Well...this is the real chapter 1...the other was kinda like a short short
short ideal of what happening...soo yeahhh!! As for the fact a lot of ppl
do these stories...really?? I never found any...n gods...the ppl are
starting to get on my nerves calling Goku a girl!!! HES NOT A GIRL!!! As
for the name?? lol..I got no idea!! Lol, someone plz help me come up with
one?? All names are can be suggested. And as for grammar I SUCK!!! Soo all
ideas are welcome and thanks for my mistake in chapter 1...and I think I
did pretty good for writing it in a hurry in the first 10 min before I had
to leave for school lol.
As she sat down she tapped her foot impatiently waiting for her companions to come down so they can eat. Never once did the thought of eating out Sanzo's card passed her mind, never once had she thought they would run out. So why worry when it never happen before? Not her of course, she smiled as she ordered everything on the list knowing that they couldn't run out of money.
The waiter sweatdropped as the boy's list continue on and on. He looked at the boy, not knowing where all the food went.
"And that'll be all," she said happily.
The waiter nodded as he slow trudged back to the kitchen hoping that the group would never pass by again, no matter how much they'll get from these people, they were just plain scary.
"Good morning," Hakkai smiled as he and the rest of the companions sat down.
"About time you guys got down, I already order food, so hopefully we can eat soon," she said happily.
"Chi, have you ever thought that I might run out of money one day?" ask Sanzo looking at the pile of food when it had come.
"Honto?" ask Goku.
"Well when that happens we'll worry, but until then...LETS EAT!" yell Goku digging into the food.
"Bakasaru," said Sanzo.
"When that happens I'll sell you," he mumbled.
Goku overhead him and pouted adorably.
"Ne Sanzo, you won't really do that will you?" Goku asked his eyes wide and trusting.
Sanzo sigh and took out his glasses and open the newspaper ignoring the boy.
"Ne Sanzo, you won't right?" Goku asked.
"Ne Ne, right Sanzo?" Goku asked again not taking silence as an answer, while the other 2 companions ignore them and ate.
"SANZOOO," Goku whined.
A stress mark appeared as Sanzo tried his best to keep calm.
"Sanzoooooo," Goku whine again.
"SHUT UP YOU STUPID MONKEY!!!" Sanzo yelled hitting Goku with the fan then kicking him.
"QUIT ASKING QUESTIONS BEFORE I MAKE YOU PAY FOR THE FOOD," he yelled as he continues beating up Goku.
"Ma ma," said Hakkai as he stopped Sanzo.
"Don't be too rough on the boy, he's only a child," said Hakkai helping Goku up.
Sanzo snorted and went back to his newspaper.
Goku pouted as he continued to stare at Sanzo.
"Oi Goku, eat up before I eat it all," said Gojyo tossing him a bun.
Goku ignored him and hurried to finish his breakfast.
"That was good," said Goku leaning back in his chair only to lose his balance and landed on the floor.
"ITTAI!" he whined as he rubbed his butt.
"Bakasaru, that's what you get for leaning back too much," said Gojyo smiling as he also lean back only to fall also.
"THE HELL?" he yelled as he stood up from his fall.
It was Goku's turn to smirk as Gojyo yelled at the chair.
"THAT'S ENOUGH," yelled Sanzo as he whacked Gojyo with the fan.
"ITAI," Gojyo whined.
"What was that for," he yelled at the monk.
"Ma ma," said Hakkai.
"We should go, the workers are starting to give us dirty looks," Hakkai said as he grabbed his stuff and took it outside.
Goku smiled as he grabbed his stuff and bounce outside happy that for once Gojyo got hit more than him.
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What do you guys think?? I thought it was pretty good...Plz read my other fanfic called New Beginnings and RR that one also. I feel silly if I had better reviews on 1 that I didn't spend as much time as the other.
As she sat down she tapped her foot impatiently waiting for her companions to come down so they can eat. Never once did the thought of eating out Sanzo's card passed her mind, never once had she thought they would run out. So why worry when it never happen before? Not her of course, she smiled as she ordered everything on the list knowing that they couldn't run out of money.
The waiter sweatdropped as the boy's list continue on and on. He looked at the boy, not knowing where all the food went.
"And that'll be all," she said happily.
The waiter nodded as he slow trudged back to the kitchen hoping that the group would never pass by again, no matter how much they'll get from these people, they were just plain scary.
"Good morning," Hakkai smiled as he and the rest of the companions sat down.
"About time you guys got down, I already order food, so hopefully we can eat soon," she said happily.
"Chi, have you ever thought that I might run out of money one day?" ask Sanzo looking at the pile of food when it had come.
"Honto?" ask Goku.
"Well when that happens we'll worry, but until then...LETS EAT!" yell Goku digging into the food.
"Bakasaru," said Sanzo.
"When that happens I'll sell you," he mumbled.
Goku overhead him and pouted adorably.
"Ne Sanzo, you won't really do that will you?" Goku asked his eyes wide and trusting.
Sanzo sigh and took out his glasses and open the newspaper ignoring the boy.
"Ne Sanzo, you won't right?" Goku asked.
"Ne Ne, right Sanzo?" Goku asked again not taking silence as an answer, while the other 2 companions ignore them and ate.
"SANZOOO," Goku whined.
A stress mark appeared as Sanzo tried his best to keep calm.
"Sanzoooooo," Goku whine again.
"SHUT UP YOU STUPID MONKEY!!!" Sanzo yelled hitting Goku with the fan then kicking him.
"QUIT ASKING QUESTIONS BEFORE I MAKE YOU PAY FOR THE FOOD," he yelled as he continues beating up Goku.
"Ma ma," said Hakkai as he stopped Sanzo.
"Don't be too rough on the boy, he's only a child," said Hakkai helping Goku up.
Sanzo snorted and went back to his newspaper.
Goku pouted as he continued to stare at Sanzo.
"Oi Goku, eat up before I eat it all," said Gojyo tossing him a bun.
Goku ignored him and hurried to finish his breakfast.
"That was good," said Goku leaning back in his chair only to lose his balance and landed on the floor.
"ITTAI!" he whined as he rubbed his butt.
"Bakasaru, that's what you get for leaning back too much," said Gojyo smiling as he also lean back only to fall also.
"THE HELL?" he yelled as he stood up from his fall.
It was Goku's turn to smirk as Gojyo yelled at the chair.
"THAT'S ENOUGH," yelled Sanzo as he whacked Gojyo with the fan.
"ITAI," Gojyo whined.
"What was that for," he yelled at the monk.
"Ma ma," said Hakkai.
"We should go, the workers are starting to give us dirty looks," Hakkai said as he grabbed his stuff and took it outside.
Goku smiled as he grabbed his stuff and bounce outside happy that for once Gojyo got hit more than him.
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What do you guys think?? I thought it was pretty good...Plz read my other fanfic called New Beginnings and RR that one also. I feel silly if I had better reviews on 1 that I didn't spend as much time as the other.