... right?* Shut up. With that, Sophie left and Presley turned to Luke. The cuts were deep, a symbol of another's pain to her people. He was glaring at her, "I thought I told you we were over?" He stomped off in the opposite direction of Sophie, away from the lake. Presley watched him leave as a single thought raged through her mind. No one takes my man that easily... even if they are the walking dead.
Sophie was running through the woods, following her sister's scent. The
moon was full and a thick layer of mist covered the ground. The trees stopped but
she still ran with the ground underneath her. The next moment, she was falling but then, she grabbed the edge of a cliff. The moon disappeared as the sun started to rise with its oranges, pinks and purples. Her sister grabbed a hold of her arm, "Stop
blaming him... it wasn't me who was destined to be his mate... it was you. I'm not
here to catch you if you fall... live freely, little sister." With that, Sophia released
Sophie's arm and she fell. The next thing Sophie knew, she was sitting upright in a
bed. She was in her sister's bedroom. She sighed as the contents of her dream
swam back to her. She lay back down and groaned as she turned onto her side.
She looked out the window into the night thinking, what if I fall? *Then he will catch you.*
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AUTHOR'S NOTES:
I repeat... Sophie is just like Sophia but with the changes that the flip would bring. Luke is not heartless, he is in love with Sophie because it was meant to be and she carries her sister's essance within her. Sophia will be making little comments throughout the story. She always bugged Sophie like Luke bugged her... only on a more sisterly level. Sophia was strong... so is Sophie, Sophia always had a few weak moments so why can't Sophie? (The name thing is starting to get kinda confusing... oh well....)
Yes, I am going into the unknown by killing off Sophia but somebody had to try....
don't get me wrong. Sophia and Luke are my two absolute favourite characters and
that's why I made the replaceement an identical twin. She has the same personallity
as Sophia but she is stronger and more defiant due to the Change. I hope that
because of the Sophia thing, people will still read this. I picked Sophie because I
didn't want to go far from the original.
*= Sophia's thoughts=*
***************************************************************
Chapter 3: If I Fall
She couldn't take it anymore so she ran. She ran as images kept floating
through her mind. Luke in his wolven pelt. John laughing at some joke Sophia had
made. Presley as she told Sophia that Luke would lose interest as soon as she
flipped. Then the worst one hit her, as all the emotions rushed through her. As the
image of Luke and Presley's bodies entangle together swam before her eyes, she
fell to the ground... clutching her heart. Her every breath was torture as she stayed
kneeling on the ground. She had lost track of time when she heard and smelled Luke
coming up behind her. She quickly submerged the images to the back of her mind
and turned her venomous eyes towards him. "That was you last night... wasn't it,"
he asked softly. She turned away from the hurt she saw in his eyes. He had no right
to feel like that after what he did to Sophia... what he did to them. *But he never
ment to hurt us Sophie. Let him meet us on the grounds that I left... we are stronger as one.* He stepped around her so they were facing each other. "I heard what your father said... that you were linked to Sophia... then you must know everything she did..." he trailed off. She looked away, "It seems so long ago... it took so long for me to get here but the sceanery was worth it. I'm afraid of being alone without Sophia. I was never really alone at any time in my life. I thought I had it in me to be strong for both of us... I used to be so sure. There I was, stronger then ever... and now... here I am... blaming her for dieing and letting me live. She shouldn't have done it. She had SO much more to live for. You're right... it was me last night. Just before she started to change... when she was kissing Scott... she came in screaming and I never stopped to listen to her one wish... a place for her somewhere in this world where she could belong... It's only now that I realize that it's my wish too. It seems so easy now to just stay inside a shell... everything I dreamed about when I was a child... it looks like a good place here if you take away the past... I think I'll stay for a while." He smiled slightly, "You really are like her. She was strong and she cared about the world around her." Sophie sighed and whispered to herself, "And if I fall, I will find a way to my hands. I'm the only one who can help me find my feet again." He looked at her in confusion, "What?" She shook her head. "It's a twin thing... Sophia came up with it. It means that when your down, your twin always knows how to chear you up... and you can do the same for them. Therefore... and if I fall, I will find a way back to my hands. I'm the only one who can help me find my feet again." She sighed deeply again, "Nevermind, just leave me alone... you've hurt me enough by hurting my sister... I feel what she feels,
remember? Or have you lost that in your sudden lust? After all, I am exactly like Sophia and she lives through me. So you think that hitting on me won't be hurting her memory... you're wrong." *But he's right. I knew that it wasn't meant to be. I knew and that's why you lived... it's all in the prophecy... just ask Sherman.* With that, Sophie started to walk away but Luke grabbed her arm.
Presley watched as Luke grabbed onto the girl's arm. Sophie looked just
like Sophia but stronger and more defiant. She watched as the girl twirled around, a
growl coming from deep in her throat and fangs had appeared in her mouth. Within
a blink of the eye, Luke had five deep gashes on his cheek. She ran out from where
she was hiding and stepped infront of a shocked Luke. He hadn't expected Sophie's
reaction to be like that. A sneer spread across Sophie's face, "I see your fuck buddie has finally decided to join us instead of spying." *Ouch, one hit on the pride for our team. Finally, she gets a phrase she can't react to.* It was Presley's turn to show her shock at how Sophie had known she was there and how she would say that outloud. Sophie looked past her and at Luke with another growl, "Never ever try to make me do something I don't want to." *You do realize that he is going to be even more attracted to you..... right?* Shut up. With that, Sophie left and Presley turned to Luke. The cuts were deep, a symbol of another's pain to her people. He was glaring at her, "I thought I told you we were over?" He stomped off in the opposite direction of Sophie, away from the lake. Presley watched him leave as a single thought raged through her mind. No one takes my man that easily... even if they are the walking dead.
Sophie was running through the woods, following her sister's scent. The
moon was full and a thick layer of mist covered the ground. The trees stopped but
she still ran with the ground underneath her. The next moment, she was falling but then, she grabbed the edge of a cliff. The moon disappeared as the sun started to rise with its oranges, pinks and purples. Her sister grabbed a hold of her arm, "Stop
blaming him... it wasn't me who was destined to be his mate... it was you. I'm not
here to catch you if you fall... live freely, little sister." With that, Sophia released
Sophie's arm and she fell. The next thing Sophie knew, she was sitting upright in a
bed. She was in her sister's bedroom. She sighed as the contents of her dream
swam back to her. She lay back down and groaned as she turned onto her side.
She looked out the window into the night thinking, what if I fall? *Then he will catch you.*
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AUTHOR'S NOTES:
I repeat... Sophie is just like Sophia but with the changes that the flip would bring. Luke is not heartless, he is in love with Sophie because it was meant to be and she carries her sister's essance within her. Sophia will be making little comments throughout the story. She always bugged Sophie like Luke bugged her... only on a more sisterly level. Sophia was strong... so is Sophie, Sophia always had a few weak moments so why can't Sophie? (The name thing is starting to get kinda confusing... oh well....)
