ME: Hi people.

KAI: Hi Lady Blade, what's up?

REN: Yeah.

ME: I'm updating Max's fic.I'm dedicating this chapter to Naomi Azuki, coz
it's her birthday. HAPPY BIRTHDAY NAOMI!!! And also to Shinigami 29, coz it's
her birthday tomorrow. HAPPY BIRTHDAY SHINIGAMI!!! So I hope the two of you
R&R. And tell me what you think. Not that I don't hope that everyone else
doesn't R&R. And tell me what they think. BUT NO FLAMES!!!

REN: Where is everyone anyway?

KAI: I told Tyson that they sold 50 flavours of ice cream at the shopping
centre. So he dragged Max, Kenny and Ray with him there.

REN: THEY DON'T SELL ICE CREAM AT THE SHOPPING CENTRE!!!

KAI: I do KNOW that Ren. I just decided to say it.

ME: Kai?

KAI: Yes Lady Blade?

ME: How long have they been gone for?

KAI: 3 day's.

REN/ME: THREE DAYS!!!

ME: HOW COULD YOU DO THAT KAI? My poor muses. I MUST go and find them.

REN: Here you go Aibou. *hands Lady Blade her leather trenchcoat*

ME: Thank you Ren. Could you and Kai please update? The sheets are on my
desk. *runs out of the door*

KAI: O_O! Eeep!

REN: O.K. Aibou. Now where was she, before she left. Oh yeah. The idea for
this chapter came from Shinigami29. THANX LOADS SHINIGAMI!!! Aibou had
terrible writers block. She sooo happy that you helped. Oh and thanx to
everyone who gave idea's on how to kill Harry. They were all cool. But we
must thank Naomi Azuki for the death scene idea. Thanx. Oh and Happy #
Birthday Naomi!!!

KAI: O_O! She hyper.

REN: Aibou's brother give me lots of Zesty Berry Fanta. YAAAAY! Kai do the
disclaimer, or I will have you unspeakably tortured, when Aibou update's her
deleted scenes fic.

KAI: Eeep *gulps* O.K. Lady Blade WarAngel, does not own BeyBlade.

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Tragic Past Four-Max's Torture.

Chapter Ten - Harry's Revenge.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~MAX'S P.O.V~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

A couple of days later. I was sitting in the Hobby-Shop. thinking. Kes was
sat watching T.V. in the living room. I got up and went into the kitchen.
"Hey Kes, do you want to eat something?" I asked her. She looked over and
smiled at me. "Sure, Maxy." She answered me. She got up from the chair she
was sitting in, and ran into the kitchen. "Well we could eat pizza or
something." I said. My mind was somewhere else. "I don't mind Maxy, but
what's wrong?" Kes asked me. Her frown, making little lines appear on her
forehead. I smiled and poured myself a glass of orange juice. Kes held out a
glass, grinning widely at me. "Ooops, sorry Kes." I said. And poured her some
orange juice aswell. We were sat drinking it, when I realised, just what had
been bugging me. I was supposed to be looking after Kes, and yet all we''d
done was lie low.

"Hey Kes, you wanna go to the park?" I asked her. "YEAH!!!" Kes yelled. "I
haven't been to the park, since............." Kes trailed off. "Since your
mom died." I finished off for her. She nodded. "O.K. get your coat. I don't
want you to get sick. We have to stop at Kai's house first." I said. She
grinned widely. "I like talking to Brian. And Teri, and Kai." Kes said. She
ran off. I went and got my coat, and when I got to the door. Kes ran down and
pulled on a jacket.

We walked out of the door, and walked on. I just drank in all the things that
I'd missed. A sweet-shop there. An antique store. Some other stores that I
always went to. Places that I'd always taken for granted. I was really glad
to be back home. Kes drank in all the scenery. Everything was new for her. We
soon arrived at Kai's. I saw the White Tigers practicing. Teri and Kai were
against each other. Lee and Ray were against each other. Gary and Kevin were
against each other. Hikari and Brian sat with Mariah watching. "Hi Brian."
Kes said. She ran towards them. //Awww! how cute// Draciel said. //I agree
with you Draciel// I said back. "Hi guys." I said. "Hey Max, what's up?" Ray
asked me. "Not much." I said.

Just then, Tyson and Kenny appeared. "Hi everyone." Tyson yelled. "Hi Kes."
He said to Kes. She smiled. "Hi Tyson, how much did you eat today?" Kes
asked. "I think about thirty-nine plates. Not alot." Tyson said. Kes laughed.
"You still made the world record. "The man who can eat more food then anone
else." You definatly beat your last record." Kes said laughing. //O.K. she's
making Tyson + food jokes now. All she needs to get now is an evil smirk, and
we could have a Kai-clone// Draciel said. I laughed mentally. Then I went
over to talk to Kai. I told him what I planned to do.

"You can't go alone, Max. It's just dangerous." Kai said to me. "Kai, I have
to bond with my cousin. I'm probably gonna be taking care of her for a
while." I said. Kai nodded. "I know what you're saying Max. I had to bond
with Hikari. I do get what you're saying. We could come along. Be in the park.
Out of sight, but close enough for you to yell, if you need us." Kai said. I
thought for a minute. //He's right Max-chan, and you know it.// Draciel said
to me. I smiled. "O.K. Kai. That's a good idea." I agreed.

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When we all got to the park. We all started doing our own respective things.
Kai and Teri wandered off together. //They're probably gonna start making out
or something.// I heard Drigger say, in disgust. I heard Draciel laughing.
//You think that they're PROBABLY gonna make out. they ARE gonna make out.//
Dragoon said. Which made Draciel laugh even more. //DON'T even bother. YOU
try living in KAI'S beyblade. It's so unfair. Those two trying to swallow
each other is just not what a bit-beast is supposed to listen to.// Dranzer
said. Draciel, Dragoon and Drigger laughed. I laughed mentally.

//Talk about people, who are at that stage.// Draciel said. //One day we'll
probably be saying the same thing about Brian and Kes.// Draciel said. I
smiled. But whatever Kes decided to do, she was still my cousin. So I didn't
mind that she liked Brian. It was better then her liking a jerk like Harry.
Ray, Lee, Tyson, Kevin and Gary had started to kick a ball around. Kes
watched. Brian joined in. I laughed, when Tyson, got tripped up, for like the
seventh time. Then the ball got kicked through a bunch of bushes. Kes ran
after it. So I followed. I saw Kes pick up the ball. Then I heard that
horrible voice. "Stay stil Kestrel, or I'll blow yer head off." I turned to
see Harry, holding a shot-gun.

My eye's widened. "Well boy. Git your arse into that damn truck, or I'll
personally, put a hole, through her head." Harry said. He smirked at me. Oh
that evil smirk. I wanted to hit him. To have the courage, to do what Ray had
done to his father. I couldn't move. Kes screamed. I heard the gun go off. I
looked at Kes. She was O.K. the shot had gone wild. "Kes run." I yelled at
her. Then I saw Ray and Kai come running. They tackled Harry to the ground
and started beating the shit out of him.

I picked up the gun. Harry had dropped it when Ray and Kai had tackled him. I
held it and aimed. "Stand back Ray, and you to Kai." I said. They looked
really shocked. What after all this. They think I wouldn't shoot him. I
couldn't hit him with my bare hands. I was too small. I only had the gun. I
aimed it at his head. He got to his feet. I kept the gun on him all the time.
"Max, don't do this." Kai said. "Why not. After all he's done to me?" I said.
"Because, that's not who you are Max. You don't like the idea of hurting
people." Ray said.

I didn't relax my grip on the gun. "Maybe Ray. Maybe you're right. But I
don't care. Harry's an animal. He was willing to shoot his own daughter, to
get us both back to his home. So that when he got us there, he could sell our
bodys to twisted bastards like himself. Then use us for his own pleasure,
like the fucked up paedophile that he is." I yelled. I didn't care about what
happened anymore. I just wanted it over with. I poised the gun. Aimed it to
shoot him through the head. Just like he'd intended for Kes. "You'll pay for
everything you've done. To me and Kes. I will NEVER let you hurt either of us
again." I said. My voice was so calm. It was dangerously calm. Harry just
laughed. "You ain't got the guts boy." Harry said. He was just laughing at
me. I could tell, just by looking at him, that he was drunk.

"Don't do it Max. HE'S NOT WORTH IT!!!" Kai yelled at me. "Max listen to Kai.
Is killing him really worth it? Do you want to go to jail?" Ray said to me. I
didn't care. I hated him. I hated what he'd done to me. What he'd taken from
me. What he'd turned me into. And most of all. I hated HIM. HIM, HIM, HIM. I
despised him. I would prove that I had the gut's to kill him. Then what Kai
and Ray had said, started sinking in. I would go to jail. And with my mom in
a coma, Kes would go to an orphanage. There would be one less blader on the
team. So my team, wouldn't just lose a friend, but the championships, because
they needed an extra member to sub. I loosened my grip on the gun. I dropped
to my knees on the ground and sobbed. The gun fell beside me. Kes ran over to
me. I felt her arms around my neck. I heard her crying too.

I heard the gun being picked up. I looked up to see Kai holding on to the
gun. He had it pointed at Harry. "You better stick around and wait for a
while. I have a feeling that the police wil want to speak to you." Kai said.
I heard sirens in the background. I looked to see a police car stopping. I
saw two policemen get out of the car, and run over to where Kai had the
shot-gun pointed at Harry. They walked over to Harry.

Harry then tried to run. I will never forget those next few minutes. The
policmen ran after him. We ran after them. I watched as Harry ran out of the
park, and straight into the road. That's when I saw the trucks. About twenty
of them. It was a huge, frozen food convoy. Harry looked and screamed in
terror as the trucks headed straight for him. All of them going too fast for
them to stop in time. I heard the sickening thud, as the truck hit Harry dead
on. Knocking him to the ground, and running over him. But if that didn't kill
him, the other trucks did. One by one, they all drove over his ugly, fat,
carcus. Squashing him into a bloody pulp. All of the trucks, stopped,
coliding into one another. And the last truck, fell on top of, what was left
of, Harry's disgusting carcus. Even though it was horrible. I was actually
glad he was dead. "I guess what you said came true." Kes said. "What do you
mean Kes?" I said. "He paid for what he did to us." Kes said. That made me
laugh. Despite everything. I couldn't feel bad for that disgusting bastard.
What he had done to me and Kes was unforgiable. I was glad that he was gone.
We were all escorted away from the scene quickly.

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REN: Hope you all enjoyed the chapter. Please R&R. And please, if someone
see's Tyson, Max, Kenny and Ray. Please tell me, so that I can call Aibou.
She is still out looking for them. I do hope they're allright.

KAI: Come on Ren. You SERIOUSLY want TYSON to be ALLRIGHT?

REN: Yeap, so I can hit him over the head with Aibou's, invincible, frying
pan. MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

KAI: O_O! Anyways, please send in cures for hyperness aswell. Ren is WAY too
evil when she's hyper.

REN: *see's Xena, Lady Blade's cat* Come my evil were-cat. We must go and
find Aibous brothers, and TAKE THEIR FANTA!!!
MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

KAI: O_O! *shudders* Bye people. C U L8R.