HI! Well today a friend of mine would like to give a few comments.
Sidra turned around to see who it was. She saw a handsome looking man, the one she loved the most, Seth. "Good (not so good to me) evening, Seth,"
"Good evening to you too," he said smiling (smiling?!) and now a serious look comes on his face.
"My dear, as you know, both Yami and I wish to have your heart (so cut it out & take it) but I will be the one who will get it so for that Yami and I will duel and the one who wins will win, (win.a PS2!) your heart (Oh, so now her heart is a prize?) as I will win your heart!!" he said.
Sidra was puzzled (as always) "But Seth (O!) you can't (who is she to say)" She said. "And why not? I'm the high priest (high baka) and have the right, I will be back soon," Seth left leaving Sidra alone on the Nile. The sun setting, night coming, and the journey just the beginning.
A/N- Done! I know this is a short fic but I really don't have time for this, once my exams are over I'm sure everyday I will be updating.
Sidra turned around to see who it was. She saw a handsome looking man, the one she loved the most, Seth. "Good (not so good to me) evening, Seth,"
"Good evening to you too," he said smiling (smiling?!) and now a serious look comes on his face.
"My dear, as you know, both Yami and I wish to have your heart (so cut it out & take it) but I will be the one who will get it so for that Yami and I will duel and the one who wins will win, (win.a PS2!) your heart (Oh, so now her heart is a prize?) as I will win your heart!!" he said.
Sidra was puzzled (as always) "But Seth (O!) you can't (who is she to say)" She said. "And why not? I'm the high priest (high baka) and have the right, I will be back soon," Seth left leaving Sidra alone on the Nile. The sun setting, night coming, and the journey just the beginning.
A/N- Done! I know this is a short fic but I really don't have time for this, once my exams are over I'm sure everyday I will be updating.
