Trying to Be Free
Allo allo everyone! Sorry I didn't update last night, I had to study for a huge test today at school (don't worry, I did well ^_~). And I'd also like to apologise for the last chapter as well. I know I said it was going to be long, but I guess it wasn't as long as I had hoped. I swear it looked longer when I was writing it! On another note, I'd also like to thank the following people for their kind reviews for chapter 6 -
1- Mizu_Tenshi
2- Shadow Shi13
3- Elbereth Gilthoniel
4- Epona
5- raven
6- Emilychan
7- Anime the Fallen Angel ((I take it you like Kai as much as me!))
8- Sapphire Luna
I greatly appreciate the nice comments, and I only hope you leave more for the last two upcoming chapters. Well, I've jabbered on long enough, on with the fic!
Disclaimer: Me no own Beyblade u.u;
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"It couldn't be . . .I'm just losing it . . ." Kai said to himself, shaking his head slightly. But his clone had heard him saying this, and only smirked as he continued walking steadily closer.
"Yes, you are losing it. I suggest you start begging for mercy now, because who knows . . .I just might make your death quick and painless." Then the double did something very unusual. He turned to the side, formed his hand into a fist, and punched what seemed to be nothing more then air. But what Kai didn't suspect was that the punch had indeed, hit something.
A loud shattering sound bounded off the 'walls' of the realm and met Kai's reddened ears. His eyes widened, and he craned his neck around, just on time to see his clone stoop down and pick up a large piece of glass.
"Glass? What the hell?!" our phoenix cried, snapping out of it and forcing himself to stand up. He was, indeed, in a terrible amount of pain, but as we all know, Kai is stubborn. Gritting his teeth at his close-drawing opponent, he could only wonder if he was fighting a losing battle.
"Yes, bakamono, it's glass!" Kai's double stating, somehow managing to grasp the glass tightly in his hand without being cut. "It's what was keeping you from breaking down! Don't forget, this world is nothing more than a reflection of your own personal self."
That's when it finally hit Kai. He looked around, only to find that his double was right. Everything was dark and cold on the outside, just like him. But on the inside, there was nothing but a large void . . .emptiness. And like most other people, the passageway between the darkness and the emptiness was nothing more then a simple layer of glass. Glass which had just been shattered.
"C'mon Kai, wake up!" Rei's voice suddenly said again, echoing through Kai's empty realm.
"Rei? Rei, where are you?" Our slate-haired teen cried, looking around for where his friend's voice had sounded, but unfortunately, nothing notable met his gaze. And before he managed to turn his look back to his opponent, he felt an unexpected pain immediately shoot through his entire body.
Kai had let out a sudden gasp of agony. His hands instantly shot up to where the pain had come from, and were greeted by an abrupt flowing of red blood. Our phoenix had been stabbed on the side of his stomach. Why his clone didn't go for the chest, he didn't know; but all he did know was that this was the worst pain he had ever felt.
But although he was in a massive amount of pain, Kai refused to let himself fall again. He couldn't . . .and he wouldn't. So darting quickly to his clone's side, he had successfully managed to kick the glass out of his hand, then throw him to the ground mercilessly. He let out another loud moan of pain, and continued to tightly grasp his open wound.
Even though he was on the ground, our phoenix's counterpart was laughing. He instantly jumped back to his feet, his dark crimson eyes narrowing at Kai once again.
"You fool! I've told you from the beginning that I'm better then you, and obviously I have proven it -"
"Then why didn't you kill me just now?" Kai interrupted. "Why didn't you stab me through the chest and got it over and done with?"
His double just smiles evilly and crossed his arms. "Because I want to see you suffer. Would you think for a mom -" But he was cut of there, for Kai had a sudden flash.
Rei and Tyson were standing in front of him. The tank he was being contained in was broken and jaded, the red liquid was spilled all over the floor, and the needled that were once in his arms were hanging by wires slightly overhead.
But, as quick as it came, it disappeared again. His one chance to leave this horrible place was gone.
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Eep, sorry for the quick ending there, but I gotta get to bed. I have to wake up early tomorrow morning . . .5:30 am! Well, as always, please review. You know I love getting them. See everyone in the last chapter! Yes, it's ending in the next chapter, and like my 'Complicated' fic, the ending is something like a cliff-hanger. If you guys are nice enough, I might consider writing a sequel! Ta-ta! ^_~
Allo allo everyone! Sorry I didn't update last night, I had to study for a huge test today at school (don't worry, I did well ^_~). And I'd also like to apologise for the last chapter as well. I know I said it was going to be long, but I guess it wasn't as long as I had hoped. I swear it looked longer when I was writing it! On another note, I'd also like to thank the following people for their kind reviews for chapter 6 -
1- Mizu_Tenshi
2- Shadow Shi13
3- Elbereth Gilthoniel
4- Epona
5- raven
6- Emilychan
7- Anime the Fallen Angel ((I take it you like Kai as much as me!))
8- Sapphire Luna
I greatly appreciate the nice comments, and I only hope you leave more for the last two upcoming chapters. Well, I've jabbered on long enough, on with the fic!
Disclaimer: Me no own Beyblade u.u;
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"It couldn't be . . .I'm just losing it . . ." Kai said to himself, shaking his head slightly. But his clone had heard him saying this, and only smirked as he continued walking steadily closer.
"Yes, you are losing it. I suggest you start begging for mercy now, because who knows . . .I just might make your death quick and painless." Then the double did something very unusual. He turned to the side, formed his hand into a fist, and punched what seemed to be nothing more then air. But what Kai didn't suspect was that the punch had indeed, hit something.
A loud shattering sound bounded off the 'walls' of the realm and met Kai's reddened ears. His eyes widened, and he craned his neck around, just on time to see his clone stoop down and pick up a large piece of glass.
"Glass? What the hell?!" our phoenix cried, snapping out of it and forcing himself to stand up. He was, indeed, in a terrible amount of pain, but as we all know, Kai is stubborn. Gritting his teeth at his close-drawing opponent, he could only wonder if he was fighting a losing battle.
"Yes, bakamono, it's glass!" Kai's double stating, somehow managing to grasp the glass tightly in his hand without being cut. "It's what was keeping you from breaking down! Don't forget, this world is nothing more than a reflection of your own personal self."
That's when it finally hit Kai. He looked around, only to find that his double was right. Everything was dark and cold on the outside, just like him. But on the inside, there was nothing but a large void . . .emptiness. And like most other people, the passageway between the darkness and the emptiness was nothing more then a simple layer of glass. Glass which had just been shattered.
"C'mon Kai, wake up!" Rei's voice suddenly said again, echoing through Kai's empty realm.
"Rei? Rei, where are you?" Our slate-haired teen cried, looking around for where his friend's voice had sounded, but unfortunately, nothing notable met his gaze. And before he managed to turn his look back to his opponent, he felt an unexpected pain immediately shoot through his entire body.
Kai had let out a sudden gasp of agony. His hands instantly shot up to where the pain had come from, and were greeted by an abrupt flowing of red blood. Our phoenix had been stabbed on the side of his stomach. Why his clone didn't go for the chest, he didn't know; but all he did know was that this was the worst pain he had ever felt.
But although he was in a massive amount of pain, Kai refused to let himself fall again. He couldn't . . .and he wouldn't. So darting quickly to his clone's side, he had successfully managed to kick the glass out of his hand, then throw him to the ground mercilessly. He let out another loud moan of pain, and continued to tightly grasp his open wound.
Even though he was on the ground, our phoenix's counterpart was laughing. He instantly jumped back to his feet, his dark crimson eyes narrowing at Kai once again.
"You fool! I've told you from the beginning that I'm better then you, and obviously I have proven it -"
"Then why didn't you kill me just now?" Kai interrupted. "Why didn't you stab me through the chest and got it over and done with?"
His double just smiles evilly and crossed his arms. "Because I want to see you suffer. Would you think for a mom -" But he was cut of there, for Kai had a sudden flash.
Rei and Tyson were standing in front of him. The tank he was being contained in was broken and jaded, the red liquid was spilled all over the floor, and the needled that were once in his arms were hanging by wires slightly overhead.
But, as quick as it came, it disappeared again. His one chance to leave this horrible place was gone.
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Eep, sorry for the quick ending there, but I gotta get to bed. I have to wake up early tomorrow morning . . .5:30 am! Well, as always, please review. You know I love getting them. See everyone in the last chapter! Yes, it's ending in the next chapter, and like my 'Complicated' fic, the ending is something like a cliff-hanger. If you guys are nice enough, I might consider writing a sequel! Ta-ta! ^_~
