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Chapter 4
Max was walking around the mall looking in the different shops. He was trying to find something special for Liz, but he had no idea what to get her. He wanted to get her a promise ring. Summer was going to end soon and he wanted Liz to know that he was very serious about their relationship. This was going to not be just an ordinary ring it is a ring promising her that he will be faithful and would love to marry her one day. Max went in several shops, but he just couldn't find the right ring. He sighed with frustration and ran his hand through his hair.
Max suddenly heard a high pitched squeak "Maxie!" Max shuddered when he recognized that voice. Max slowly turned around to see bouncing blond curls come running up to him and pull him into a hug. Max quickly pulled away and silently promised to burn the clothes he was wearing. "Um, hi Tess." Max mumbled.
"Oh Maxie I am so glad I ran into you. How are you doing? Are you still with that mouse? You know I'm sorry for cheating on you; I am willing to make it up to you." Tess sweetly said while running a finger down his chest.
"How many times have I told you not to call me Maxie? Yes I am still with Liz and don't ever call her a mouse. I don't care if you are sorry or not because I am not ever touching you again and I suggest you don't touch me." Max said with fire in his eyes. No one insults Liz.
"I'm sorry Maxie I didn't mean to upset you. Just remember when you are done with that girl that a real woman wants you." Tess said with a wink and walked out of the store. Max practically had smoke coming out of his ears. Max had enough of the mall and decided to get home.
Max was walking to his car and looked down to pull the keys out of his pocket when he heard a noise coming at him at an alarming rate. Max turned his head and saw a car come flying at him and was about to hit him. Max dove out of the way throwing himself on top of another car. Max saw the car driving away and let out the breath he was holding. He couldn't see the license plate number because of its speed. "That guy almost hit me" Max thought to himself. A woman who had been standing by helped him off the car hood and asked him if he was all right. Max nodded and didn't listen to the woman's advice to call the police. After the day he had all he wanted to do was go home.
(In the car)
"Damn it! I was so close! Damn him; he can run now, but I'll get him soon enough." The voice vowed.
Max pulled his car into the driveway and made his way up his porch steps and heard a sweet angel's voice call to him, "Hey sexy" Max turned with a grin to see Liz sitting out on the porch. In her hand she was her journal and she finished her sentence and closed the book. Max hugged her and then bolted for the journal, but not before Liz tackled him to the side and snagged the journal.
"Hey common that's not fair! We've been dating for so long what could possibly be in there that I don't already know. Besides its not very sweet of you to write in there in front of me." Max said with a pouting face.
"Well I couldn't let you find out about all my secret lovers now can I? Whoops have I said too much?" Liz said with a playful laugh. Max's face turned red with jealousy even though he knew she was joking. "No worries my love there are no secrets in here. Just a lot of entries about how cute your butt is in your blue jeans and how I love it when you wear your gray tank top. Your right I have been mean by writing in front of you. Hmm how can I make this up to you?" Liz purred in his ear. Liz licked and sucked on his earlobe and ran a hand down his chest. Max gulped and could feel the hormones going into overdrive.
"Max!!!!!" Kelly wailed. "What did you do to my Stacy doll?" Kelly came running out of the house onto the porch obviously ruining a special moment between Liz and Max. Kelly shoved her doll towards her brother's face and screamed, "Look at her hair! It's cut all wrong and her hair is black! I'm telling mommy on you. I hate you!" Kelly yelled with a tear in her eye and stormed back into the house.
Liz gave Max a bad look and watched Kelly run back into the house. "What? Last week she was bugging me to play tea party and when I refused she threw the doll at me. She didn't come back for it so I had a little fun with a sharpie and some scissors. I can't believe it took her this long to find." Max said with a chuckle until he saw his very unhappy girlfriend not laughing and giving him a death glare.
"You are such a horrible older brother! She is only 7 years old! You better go tell her you're sorry and get her a new doll or you can forget going out tonight with me!" Liz said with a very serious face.
"Okay, okay I'll get her another doll. Don't get mad or anything." Max said being a smart ass. Liz looked annoyed and stood there tapping her toe expecting him to promise more. "Alright I'll buy her another doll and I'll apologize. You are one tough cookie." Max said. Liz smiled and gave him a kiss on the cheek.
"Maxwell Phillip Evans get in this house right now! Stop terrorizing your sister!" Max's mother screamed from inside the house. Max gulped with fear and turned to Liz. "I'll try and calm my mother down and then I'll give you a call tonight. I love you." Max said and gave Liz a kiss before heading into the war zone.
Liz laughed and headed to her house. Liz walked over to her bike and found a note in the basket. "Aw Max must have left me a note. How sweet of him." Liz thought to herself. She opened up the note, which read:
You're next my pretty and do not think lover boy can save you.
Liz got really scared and looked around to see if anyone was there. A chill ran down her spine and got on her bike and headed home. "Please God let this be a prank."
Chapter 4
Max was walking around the mall looking in the different shops. He was trying to find something special for Liz, but he had no idea what to get her. He wanted to get her a promise ring. Summer was going to end soon and he wanted Liz to know that he was very serious about their relationship. This was going to not be just an ordinary ring it is a ring promising her that he will be faithful and would love to marry her one day. Max went in several shops, but he just couldn't find the right ring. He sighed with frustration and ran his hand through his hair.
Max suddenly heard a high pitched squeak "Maxie!" Max shuddered when he recognized that voice. Max slowly turned around to see bouncing blond curls come running up to him and pull him into a hug. Max quickly pulled away and silently promised to burn the clothes he was wearing. "Um, hi Tess." Max mumbled.
"Oh Maxie I am so glad I ran into you. How are you doing? Are you still with that mouse? You know I'm sorry for cheating on you; I am willing to make it up to you." Tess sweetly said while running a finger down his chest.
"How many times have I told you not to call me Maxie? Yes I am still with Liz and don't ever call her a mouse. I don't care if you are sorry or not because I am not ever touching you again and I suggest you don't touch me." Max said with fire in his eyes. No one insults Liz.
"I'm sorry Maxie I didn't mean to upset you. Just remember when you are done with that girl that a real woman wants you." Tess said with a wink and walked out of the store. Max practically had smoke coming out of his ears. Max had enough of the mall and decided to get home.
Max was walking to his car and looked down to pull the keys out of his pocket when he heard a noise coming at him at an alarming rate. Max turned his head and saw a car come flying at him and was about to hit him. Max dove out of the way throwing himself on top of another car. Max saw the car driving away and let out the breath he was holding. He couldn't see the license plate number because of its speed. "That guy almost hit me" Max thought to himself. A woman who had been standing by helped him off the car hood and asked him if he was all right. Max nodded and didn't listen to the woman's advice to call the police. After the day he had all he wanted to do was go home.
(In the car)
"Damn it! I was so close! Damn him; he can run now, but I'll get him soon enough." The voice vowed.
Max pulled his car into the driveway and made his way up his porch steps and heard a sweet angel's voice call to him, "Hey sexy" Max turned with a grin to see Liz sitting out on the porch. In her hand she was her journal and she finished her sentence and closed the book. Max hugged her and then bolted for the journal, but not before Liz tackled him to the side and snagged the journal.
"Hey common that's not fair! We've been dating for so long what could possibly be in there that I don't already know. Besides its not very sweet of you to write in there in front of me." Max said with a pouting face.
"Well I couldn't let you find out about all my secret lovers now can I? Whoops have I said too much?" Liz said with a playful laugh. Max's face turned red with jealousy even though he knew she was joking. "No worries my love there are no secrets in here. Just a lot of entries about how cute your butt is in your blue jeans and how I love it when you wear your gray tank top. Your right I have been mean by writing in front of you. Hmm how can I make this up to you?" Liz purred in his ear. Liz licked and sucked on his earlobe and ran a hand down his chest. Max gulped and could feel the hormones going into overdrive.
"Max!!!!!" Kelly wailed. "What did you do to my Stacy doll?" Kelly came running out of the house onto the porch obviously ruining a special moment between Liz and Max. Kelly shoved her doll towards her brother's face and screamed, "Look at her hair! It's cut all wrong and her hair is black! I'm telling mommy on you. I hate you!" Kelly yelled with a tear in her eye and stormed back into the house.
Liz gave Max a bad look and watched Kelly run back into the house. "What? Last week she was bugging me to play tea party and when I refused she threw the doll at me. She didn't come back for it so I had a little fun with a sharpie and some scissors. I can't believe it took her this long to find." Max said with a chuckle until he saw his very unhappy girlfriend not laughing and giving him a death glare.
"You are such a horrible older brother! She is only 7 years old! You better go tell her you're sorry and get her a new doll or you can forget going out tonight with me!" Liz said with a very serious face.
"Okay, okay I'll get her another doll. Don't get mad or anything." Max said being a smart ass. Liz looked annoyed and stood there tapping her toe expecting him to promise more. "Alright I'll buy her another doll and I'll apologize. You are one tough cookie." Max said. Liz smiled and gave him a kiss on the cheek.
"Maxwell Phillip Evans get in this house right now! Stop terrorizing your sister!" Max's mother screamed from inside the house. Max gulped with fear and turned to Liz. "I'll try and calm my mother down and then I'll give you a call tonight. I love you." Max said and gave Liz a kiss before heading into the war zone.
Liz laughed and headed to her house. Liz walked over to her bike and found a note in the basket. "Aw Max must have left me a note. How sweet of him." Liz thought to herself. She opened up the note, which read:
You're next my pretty and do not think lover boy can save you.
Liz got really scared and looked around to see if anyone was there. A chill ran down her spine and got on her bike and headed home. "Please God let this be a prank."
