A//N: LOL. final exams next week. no internet in a week.. what a
torture ! :T
Anyway.. I have found an editor so I'll try to edit my previous
chapters..
Chapter 4 is up.. I don't own this. oh yea.. this story is a mixture
of stories from the original novel and Susan Kay and.. etc. .. so just
read on.
Hey. it is 11:30 on Friday. just came back from my high school concert.. YaY.. the Phantom of the Opera song just stand out from the rest of the song.. lol.. the audience went wild and cheers even louder.. the senior band is the best ! lol
Chapter 4 -The Realization
Back to Christine's Point of View
How the day just quickly passes by, now the sun had fallen, the street was dark with dim street lights.
I leave Raoul from the hotel room and start to think of what I should do.
I should return to Erik and tell him I love him
Yess... yes I nodded happily, I must tell him that, and he'll know that I truly love him and I'll stay with him.
That thoughts brought excited goosebumps on my skin, Erik would really be happy to see me, he after all loves me.
That thoughts encouraged me to think pass all the darkness and coldness in his domain, I lift up my legs and head straight to the corridors deep down to his mystify lair. Finally after minutes I reach to his lake without stepping on any Erik's trap. I went frantically looking for the boat that Erik once led me on, I can't find it.
Ahhh. it is hiding just by the dark corner. I have no choice by to walk to the lake by getting wet and climb on the boat. My body shakes with chilliness of the dark water that penetrate my bones. I gave out a shriek cry and felt my entirely body numb when I climb on the boat. My dress was all soaked to the skin! But only the bottom part, the lake water was not deep.
I grew out a soft sighed of reassurance that I am finally on my way to Erik. Inside the hotel room when I was all alone, that time I have the time to think of the situation and relationship I am in with Erik. I have treated him so harshly! How cruel I was to think that running away with Raoul was good idea, no doubt he had heard everything we said then. I felt guilty and shameful of myself. But never mind now, the past is the horrible past.. I love Erik and we'll stay with each other no matter what.
I smiled as I peddled the boat to Erik's domain. After a while, I have reached the place, but something is not right.
The door. is not closed. it is slightly open
I pushed the door and entered, I should have know this would happen
Everything that is front of me is wrecked. all ruined.
The piano Erik often played. the black and white keys are missing.
The furnitures looked as have been attack by madd dogs
I slowly ran to my room ... ahhh. my dresses are all taken away, the bed is destroyed, the floor is a mess with white feathers. I leave the room and curiously try to find out about Erik's room.
As I approach closer I really heard someone weeping in despair. It sounds like as if a wounded animal slowly dying. I clutched at the doorknob and soundlessly turn to enter.
A dark showy figure bought me attention, the disturb sound was caused by Erik! I step closer and closer with heavy steps. Finally I knelt in front of now vulnerable Erik. He seemed to know I am here but he wouldn't stop crying.
I put my hands to his wet with saliva hands. His eyes met mine sadly and he mutter something unintelligent.
"Erik. ?"
".. Ghrum.erm.. armn. lumn. ahhh.."
"It's okay now.. It's okay" I opened my arms expect him to embrace me.
" Chhrriiissttttiinnneee." he looked away falling his body against the wall.
I put down my arms and said " Erik.. I have come back.."
"Why.. ? why."
"I love you Erik. I have come back.." I smiled at his sad face.
He shoke his head in disagreement, I grew more confuse. He stood up and walk away from me. I stood up as well, following him.
"Christine." Erik wiped the tears away, " you think that coming back and confront your love bring us somewhere?"
"Why.. yes.. haven't you told me go stay with you before. you said you love me. YoU LoVe ME. why are you."
" ohh.. my naïve Christine. you think things will be the same when you come back?. that way I think of you is the same?. You expect me to throw my arms around you and said nothing had happen between us. No.. Christine. the pain. oh gosh.. the sharp pain of you left me has not heal yet. I cannot. I love you Christine.. dearly and fondly.. but I cannot be with you. the aftereffect of the incident are still vividly in my mind.. ...selfish Christine.. Always thinking of yourself. have you think of ME. you are so childish Christine.. "
I grew confused. ashame. guilt. angry. He will never treat me the way he did before. but. ME?.. I.
"But I love you Erik.. dearly. I left Raoul for you."
Erik shakes his head, "Christine, you think I will be so happy and forgive you instantly?. .. It doesn't work like that. You can't expect or presume . I . still have to deal with the pain that you have caused me greatly and recently. Christine. Christine.. Christine. always thinking of yourself.."
"Erik. I love you. why are you saying all this.. I. "
"Christine please leave. please." Erik turned the back on me and stared at his broken coffin.
"Erik. please. forgive me.. please. " I cried out clasped my hands together pleading.
Erik made no sound and stand there motionless, he looks determined to stay from me, I can't think of a way to convince him. I walked outside the door closing the door quietly.
"This is ... .? expect or presume?" I grew puzzled of the words Erik just told me, I head back to the surface feeling lost.
A/N: This short story is almost reach to the conclusion.. please R/R !!!!!!
Hey. it is 11:30 on Friday. just came back from my high school concert.. YaY.. the Phantom of the Opera song just stand out from the rest of the song.. lol.. the audience went wild and cheers even louder.. the senior band is the best ! lol
Chapter 4 -The Realization
Back to Christine's Point of View
How the day just quickly passes by, now the sun had fallen, the street was dark with dim street lights.
I leave Raoul from the hotel room and start to think of what I should do.
I should return to Erik and tell him I love him
Yess... yes I nodded happily, I must tell him that, and he'll know that I truly love him and I'll stay with him.
That thoughts brought excited goosebumps on my skin, Erik would really be happy to see me, he after all loves me.
That thoughts encouraged me to think pass all the darkness and coldness in his domain, I lift up my legs and head straight to the corridors deep down to his mystify lair. Finally after minutes I reach to his lake without stepping on any Erik's trap. I went frantically looking for the boat that Erik once led me on, I can't find it.
Ahhh. it is hiding just by the dark corner. I have no choice by to walk to the lake by getting wet and climb on the boat. My body shakes with chilliness of the dark water that penetrate my bones. I gave out a shriek cry and felt my entirely body numb when I climb on the boat. My dress was all soaked to the skin! But only the bottom part, the lake water was not deep.
I grew out a soft sighed of reassurance that I am finally on my way to Erik. Inside the hotel room when I was all alone, that time I have the time to think of the situation and relationship I am in with Erik. I have treated him so harshly! How cruel I was to think that running away with Raoul was good idea, no doubt he had heard everything we said then. I felt guilty and shameful of myself. But never mind now, the past is the horrible past.. I love Erik and we'll stay with each other no matter what.
I smiled as I peddled the boat to Erik's domain. After a while, I have reached the place, but something is not right.
The door. is not closed. it is slightly open
I pushed the door and entered, I should have know this would happen
Everything that is front of me is wrecked. all ruined.
The piano Erik often played. the black and white keys are missing.
The furnitures looked as have been attack by madd dogs
I slowly ran to my room ... ahhh. my dresses are all taken away, the bed is destroyed, the floor is a mess with white feathers. I leave the room and curiously try to find out about Erik's room.
As I approach closer I really heard someone weeping in despair. It sounds like as if a wounded animal slowly dying. I clutched at the doorknob and soundlessly turn to enter.
A dark showy figure bought me attention, the disturb sound was caused by Erik! I step closer and closer with heavy steps. Finally I knelt in front of now vulnerable Erik. He seemed to know I am here but he wouldn't stop crying.
I put my hands to his wet with saliva hands. His eyes met mine sadly and he mutter something unintelligent.
"Erik. ?"
".. Ghrum.erm.. armn. lumn. ahhh.."
"It's okay now.. It's okay" I opened my arms expect him to embrace me.
" Chhrriiissttttiinnneee." he looked away falling his body against the wall.
I put down my arms and said " Erik.. I have come back.."
"Why.. ? why."
"I love you Erik. I have come back.." I smiled at his sad face.
He shoke his head in disagreement, I grew more confuse. He stood up and walk away from me. I stood up as well, following him.
"Christine." Erik wiped the tears away, " you think that coming back and confront your love bring us somewhere?"
"Why.. yes.. haven't you told me go stay with you before. you said you love me. YoU LoVe ME. why are you."
" ohh.. my naïve Christine. you think things will be the same when you come back?. that way I think of you is the same?. You expect me to throw my arms around you and said nothing had happen between us. No.. Christine. the pain. oh gosh.. the sharp pain of you left me has not heal yet. I cannot. I love you Christine.. dearly and fondly.. but I cannot be with you. the aftereffect of the incident are still vividly in my mind.. ...selfish Christine.. Always thinking of yourself. have you think of ME. you are so childish Christine.. "
I grew confused. ashame. guilt. angry. He will never treat me the way he did before. but. ME?.. I.
"But I love you Erik.. dearly. I left Raoul for you."
Erik shakes his head, "Christine, you think I will be so happy and forgive you instantly?. .. It doesn't work like that. You can't expect or presume . I . still have to deal with the pain that you have caused me greatly and recently. Christine. Christine.. Christine. always thinking of yourself.."
"Erik. I love you. why are you saying all this.. I. "
"Christine please leave. please." Erik turned the back on me and stared at his broken coffin.
"Erik. please. forgive me.. please. " I cried out clasped my hands together pleading.
Erik made no sound and stand there motionless, he looks determined to stay from me, I can't think of a way to convince him. I walked outside the door closing the door quietly.
"This is ... .? expect or presume?" I grew puzzled of the words Erik just told me, I head back to the surface feeling lost.
A/N: This short story is almost reach to the conclusion.. please R/R !!!!!!
