Dn: i dont own nottin cept charlotte claudio, alexandria, the little are i made up, and the tittle.



LOTR Shrimp and lobster style Chapter one

I have a request:that everyone reviews me on the the story not on my grammer, spelling, or punctuaion. If i wanted you to do that i would have asked. Thank you.

~the shire...when Gandalf arrives~

The wheels creaked and were in tune with the horses footsteps and the old wizards singing. As it turns a hobbit appears at the side of the rode and the wagon stops.

Frodo:*crosses arms over chest* Your late.

Gandalf:*still looking down and the hat still covers his eyes* A wizard is never late Frodo Baggins.*looks up* Nor is he early. he arrives precicly when he means to.*nods*(AN: the writing program i am using has no spell check so bear with me)

They stand there staring at each other when they finnally drop their seriously ness and start to laugh.

Frodo: *jumps into the wagon and hugs gandalf*It's wonderful to see you Gandalf.

They continue talking and riding Then frodo jumps off and gandalf goes visits Bilbo. We all know what happens with Bilbo and Gandalf(only saw the movie), now to see what happens to Frodo after he leaves Gandalf.

Pippin and Merry: *run up to frodo* Frodo!!!

Frodo: Yes.

Pippin: Guess who's coming.

Fodo:*thinks* i give up*shruggs*Who?

Merry: Alex, Claudio, And..

pippin: Charlie!

Frodo:*very happy* I thought they could not come?

Pippin: They had a change in plans.

Sam:*walks up to the trio* Well whats going on here?

Frodo:*turns to sam* Our Elven friends have had a change in plans.

sam:*shocked and happy* Well bless their souls...lets go tell Bilbo and Gandalf.

~At bilbo's~

Frodo, Pippin, Merry, and Sam are poundign on Bilbo's door, inpatient to tell Bilbo the news.

Bilbo: Well hello young lads whats the rush? Come in come in.

Merry: There coming.

Bilbo: Who's coming?

Pippin:Charlie

SAm: Claudio

Frodo: and Alex

Gandalf: Well what a surprise.

They all hear a knock on the door, and Bilbo goes to answer it. there stand three cloacked figures the faces hidden well by there cloaks.

Bilbo: May i help you?

Figure 1: yes can you spare us some food?

figure 2: and some tea?

Figure 3: and a warm place to sleep?

Bilbo: I can spare you some food and drink but shelter i fear i have no room.

They all uncloak themselves.

Figure 1: Thats ok we were leaving for Bree after the party anyway.

Bilbo: Well bless your souls...............



I know short not that great with the grammer spelling. and punctuation, but like i said before i want the story to be reviewed not my grammer, spelling, and punctuation. Thanks for your reviews i appreciate them.

~Angel From Hell~