Love Hina
Keitaro's Past
By: Belldandy'sKeiichi
Note: [any text in here is a thought text]
Disclaimer: You know the drill, I don't own dittley squat of Love Hina. I DO own one character…no, I don't own Shinobu…I wish I did though…
Author's Time: Based on one of my older fanfics on my other pen name. Just a conversion of names, re-writing the scrip, and changing the personality, and we have a story! Here's the deal, this is only the intro. Review, e-mail, IM me, if you like the story, and I'll continue it.
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Chapter 1: Welcome to the Hinata House
"This is nice…" Keitaro laid back on the roof of the Hinata House with Naru. "It is, isn't it Keitaro." Keitaro turned his head towards her. "Yeah…especially if it's with you…" "O Keitaro…" They moved closer to each other "Naru…"
"KEITARO! WAKE UP!" Naru screamed at him. Suddenly, Keitaro jolted up and started to look around. [Damn…it was a dream…] He thought to himself, scratching his head. "Come on, breakfast is ready. Hurry your lazy ass!" Naru left the room and Keitaro just stared at the door. [It's summer…I've known Naru for 2 years and yet…can't tell if she love me or not…anywho, breakfast is ready.] Keitaro got up and walk towards the kitchen.
"Hi Sempai!" Shinobu greeted him. "Did you sleep well?" Keitaro looked at her and smiled. "Yeah…slept like a baby…" "Probably because you are one…" Sarah said. Everyone started eating. "Hey Keitaro, that reminds me…well all going out for awhile." Kitsune told him. "Hmm? Where are you all going?" Keitaro asked. "O you know…just out…look around." "Then why can't I come?" "Because you have chores to do!" Naru cut in pointing to the mop and pail. "Aww…your kidding me right?" "Alright! Later Keitaro!" They shouted as they made their way to the door. "What! Wait! You're leaving right now?" "O and Keitaro! Watch the dishes! Later!" Naru called back at him. Keitaro turned around to see the sink full of dirty dished. "O my god! Today isn't going to turn out as planned…
"Whew…all done…" Keitaro dropped down in his room. He reached into the shelf and picked out a binder. "Heh…my album…" He flipped through the pages laughing at the fun memories that he, Naru, and the other borders had. "Hey, here's a picture from the beach! And here's one from the cherry blossom festival!" Keitaro fell in silence. "Now that I think about it…me and Naru haven't talked to each other lately…ever since Tokyo U…" He continued flipping through the album when the old telephone rang. Keitaro walked over and picked up the receiver. "Hello…you have reached the Hinata House. You are talking to the landlord who doesn't have a life…May I help you?" There was no response for 10 seconds. "Um…yeah, well, I like to stay there for a week or two…do you have any rooms available?" "Well…we do, but let me warn you, this dormitory is filled with a lot of interesting people plus you have to contribute to the work around the house." "O that's fine! I get along well with interesting people…" Keitaro stayed silent. "…and about the chores…I think I can handle it! Speaking of which, isn't it a girl's dormitory? Why is a guy like you running a girl's dormitory?" "Um…long story. So when are you coming over?" There was a long pause. "Um…first, I want to see this place for myself before I move in, so is tomorrow ok?" Keitaro thought about it for awhile. "Sure, why not." "Alright! I'll be there in the afternoon, see you then!" Click! Keitaro put the receiver down. "Looks like we're getting a new border…" He sat back down and picked up the album. He continued looking through it when a certain picture caught his eye. He took it out and stared at that one picture. [Ahh…high school life, how I miss you. Sure I wasn't the brightest or the coolest…but there was that one girl at always stood by my side…] Keitaro stood in the picture with a girl on his right side. The girl was about he's height, golden brown hair with brown eyes, and as fit as any girl can be. "Now that I think about it…I wonder what ever happened to her…" He closed the album and placed it back in the shelf. He walked to his window to see that everyone's home. "Well…looks like they're back. Looks like I have to tell them that someone is going to stay with us for awhile."
The next day…
"So Keitaro, who did you lure to make them stay here?" Kitsune asked. "I didn't lure anyone here Kitsune…she just called yesterday and she's coming today to check out the place." "Well…if what you said is true, she is going to help out around the house then?" Motoko said cutting it. "Yeah." "Well…I guess I can't complain then…" Motoko reasoned. "Neither can I…" Kitsune agreed. "Yay! We're going to have a new play mate!" Su cheered. "Well…if she likes the place, she'll stay, so don't mess things up alright?" "Ok!" They all said. "Well…if you don't mind, I'm going out for a walk…" Naru waved them good-bye. "So you're not going to stay and see what the girl looks like?" "It's ok…I'll pass…" She said back. "Well…alright…bye Naru." Keitaro said under his breathe.
[A new border is going to join huh…well, if she does stay…I better warn her about that pervert Keitaro…] Naru thought to herself as she walked along the sidewalk. As she was walking along, a small dog ran through her legs, tripping Naru. "Ma'am! Watch out!" someone call as she was about to walking onto a busy road. A car was coming right for her when someone pulled her out of the way at the nick of time. Naru fell down, trying to relax. "O, thank you very much! You saved my life!" "Don't mention it…" is all she said and walked away. Naru watched as the girl that just saved her life walk away.
"Let's see…it's almost 12:30," Keitaro waited on the couch, "…she should be here…" "Hello? Anyone here?" someone called at the door. "Ah, yes, come in." Keitaro invited her in. When Keitaro get a look at her, he just froze. "O my god! Keitaro! You're the land lord?!"
"Anyone home?" Naru called as she walked inside. "O hey Naru, you just missed her." Kitsune said. "Who?" Naru said. "The new border…she's moving in tomorrow." Naru looked around and saw Keitaro walking upstairs. "Hey Keitaro!" She called to him but he didn't respond. "Hey Keitaro...hello? You in there?" She called baack but still no response. [I wonder what's up with Keitaro…]
Naru laid on the floor in her room. [That's odd…Keitaro's been acting strange ever since the new border came to see the place…I wonder what happened…] She got up and walked over to the hole in her floor. "Hey Keitaro! You there?" No response. "Hello? Are you in there?" Still no response. "Well…I'm coming in anyways!" Naru jumped from her room and fell right into Keitaro's room. "Heh…looks like he wasn't here after all…" Naru was about to leave when she notice that book was sticking out of the book shelf. Naru picked it out looked at the cover. "Ack! Keitaro's journal…Keitaro has a journal? Hahaha! He keeps a diary!" She laughed. "Well…even if he did keep a diary…I shouldn't read it…" Naru took the book and was about to place it back but she tripped and the book fell open in front of her eyes. "Nooo!" she closed her eyes but curiosity stuck and she peeked. (Note: |any text in here is the journal entry| )
|Since yesterday…I guess I have been thinking a lot about my past…| Naru glanced and suddenly she picked up the book and sat down reading it. |Sure…I don't have a lot of good memories about my high school life…but there is one girl that always by my side.| [One girl? Who's this one girl Keitaro's talking about?] Naru thought to herself as she read on. |She was probably my only friend that was a girl before meeting the Hinata girls…and Naru. She was there for me every time I was in a tight spot, needed some help, and even there just to talk to. Heh…I guess you can say that she's my girlfriend…| [Keitaro has a girlfriend?!] |And I was really surprised when she called out of the blue and wanted to stay here…| [Kyahhh! Keitaro's girlfriend is going to stay here?!] Then Naru looked up. "Uh oh…I here footsteps…Keitaro's coming back!" Naru hesitated and placed the book back where she got it and jumped back into the hole. Keitaro walked inside and got his journal. "Hmm…that's odd, my books all sweaty…" Naru quickly wiped her hands and leave the room. "Well…better finish up my entry…" Keitaro said, sitting down with the book. |But still…| he wrote. |even though she isn't really my girlfriend...sometimes I really do refer to her as a girlfriend. Can't wait to see her again tomorrow.| Keitaro closed the book and placed it back.
Naru sat outside her room. Down in the dumps. "Hey Naru, what's up?" Shinobu walked to her. "It's nothing Shinobu…It's nothing…" "Are you sure…it looks like your heart broken…" Shinobu sat next to her. "I'm fine Shinobu…" "Alright…" Shinobu got up and walked away. [What should I do…?] Naru thought to herself.
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Yeah I know…short right? Well you guys know the deal…review, IM me, drop me an e-mail say that you like it and I'll continue.
Keitaro's Past
By: Belldandy'sKeiichi
Note: [any text in here is a thought text]
Disclaimer: You know the drill, I don't own dittley squat of Love Hina. I DO own one character…no, I don't own Shinobu…I wish I did though…
Author's Time: Based on one of my older fanfics on my other pen name. Just a conversion of names, re-writing the scrip, and changing the personality, and we have a story! Here's the deal, this is only the intro. Review, e-mail, IM me, if you like the story, and I'll continue it.
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Chapter 1: Welcome to the Hinata House
"This is nice…" Keitaro laid back on the roof of the Hinata House with Naru. "It is, isn't it Keitaro." Keitaro turned his head towards her. "Yeah…especially if it's with you…" "O Keitaro…" They moved closer to each other "Naru…"
"KEITARO! WAKE UP!" Naru screamed at him. Suddenly, Keitaro jolted up and started to look around. [Damn…it was a dream…] He thought to himself, scratching his head. "Come on, breakfast is ready. Hurry your lazy ass!" Naru left the room and Keitaro just stared at the door. [It's summer…I've known Naru for 2 years and yet…can't tell if she love me or not…anywho, breakfast is ready.] Keitaro got up and walk towards the kitchen.
"Hi Sempai!" Shinobu greeted him. "Did you sleep well?" Keitaro looked at her and smiled. "Yeah…slept like a baby…" "Probably because you are one…" Sarah said. Everyone started eating. "Hey Keitaro, that reminds me…well all going out for awhile." Kitsune told him. "Hmm? Where are you all going?" Keitaro asked. "O you know…just out…look around." "Then why can't I come?" "Because you have chores to do!" Naru cut in pointing to the mop and pail. "Aww…your kidding me right?" "Alright! Later Keitaro!" They shouted as they made their way to the door. "What! Wait! You're leaving right now?" "O and Keitaro! Watch the dishes! Later!" Naru called back at him. Keitaro turned around to see the sink full of dirty dished. "O my god! Today isn't going to turn out as planned…
"Whew…all done…" Keitaro dropped down in his room. He reached into the shelf and picked out a binder. "Heh…my album…" He flipped through the pages laughing at the fun memories that he, Naru, and the other borders had. "Hey, here's a picture from the beach! And here's one from the cherry blossom festival!" Keitaro fell in silence. "Now that I think about it…me and Naru haven't talked to each other lately…ever since Tokyo U…" He continued flipping through the album when the old telephone rang. Keitaro walked over and picked up the receiver. "Hello…you have reached the Hinata House. You are talking to the landlord who doesn't have a life…May I help you?" There was no response for 10 seconds. "Um…yeah, well, I like to stay there for a week or two…do you have any rooms available?" "Well…we do, but let me warn you, this dormitory is filled with a lot of interesting people plus you have to contribute to the work around the house." "O that's fine! I get along well with interesting people…" Keitaro stayed silent. "…and about the chores…I think I can handle it! Speaking of which, isn't it a girl's dormitory? Why is a guy like you running a girl's dormitory?" "Um…long story. So when are you coming over?" There was a long pause. "Um…first, I want to see this place for myself before I move in, so is tomorrow ok?" Keitaro thought about it for awhile. "Sure, why not." "Alright! I'll be there in the afternoon, see you then!" Click! Keitaro put the receiver down. "Looks like we're getting a new border…" He sat back down and picked up the album. He continued looking through it when a certain picture caught his eye. He took it out and stared at that one picture. [Ahh…high school life, how I miss you. Sure I wasn't the brightest or the coolest…but there was that one girl at always stood by my side…] Keitaro stood in the picture with a girl on his right side. The girl was about he's height, golden brown hair with brown eyes, and as fit as any girl can be. "Now that I think about it…I wonder what ever happened to her…" He closed the album and placed it back in the shelf. He walked to his window to see that everyone's home. "Well…looks like they're back. Looks like I have to tell them that someone is going to stay with us for awhile."
The next day…
"So Keitaro, who did you lure to make them stay here?" Kitsune asked. "I didn't lure anyone here Kitsune…she just called yesterday and she's coming today to check out the place." "Well…if what you said is true, she is going to help out around the house then?" Motoko said cutting it. "Yeah." "Well…I guess I can't complain then…" Motoko reasoned. "Neither can I…" Kitsune agreed. "Yay! We're going to have a new play mate!" Su cheered. "Well…if she likes the place, she'll stay, so don't mess things up alright?" "Ok!" They all said. "Well…if you don't mind, I'm going out for a walk…" Naru waved them good-bye. "So you're not going to stay and see what the girl looks like?" "It's ok…I'll pass…" She said back. "Well…alright…bye Naru." Keitaro said under his breathe.
[A new border is going to join huh…well, if she does stay…I better warn her about that pervert Keitaro…] Naru thought to herself as she walked along the sidewalk. As she was walking along, a small dog ran through her legs, tripping Naru. "Ma'am! Watch out!" someone call as she was about to walking onto a busy road. A car was coming right for her when someone pulled her out of the way at the nick of time. Naru fell down, trying to relax. "O, thank you very much! You saved my life!" "Don't mention it…" is all she said and walked away. Naru watched as the girl that just saved her life walk away.
"Let's see…it's almost 12:30," Keitaro waited on the couch, "…she should be here…" "Hello? Anyone here?" someone called at the door. "Ah, yes, come in." Keitaro invited her in. When Keitaro get a look at her, he just froze. "O my god! Keitaro! You're the land lord?!"
"Anyone home?" Naru called as she walked inside. "O hey Naru, you just missed her." Kitsune said. "Who?" Naru said. "The new border…she's moving in tomorrow." Naru looked around and saw Keitaro walking upstairs. "Hey Keitaro!" She called to him but he didn't respond. "Hey Keitaro...hello? You in there?" She called baack but still no response. [I wonder what's up with Keitaro…]
Naru laid on the floor in her room. [That's odd…Keitaro's been acting strange ever since the new border came to see the place…I wonder what happened…] She got up and walked over to the hole in her floor. "Hey Keitaro! You there?" No response. "Hello? Are you in there?" Still no response. "Well…I'm coming in anyways!" Naru jumped from her room and fell right into Keitaro's room. "Heh…looks like he wasn't here after all…" Naru was about to leave when she notice that book was sticking out of the book shelf. Naru picked it out looked at the cover. "Ack! Keitaro's journal…Keitaro has a journal? Hahaha! He keeps a diary!" She laughed. "Well…even if he did keep a diary…I shouldn't read it…" Naru took the book and was about to place it back but she tripped and the book fell open in front of her eyes. "Nooo!" she closed her eyes but curiosity stuck and she peeked. (Note: |any text in here is the journal entry| )
|Since yesterday…I guess I have been thinking a lot about my past…| Naru glanced and suddenly she picked up the book and sat down reading it. |Sure…I don't have a lot of good memories about my high school life…but there is one girl that always by my side.| [One girl? Who's this one girl Keitaro's talking about?] Naru thought to herself as she read on. |She was probably my only friend that was a girl before meeting the Hinata girls…and Naru. She was there for me every time I was in a tight spot, needed some help, and even there just to talk to. Heh…I guess you can say that she's my girlfriend…| [Keitaro has a girlfriend?!] |And I was really surprised when she called out of the blue and wanted to stay here…| [Kyahhh! Keitaro's girlfriend is going to stay here?!] Then Naru looked up. "Uh oh…I here footsteps…Keitaro's coming back!" Naru hesitated and placed the book back where she got it and jumped back into the hole. Keitaro walked inside and got his journal. "Hmm…that's odd, my books all sweaty…" Naru quickly wiped her hands and leave the room. "Well…better finish up my entry…" Keitaro said, sitting down with the book. |But still…| he wrote. |even though she isn't really my girlfriend...sometimes I really do refer to her as a girlfriend. Can't wait to see her again tomorrow.| Keitaro closed the book and placed it back.
Naru sat outside her room. Down in the dumps. "Hey Naru, what's up?" Shinobu walked to her. "It's nothing Shinobu…It's nothing…" "Are you sure…it looks like your heart broken…" Shinobu sat next to her. "I'm fine Shinobu…" "Alright…" Shinobu got up and walked away. [What should I do…?] Naru thought to herself.
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Yeah I know…short right? Well you guys know the deal…review, IM me, drop me an e-mail say that you like it and I'll continue.
