Hey every one sorry I had to repost this chapter. My computer messed up and
copied the same line about 10 times in a row. I didn't notice it until
after I posted it. SORRY.
Disclaimer: Oh Yeah and buy the way I don't own the Mummy or any of the Characters from it. Snif Snif
The city its self looked to be as old as the pyramids. "I didn't know the tour of all the Ancient Temples and Pyramids was going to take a whole month. It's a good thing I didn't have time to unpack anything last night. I'm gonna need it all on this tour." Eset said as she rummaged through her bags trying to figure out what to wear. She decided on a pair of black loose fitting pants and red baggy shirt. "Well I guess its time to go."
An hour later she found herself ridding a camel across the desert toward the Pyramids of Giza. A little while later Eset and her tour guide arrived atop a summit that gave them a perfect view of the three Pyramids of Giza. The site took Eset's breath away. "It's beautiful," was all she could say. "Isn't it?" the guide said. As Eset stared of into the distance she played with the Isis necklace she was wearing.
Her grandmother had given it to her when she was a child. She said that the necklace was older than the pyramids and held special powers that one-day Eset would discover for herself. Eset had never really believed the story but it had sparked her interest for Egypt.
She was brought back to the present be the tour guild speaking to her. "We must move on now," he said. "Oh, all right," she responded. Once again they headed off into the vast desert.
Hours later a city became visible on the horizon. This seemed to disturb the guide but Eset was happy to see something besides desert for a change. "What city is that?" Asked Eset. She was very familiar with all of the cities of Egypt yet she didn't recall one being in this particular region of the desert. "I don't know. There should not be a city here," he replied.
Eset had a strange feeling in the bottom of her stomach. Something didn't seem right. When they reached the outer limits of the mysterious city the feeling intensified. The entire place was in ruins. The city its self looked to be as old as the pyramids.
"Oh wow. This place is amazing." Said Eset as she marveled at the beauty of the city. "I've never read anything about this place before." Eset decided to venture further into the city. All of the sudden the ground shook and the sand filled the air. When everything settled down the guide said to Eset "We should leave this place is cursed!" "Nonsense, there's no such thing as curses and besides I want to explore this place some more." "Then you can do it on your own," the guide said as he fled from the city. "Wait," yelled Eset but the guide was to far away to hear."
"Oh well it shouldn't be to much trouble finding my way back after I'm done exploring this place." Eset said as she attempted to go into the city. This time though nothing happened and she entered the city eager to begin her explorations.
Ok does anybody think this story is worth continuing? Does anybody think its good? If so Please, Please, Please review. I'm losing confidence. And if you have any ideas please tell me them. THANKS! I'll try to get the next chapter out soon. Sorry about the wait.
Disclaimer: Oh Yeah and buy the way I don't own the Mummy or any of the Characters from it. Snif Snif
The city its self looked to be as old as the pyramids. "I didn't know the tour of all the Ancient Temples and Pyramids was going to take a whole month. It's a good thing I didn't have time to unpack anything last night. I'm gonna need it all on this tour." Eset said as she rummaged through her bags trying to figure out what to wear. She decided on a pair of black loose fitting pants and red baggy shirt. "Well I guess its time to go."
An hour later she found herself ridding a camel across the desert toward the Pyramids of Giza. A little while later Eset and her tour guide arrived atop a summit that gave them a perfect view of the three Pyramids of Giza. The site took Eset's breath away. "It's beautiful," was all she could say. "Isn't it?" the guide said. As Eset stared of into the distance she played with the Isis necklace she was wearing.
Her grandmother had given it to her when she was a child. She said that the necklace was older than the pyramids and held special powers that one-day Eset would discover for herself. Eset had never really believed the story but it had sparked her interest for Egypt.
She was brought back to the present be the tour guild speaking to her. "We must move on now," he said. "Oh, all right," she responded. Once again they headed off into the vast desert.
Hours later a city became visible on the horizon. This seemed to disturb the guide but Eset was happy to see something besides desert for a change. "What city is that?" Asked Eset. She was very familiar with all of the cities of Egypt yet she didn't recall one being in this particular region of the desert. "I don't know. There should not be a city here," he replied.
Eset had a strange feeling in the bottom of her stomach. Something didn't seem right. When they reached the outer limits of the mysterious city the feeling intensified. The entire place was in ruins. The city its self looked to be as old as the pyramids.
"Oh wow. This place is amazing." Said Eset as she marveled at the beauty of the city. "I've never read anything about this place before." Eset decided to venture further into the city. All of the sudden the ground shook and the sand filled the air. When everything settled down the guide said to Eset "We should leave this place is cursed!" "Nonsense, there's no such thing as curses and besides I want to explore this place some more." "Then you can do it on your own," the guide said as he fled from the city. "Wait," yelled Eset but the guide was to far away to hear."
"Oh well it shouldn't be to much trouble finding my way back after I'm done exploring this place." Eset said as she attempted to go into the city. This time though nothing happened and she entered the city eager to begin her explorations.
Ok does anybody think this story is worth continuing? Does anybody think its good? If so Please, Please, Please review. I'm losing confidence. And if you have any ideas please tell me them. THANKS! I'll try to get the next chapter out soon. Sorry about the wait.
