Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix (toldlely revised and with a brand spanking new plot)
A:\N I gave up on my other story because I lost interest in it however, I'm glad to say that I know I now will through my full effort into this story. The first two or 3 chapters will mostly be flashbacks but don't worry the story still will revolve around Harry and crew. Any way on with the story.
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The year was 1945 and inside a highly secretive underground bunker outside of London a group of very important wizards met to discuss the war that was going on with the evil wizard Grindinwald. Their actions will seal the fate of thousands of people over time….
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"So minister Smorgsedbord we here at the department of magical security have been working non stop for months on this project" said a balding wizard to the newly elected minister of magic.
"We have finally made a working prototype of the project codenamed Apocalypse" he finished.
" This specimen is perfect in every way and will become the perfect wizard assassin to defeat Grindinwald," a colleague continued.
"Show him to me" said the minister.
"Yes sir" mouthed the men at the same time.
The three men walked down a sterile hallway to a catwalk that overlooked a white room. There was glass between them and the room however so they could not be harmed.
"Bring out the subject," bellowed the head wizard.
With that a wizard who the minister recognized as a condemned death eater walked into the room below the minister. He looked almost petrified of what was going to happen to him and the minister wondered why. Without warning another door opened and a wizard souly dressed in black stepped out into what looked like a holding cell of sorts.
"The one in the black sir, he is the assassin" explained the wizard, "Now watch closely".
The holding cell door swung open and by the time it had stopped swinging the death eater was dead. That was how fast the assassin had killed him. Without warning the assassin jumped through the glass and onto the catwalk, with one swift swish of the wand the three wizards were dead. The unnamed assassin took a hair form the minister's head and then put it into a potion that was bottled around his neck. Seconds later the minister (who was really the assassin on polyjuice potion) after stashing the bodies walked out of the bunker unharmed. Hours later when the minister was found dead the media was told he died of a sudden heart attack but others knew the truth. They dismissed the fact that the assassin had escaped for they were told by the science wizards who made him that he was too weak then to survive on his own. Weeks later Grindwald was defeated and the evil was finally defeated or so it seemed….
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Flash forward to 1977
A group of six teenagers were standing around waiting for graduation ceremonies to begin. However, these were wizard teenagers about to graduate from Hogwarts School of witchcraft and wizardry.
"Gather round for a group photo" said James Potter to his best friends who had been their with him since the beginning of their years at Hogwarts. There was Remus Lupin, the werewolf who he befriended on the train ride to Hogwarts and who had been the mind of reason ever since. There was Sirius Black, his best friend and fellow mischief-maker who James knew even before Hogwarts. There was Peter Petergrew the sort of small and pleasantly plump follower of their group. There was Lilly Evans who James had had a love and hate relationship ever since setting eyes on her. There was Sirius younger brother Joe who was like a son to James. Finally there was James's sister Jessica who was very overprotective of her brother.
"Say cheese" said James as the magical camera flashed.
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Flash forward a few more years to 1980
"Minister! Minister", yelled a high-ranking wizard as he stumbled into the minister's office.
"The results on the Potter boy are back and they are as we feared positive"
"What does this mean?" asked the minister
" It means sir that the Potter boy is the strongest wizard known to man now" he responded.
"Even worse news is if the Potters have another child he or she will be even stronger than Harry".
"So what should we do minister?" asked an aide.
"We must eliminate the Potters," the minister said.
A:/N that's it for now I figure I'll post ch 2 as long as I get at least 5 reviews
NO flames please however constructive critism is welcome.
