This is my first attempt on writing a fanfiction- so be nice. =)
*INUYUSHA is own by Rumiko Takahashi yadda, yadda,yadda. You get my point.*
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Thank you to all of you who review my piece.
ArtemisMoon
-I'm very glad that you like my story. I'm sorry about the typos and spelling errors- I'll go work on it soon. P.S. English is not my first language and grammar is not my favorite subject either. But I'm doing all that I can to improve on both subjects. Thank you for telling me where to improve. I'm sorry that I cut Inuyasha's hair, I'm not a fan of guys having long hair, although, with Inuyasha- maybe I could make an exception to the rule, eh. Don't worry though because it's not that short. And about his doggy ears. hmmm. let me think about it. [When you pointed out to me what I did with his hair and ears, I scratched my head and wonder why I did it too, since I love his hair and ears so much.] Anyway, aside from his ears and hair, I think you'll be happy to know that I kept most of his features and abilities. You'll find it out sooner or later. ^_^
Usagipegusus
-Don't worry I'll be continuing the story. Especially now since I'm on a break. So, expect updates soon. ^_~
P-120 -The first chapter is short because I was thinking of making a prologue. The following chapters will be long though. You must like reading a lot. ^_^
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JAPANESE TRANSLATION:
Che- Shit
Sengoku Jidai-Warring States Period
Yokai- monster, demon
Daijoubo desu ka?-are you all right?; are you okay?
Houshi-sama- a title for a priest; Miroku's title
Kitsune- a magical fox creature believe to be crafty and change its appearance on whims; Shippou's specie
Sankon Tetsusou-Soul Scattering Iron Claw: Inuyasha's weapon- his sharp claws
Chikoshu-damn it
Iie-no
Nani-what?
Sou ka- is that so
*Let's begin cleaning out the confusion, shall we?*
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Chapter 3: The Beginning of the End
SENGOKU JIDAI.
"Inuyasha, this is the last of the shards," Kagome shouted at her hanyo companion who was still fighting an evil snake face-slash-octopus-like- yokai. They already defeated Naraku even before any of them could complete the crystal. However, defeating Naraku does not mean the end of the mission, since there were still shards needed to be complete before it could cause more trouble to others. So now, they were fighting once again for the current owner of the shard was unwilling to give it up.
"Un." Inuyasha ducked to avoid one of the tentacles that were speedily approaching him. ['Where the hell did he hide my Tetsusaiga?'] He was not so worried about turning into a full-yokai, since he didn't feel threatened thus his body is still in his control. But then again defeating this annoying Naraku-look-alike-yokai could have been done faster with his tetsusaiga. Now, he just had to do with what he has-his claws!
"Che." Miroku ran to take cover before one of the tentacles hit him. "Che. Che." He slid down on the ground.
"Miroku!" "Houshi!" Shippou and Sango ran towards the subjugated monk.
"Daijoubo desu ka?"
Miroku just frowned as he looked at the fight progressing in front him. ['Che, I never thought that I would wish for my curse hand.']
"Stay here, Houshi-sama." Sango stood up and readied her boomerang. "Leave it to us."
Miroku didn't reply but made a fist from his now healed used-to-be-cursed hand.
"Come on, Miroku, we should at least move back." Shippou said. He had become quite mature after their last great battle from Naraku, when he saw that there was more blood than he could stomach. ['Don't wish for it, Miroku. This is better than having your Air-Rip eat you.'] He glanced down at Miroku's fisted hand.
"Iie, Shippou, go to Kagome. See if she's all right." Miroku said without looking away from Sango as she jumped at Kirara's back to grabbed her boomerang before it could land somewhere far.
"Iie, this is no good." Myouga appeared on Shippou's shoulder. "My Inuyasha- sama's tetsusaiga is missing."
"Shut up, you flea-bag!" Shippou growled. "Inuyasha will defeat that yokai."
"But not without turning into a full yokai." Myouga closed his eyes and shook his head.
The little kitsune suddenly looked worried. "Miroku."
"Don't worry, Shippou." Miroku smirked. "That's unlikely to happen now. Look at Inuyasha's eyes, he still very much in control. Besides, he would not let that happen especially when Kagome is so near him."
"Sankon Tetsusou!!!" (Soul Scattering Iron Claw) Ripping the tentacles that took hold of Sango.
"Chikoshu! Where's its weakness?" Inuyasha growled when he saw the tentacles he just cut not only grew back but also had created small snake faced-slash-octopus-look-alike yokais out of the cut parts. "Che, they're multiplying."
"Ugh." Sango grabbed hold of Kirara's neck upon getting release from the tentacles. "What are we to do Inuyasha? We can't keep cutting it."
"I know that, Sango!"
"INUYASHA!" Kagome ran towards him.
"Stay there, Kagome!" Inuyasha shouted back. The last thing he needed is to see Kagome in danger.
Kagome was shocked at Inuyasha's reaction. "Iie, Inuyasha."
Inuyasha seeing that Kagome was not paying attention to him, immediately cut the tentacles that were coming in between him and Kagome.
"Stupid wench!" He hissed as he dropped in front of Kagome protecting her from the yokai's wrath.
"I, Inuyasha." Kagome gasped, "I think I know where his weakness is."
"Nani?"
"I think it's in his neck!" Kagome pointed at the symbol of a two-headed snake in the middle of the yokai's neck. "I noticed that every time you get near him- it tried to protect it. Plus, every time there's a new yokai born from his part that symbol glow."
"Nani?" Inuyasha looked at his companion and knew he could trust her instinct. She never had been wrong before. "Why didn't you tell me before?" Walking towards the yokai more confident than before. 'Sou ka.'
"Now, this is the end of you."
ON TO CHAPTER 4
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I'm not very good at actions. hopefully it's descriptive enough. And that you guys didn't get confuse. I'm better at drawing comics, that's why I did this to find out if I could be good at writing too. =)
Criticize me but don't flame me.
Please Review. Tell me how I could improve this chapter.
*INUYUSHA is own by Rumiko Takahashi yadda, yadda,yadda. You get my point.*
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Thank you to all of you who review my piece.
ArtemisMoon
-I'm very glad that you like my story. I'm sorry about the typos and spelling errors- I'll go work on it soon. P.S. English is not my first language and grammar is not my favorite subject either. But I'm doing all that I can to improve on both subjects. Thank you for telling me where to improve. I'm sorry that I cut Inuyasha's hair, I'm not a fan of guys having long hair, although, with Inuyasha- maybe I could make an exception to the rule, eh. Don't worry though because it's not that short. And about his doggy ears. hmmm. let me think about it. [When you pointed out to me what I did with his hair and ears, I scratched my head and wonder why I did it too, since I love his hair and ears so much.] Anyway, aside from his ears and hair, I think you'll be happy to know that I kept most of his features and abilities. You'll find it out sooner or later. ^_^
Usagipegusus
-Don't worry I'll be continuing the story. Especially now since I'm on a break. So, expect updates soon. ^_~
P-120 -The first chapter is short because I was thinking of making a prologue. The following chapters will be long though. You must like reading a lot. ^_^
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JAPANESE TRANSLATION:
Che- Shit
Sengoku Jidai-Warring States Period
Yokai- monster, demon
Daijoubo desu ka?-are you all right?; are you okay?
Houshi-sama- a title for a priest; Miroku's title
Kitsune- a magical fox creature believe to be crafty and change its appearance on whims; Shippou's specie
Sankon Tetsusou-Soul Scattering Iron Claw: Inuyasha's weapon- his sharp claws
Chikoshu-damn it
Iie-no
Nani-what?
Sou ka- is that so
*Let's begin cleaning out the confusion, shall we?*
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Chapter 3: The Beginning of the End
SENGOKU JIDAI.
"Inuyasha, this is the last of the shards," Kagome shouted at her hanyo companion who was still fighting an evil snake face-slash-octopus-like- yokai. They already defeated Naraku even before any of them could complete the crystal. However, defeating Naraku does not mean the end of the mission, since there were still shards needed to be complete before it could cause more trouble to others. So now, they were fighting once again for the current owner of the shard was unwilling to give it up.
"Un." Inuyasha ducked to avoid one of the tentacles that were speedily approaching him. ['Where the hell did he hide my Tetsusaiga?'] He was not so worried about turning into a full-yokai, since he didn't feel threatened thus his body is still in his control. But then again defeating this annoying Naraku-look-alike-yokai could have been done faster with his tetsusaiga. Now, he just had to do with what he has-his claws!
"Che." Miroku ran to take cover before one of the tentacles hit him. "Che. Che." He slid down on the ground.
"Miroku!" "Houshi!" Shippou and Sango ran towards the subjugated monk.
"Daijoubo desu ka?"
Miroku just frowned as he looked at the fight progressing in front him. ['Che, I never thought that I would wish for my curse hand.']
"Stay here, Houshi-sama." Sango stood up and readied her boomerang. "Leave it to us."
Miroku didn't reply but made a fist from his now healed used-to-be-cursed hand.
"Come on, Miroku, we should at least move back." Shippou said. He had become quite mature after their last great battle from Naraku, when he saw that there was more blood than he could stomach. ['Don't wish for it, Miroku. This is better than having your Air-Rip eat you.'] He glanced down at Miroku's fisted hand.
"Iie, Shippou, go to Kagome. See if she's all right." Miroku said without looking away from Sango as she jumped at Kirara's back to grabbed her boomerang before it could land somewhere far.
"Iie, this is no good." Myouga appeared on Shippou's shoulder. "My Inuyasha- sama's tetsusaiga is missing."
"Shut up, you flea-bag!" Shippou growled. "Inuyasha will defeat that yokai."
"But not without turning into a full yokai." Myouga closed his eyes and shook his head.
The little kitsune suddenly looked worried. "Miroku."
"Don't worry, Shippou." Miroku smirked. "That's unlikely to happen now. Look at Inuyasha's eyes, he still very much in control. Besides, he would not let that happen especially when Kagome is so near him."
"Sankon Tetsusou!!!" (Soul Scattering Iron Claw) Ripping the tentacles that took hold of Sango.
"Chikoshu! Where's its weakness?" Inuyasha growled when he saw the tentacles he just cut not only grew back but also had created small snake faced-slash-octopus-look-alike yokais out of the cut parts. "Che, they're multiplying."
"Ugh." Sango grabbed hold of Kirara's neck upon getting release from the tentacles. "What are we to do Inuyasha? We can't keep cutting it."
"I know that, Sango!"
"INUYASHA!" Kagome ran towards him.
"Stay there, Kagome!" Inuyasha shouted back. The last thing he needed is to see Kagome in danger.
Kagome was shocked at Inuyasha's reaction. "Iie, Inuyasha."
Inuyasha seeing that Kagome was not paying attention to him, immediately cut the tentacles that were coming in between him and Kagome.
"Stupid wench!" He hissed as he dropped in front of Kagome protecting her from the yokai's wrath.
"I, Inuyasha." Kagome gasped, "I think I know where his weakness is."
"Nani?"
"I think it's in his neck!" Kagome pointed at the symbol of a two-headed snake in the middle of the yokai's neck. "I noticed that every time you get near him- it tried to protect it. Plus, every time there's a new yokai born from his part that symbol glow."
"Nani?" Inuyasha looked at his companion and knew he could trust her instinct. She never had been wrong before. "Why didn't you tell me before?" Walking towards the yokai more confident than before. 'Sou ka.'
"Now, this is the end of you."
ON TO CHAPTER 4
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I'm not very good at actions. hopefully it's descriptive enough. And that you guys didn't get confuse. I'm better at drawing comics, that's why I did this to find out if I could be good at writing too. =)
Criticize me but don't flame me.
Please Review. Tell me how I could improve this chapter.
