This is my first attempt on writing a fanfiction so, be nice. =)
*INUYUSHA- is own by Rumiko Takahashi yadda-yadda-yadda. all those batch of copyrights and warnings.. you get my point.*
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Japanese Translation
Nani-what
Jii-chan- grandfather
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Prologue: The Beginning
Kagome flopped back down on the futon facing the ceiling.
The room was full of brown boxes some were already open, some still closed. There was no furniture except for the futon where the current owner of the boxes was lying down and just staring off the ceiling.
She turned her head to her right and stared at the pile of boxes.
"Guess, I got to move on," she sighed as she rolled over her stomach and groaned. "I'm so tired," she mumbled to the futon. She placed her knees beneath her in a kneeling position while her head still flat on the futon and counted to ten.
"Kagome finish it already, so you can rest without thinking about all these mess." Kagome scolded herself as she forced herself to get up. "Besides it's all your fault for packing too many things."
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FLASHBACK
"Kagomen-neesan, aren't you packing too much?"
"What are you talking about?" Kagome looked up from her luggage to her brother who entered her room.
Souta, now in junior-high, gestured at the boxes that were stack up at the corner of her room. "Aside from that, you still have a couple downstairs."
Kagome just shrugged her shoulders and continued her packing. Sometimes, her brother could be so dense.
END OF FLASHBACK
~*~*~*~*~*~
Damn, but she did over pack.
She sighed. What's with her? Why can't she ever pack light?
['College.']
['Think college. Away from home. Away from everything. Everything new. Nobody knows me. I can start anew.']
"Yes, that's it!" Getting energetic. "Start anew!" She ripped the box that has a six inches letters saying ['BATHROOM STUFFS']. "A new life away from everything, especially away from all those embarrassing memories." She cringed as one of those bad image flashed in her mind. "Stop thinking of that, Kagome. You're away from all of that, okay." She said as she carries her vanities in the bathroom.
"Think of this way," still talking to herself, "you can start a new image without people you know hounding on you and asking questions like what's going with you." Arranging her things in the small cabinet above the sink. She was about to place her toothbrush when something dropped from her arms and rolled over to the fluffy mat near the toilet.
"Ne? What's that?" Staring at the small crystal ball attached to a chain- ['seems like a key-chain Jii-chan kept trying to sell off.'] She picked it up and read the tag attached to the chain. "Shikon no Tama?"
"Hmmm... Where did I hear that name before?" She mused as she carried the crystal ball key chain to her room.
A flash of red cloth came into her mind.
"Nani?" She blinked. "Kimono?" She wondered not noticing the box on the floor and immediately bumped into it. "Ouch!"
"Oh, well I better finish unpacking." She tossed the key-chain to the futon.
ON TO CHAPTER 1
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Review tell me how could improve myself. ^_^
[]- means thoughts. ''- also means thoughts. I can't get my letters to italize.
I want to know if I have a future in writing. Constructive crsiticism is acceptable, no flaming.
*INUYUSHA- is own by Rumiko Takahashi yadda-yadda-yadda. all those batch of copyrights and warnings.. you get my point.*
********************************************************************
Japanese Translation
Nani-what
Jii-chan- grandfather
***********************************************************
Prologue: The Beginning
Kagome flopped back down on the futon facing the ceiling.
The room was full of brown boxes some were already open, some still closed. There was no furniture except for the futon where the current owner of the boxes was lying down and just staring off the ceiling.
She turned her head to her right and stared at the pile of boxes.
"Guess, I got to move on," she sighed as she rolled over her stomach and groaned. "I'm so tired," she mumbled to the futon. She placed her knees beneath her in a kneeling position while her head still flat on the futon and counted to ten.
"Kagome finish it already, so you can rest without thinking about all these mess." Kagome scolded herself as she forced herself to get up. "Besides it's all your fault for packing too many things."
~*~*~*~*~*~
FLASHBACK
"Kagomen-neesan, aren't you packing too much?"
"What are you talking about?" Kagome looked up from her luggage to her brother who entered her room.
Souta, now in junior-high, gestured at the boxes that were stack up at the corner of her room. "Aside from that, you still have a couple downstairs."
Kagome just shrugged her shoulders and continued her packing. Sometimes, her brother could be so dense.
END OF FLASHBACK
~*~*~*~*~*~
Damn, but she did over pack.
She sighed. What's with her? Why can't she ever pack light?
['College.']
['Think college. Away from home. Away from everything. Everything new. Nobody knows me. I can start anew.']
"Yes, that's it!" Getting energetic. "Start anew!" She ripped the box that has a six inches letters saying ['BATHROOM STUFFS']. "A new life away from everything, especially away from all those embarrassing memories." She cringed as one of those bad image flashed in her mind. "Stop thinking of that, Kagome. You're away from all of that, okay." She said as she carries her vanities in the bathroom.
"Think of this way," still talking to herself, "you can start a new image without people you know hounding on you and asking questions like what's going with you." Arranging her things in the small cabinet above the sink. She was about to place her toothbrush when something dropped from her arms and rolled over to the fluffy mat near the toilet.
"Ne? What's that?" Staring at the small crystal ball attached to a chain- ['seems like a key-chain Jii-chan kept trying to sell off.'] She picked it up and read the tag attached to the chain. "Shikon no Tama?"
"Hmmm... Where did I hear that name before?" She mused as she carried the crystal ball key chain to her room.
A flash of red cloth came into her mind.
"Nani?" She blinked. "Kimono?" She wondered not noticing the box on the floor and immediately bumped into it. "Ouch!"
"Oh, well I better finish unpacking." She tossed the key-chain to the futon.
ON TO CHAPTER 1
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Review tell me how could improve myself. ^_^
[]- means thoughts. ''- also means thoughts. I can't get my letters to italize.
I want to know if I have a future in writing. Constructive crsiticism is acceptable, no flaming.
