WARNING!

Chapters beyond this point have NOT been revised!  The revised chapters WILL be posted soon, and there will be significant differences!  Unless you want to read it again, I suggest waiting the extra time.  That, and I'd prefer everyone not reading my worse writing :P

Thanks for reading though! And leave your e-mail address in a review or e-mail me if you'd like to be put on my mailing list :D

~ Jedi Cosmos