AAAAAAAHHHH!! The last chapter was absolutly horrible!!!! I just re-read it
and I can't bear it!! I am so sorry guys! No wonder I don't have any
reviews!!
Jadeyuy: *takes bite of candy bar* Thank you for the review Kanatasha! You're the only one so far!
Jade's dictionary!: Yes, I have a dictionary of my own. I tend to make up words as some people do. So, if you come accross a word that you dont know the meaning, or if you KNOW it doesnt exsists...laugh at it or ask me about it.
One more thing. I have read summeries of Yu-gi-oh manga and know what actually happened in Egypt. But I'll probably change the story a bit and add a bit of my imagination. If you REALLY want to know what happened, go to .
Okay, its chapter two! Heehee....I actually have no idea whats going to happen in this chapter...so hang on tight while I write it as I go!
REVIEW OR I'LL HUNT YOU DOWN!
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The brilliant burning of the sunlight began to make its way into his slumbering eyelides as he slowly become aware of his surroundings. He relaxed and let himself flow into wakefulness when he begun to realize a detail that was a bit defferent than he remembered before. It didnt get this hot in Japan! Especailly in the early hours of the day!
This suddenly realizment jerked him completley awake and into alertfullness. It was then that it occured to him that he was not in his bed made up of a simple mat and a blanket anymore, but a large gracious bed under silk off-white sheets and a pillow that he found he wasnt to fond of (A/N okay, pillows in the old day were CRAP! I know! I always go to these pioneer museams feel them! AAAHH!! And this is almost 4,000 years before! Did they have pillows of sorts?) due to its uncomfortablness. 'Wait a minute...this is familiar...'. Yami abruptly sat up and observed his surroundings. This was ancient Egypt! What was he doing here?
"Your majesty.." A voice called from outside his massive doors. He raised an ear at the familiar sound (A/N does that make him sound like a rabbit? I dont care, it sounds good). Was that who he thought it was?
"Your majesty." He said again and the doors opened to reviel a tall brawny man...Seto Kaiba!! "Are you awake?"
It took a minute to pull himself together. Yes, he remembered now. Back during Battle City it had been revieled by Isis that Kaiba had indeed been one of his preists.
"Err...yes...I am awake." He bit his lip as he crawled out of the bed *with much effort* (A/N I would have trouble getting out of a bed THAT big), and stood before the preist uneasily. 'What is going on!'
"Your majesty, the attack against Bakura failed once more., an-" None of this was reaching Yami's ears for he began to hear another voice. Its exquiset sound reached his ears as a soft ringing bell rejoicing the coming of springtime as it sang its song as elegent as the birds. Seth began to notice his majesty's attention was elswhere and he stopped.
Yami, noticing this, turned to him. "What..what is this song I hear? It is so familiar to me." (A/N the dubbed version of this show makes Yami sound so proper. So, I'll just keep it that way when he is around other people besides himself).
"I sure hope it is familiar to you. It is your mother's song." Seth replied in his usual smuggish tone. But Yami also caught a bit of peaceful sound in it also. He wasn't surprised, though. Who could feel otherwise with such a beautiful voice and calming words. But something was different. It didnt seem the same as his mothers.
"She works hard at it. But I don't think she'll ever replace her." Seth said and then he left the room.
"Who replace her?" Yami asked alarmed as he escaped out into the hall also. He gasped...it wasn't the hall!
"Bel-Um-Fal, my son." A loud voice reached his ears as he looked down the hall to find a tall, thin woman who's beauty resembled that of a red rose in a morning of a winter storm...his mother.
"My son. Why haven't you kept your promise?"
Yami stared dumbfounded down the hall at her confused. "A promise? What promise?"
She didn't respond. Then suddenly without notice, beneith him the ground began to shake almost throwing him to the ground. The sky darkened, and a storm came upon Egypt within seconds. Yami froze in terror to the familar action and tried to think of a way out of what was happening. 'The shadow realm...it was....'
"Mother!" he cried out for her only to realize that she had dissapeared...and he was left alone.
"Yami?" A voice suddenly sounded, seemingly above him. "Yami!"
He tried to answer the distressed voice, but he suddenly found himself enfulged in a dark blackness (A/N dark was kinda redundent) as he began to thrash about wildly to get away from it.
"Yami! Yami!"
It was then suddenly that the blackness began to dissapear and a blurred face appeared above him.
"Yami! Are you okay?"
"Wha-?" He found it harder to speak and the face was slowly coming into focus. It was the concerned face of his own hikari, his aibou.
"Yugi?" He mananged to say as he tried to sit up. Yugi continued to hold his arms tightly, nearly crying.
"Oh Yami! What happened? Are you alright? I woke up to find you thrashing in your sleep and whimpering (A/N can you guys see Yami wimpering?), so I came over and-oh! It was so awful!"
Yami leaned over to hug his hikari in comfort. Though the truth was he really was the one that needed it the most. The dream...it confused him greatly. Could is possibly be another memory? What was his mother trying to tell him?
"Yes, I am alright, Yugi." He patted his back. "It was just a dream concerning the shadow realm. Lets go back to sleep."
"As long as your alright." Yugi half heartedly smiled. Within moments of thier talk, everything was the way it was and Yugi was asleep again. Yami found it hard to sleep again as he layed there in deep thought. 'What could it have ment?'
Is this chapter shorter than the last? It seems like it
That's the end of this chapter. I have no interest of proof reading it so I'm sorry for all the mistakes. If your confused...review and ask me. If your not....REVIEW ANYWAY!!!
jadeyuy
Jadeyuy: *takes bite of candy bar* Thank you for the review Kanatasha! You're the only one so far!
Jade's dictionary!: Yes, I have a dictionary of my own. I tend to make up words as some people do. So, if you come accross a word that you dont know the meaning, or if you KNOW it doesnt exsists...laugh at it or ask me about it.
One more thing. I have read summeries of Yu-gi-oh manga and know what actually happened in Egypt. But I'll probably change the story a bit and add a bit of my imagination. If you REALLY want to know what happened, go to .
Okay, its chapter two! Heehee....I actually have no idea whats going to happen in this chapter...so hang on tight while I write it as I go!
REVIEW OR I'LL HUNT YOU DOWN!
************************************************* pretty stars (
The brilliant burning of the sunlight began to make its way into his slumbering eyelides as he slowly become aware of his surroundings. He relaxed and let himself flow into wakefulness when he begun to realize a detail that was a bit defferent than he remembered before. It didnt get this hot in Japan! Especailly in the early hours of the day!
This suddenly realizment jerked him completley awake and into alertfullness. It was then that it occured to him that he was not in his bed made up of a simple mat and a blanket anymore, but a large gracious bed under silk off-white sheets and a pillow that he found he wasnt to fond of (A/N okay, pillows in the old day were CRAP! I know! I always go to these pioneer museams feel them! AAAHH!! And this is almost 4,000 years before! Did they have pillows of sorts?) due to its uncomfortablness. 'Wait a minute...this is familiar...'. Yami abruptly sat up and observed his surroundings. This was ancient Egypt! What was he doing here?
"Your majesty.." A voice called from outside his massive doors. He raised an ear at the familiar sound (A/N does that make him sound like a rabbit? I dont care, it sounds good). Was that who he thought it was?
"Your majesty." He said again and the doors opened to reviel a tall brawny man...Seto Kaiba!! "Are you awake?"
It took a minute to pull himself together. Yes, he remembered now. Back during Battle City it had been revieled by Isis that Kaiba had indeed been one of his preists.
"Err...yes...I am awake." He bit his lip as he crawled out of the bed *with much effort* (A/N I would have trouble getting out of a bed THAT big), and stood before the preist uneasily. 'What is going on!'
"Your majesty, the attack against Bakura failed once more., an-" None of this was reaching Yami's ears for he began to hear another voice. Its exquiset sound reached his ears as a soft ringing bell rejoicing the coming of springtime as it sang its song as elegent as the birds. Seth began to notice his majesty's attention was elswhere and he stopped.
Yami, noticing this, turned to him. "What..what is this song I hear? It is so familiar to me." (A/N the dubbed version of this show makes Yami sound so proper. So, I'll just keep it that way when he is around other people besides himself).
"I sure hope it is familiar to you. It is your mother's song." Seth replied in his usual smuggish tone. But Yami also caught a bit of peaceful sound in it also. He wasn't surprised, though. Who could feel otherwise with such a beautiful voice and calming words. But something was different. It didnt seem the same as his mothers.
"She works hard at it. But I don't think she'll ever replace her." Seth said and then he left the room.
"Who replace her?" Yami asked alarmed as he escaped out into the hall also. He gasped...it wasn't the hall!
"Bel-Um-Fal, my son." A loud voice reached his ears as he looked down the hall to find a tall, thin woman who's beauty resembled that of a red rose in a morning of a winter storm...his mother.
"My son. Why haven't you kept your promise?"
Yami stared dumbfounded down the hall at her confused. "A promise? What promise?"
She didn't respond. Then suddenly without notice, beneith him the ground began to shake almost throwing him to the ground. The sky darkened, and a storm came upon Egypt within seconds. Yami froze in terror to the familar action and tried to think of a way out of what was happening. 'The shadow realm...it was....'
"Mother!" he cried out for her only to realize that she had dissapeared...and he was left alone.
"Yami?" A voice suddenly sounded, seemingly above him. "Yami!"
He tried to answer the distressed voice, but he suddenly found himself enfulged in a dark blackness (A/N dark was kinda redundent) as he began to thrash about wildly to get away from it.
"Yami! Yami!"
It was then suddenly that the blackness began to dissapear and a blurred face appeared above him.
"Yami! Are you okay?"
"Wha-?" He found it harder to speak and the face was slowly coming into focus. It was the concerned face of his own hikari, his aibou.
"Yugi?" He mananged to say as he tried to sit up. Yugi continued to hold his arms tightly, nearly crying.
"Oh Yami! What happened? Are you alright? I woke up to find you thrashing in your sleep and whimpering (A/N can you guys see Yami wimpering?), so I came over and-oh! It was so awful!"
Yami leaned over to hug his hikari in comfort. Though the truth was he really was the one that needed it the most. The dream...it confused him greatly. Could is possibly be another memory? What was his mother trying to tell him?
"Yes, I am alright, Yugi." He patted his back. "It was just a dream concerning the shadow realm. Lets go back to sleep."
"As long as your alright." Yugi half heartedly smiled. Within moments of thier talk, everything was the way it was and Yugi was asleep again. Yami found it hard to sleep again as he layed there in deep thought. 'What could it have ment?'
Is this chapter shorter than the last? It seems like it
That's the end of this chapter. I have no interest of proof reading it so I'm sorry for all the mistakes. If your confused...review and ask me. If your not....REVIEW ANYWAY!!!
jadeyuy