Ok.. I was reading over my story's. and I noticed that this one makes absolutely no sense.o.o it is my first, and I have it completed in a notebook. it actully has a good plot. . the descriptions, and specification of who is talking is just dormant! So I am thinking about re- writing it. but at the moment I am writing a Harry potter story about some angels and harry and the gang becoming angelic detectives.. And some sirens and mystical beings, and it's a fun story. So if you guys want me too re- write this too make it understandable. tell me. If enough want me too re- write it I will but if there isn't many people I'll leave it were it is.. u.u

Have a nice day! ^-^ Princess Athelia