Chapter two, wow, that was the most reviews I have ever gotten on one
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Chapter two: fitting in
Neo had only been in the home for two weeks and already he had noticed how alike he was to them, he could eat as much as Goku which had chi-chi cooking almost non stop. Goku and Neo also had many other similar qualities like; their sense of justice and fairness. Neo had also discovered that he had better be one of the first people to the table at meals or he wouldn't be full afterwards. Which was why Neo was sitting at the table eyeing Goku down. Gohan walked in with a girl who looked about Neo's age.
"hey dad!" sad Gohan cheerily.
"hey Gohan, and you brought Pan!" said Goku standing, running and hugging them both in one swift movement. "hey you're just in time for breakfast!" Gohan sat next to pan and me sat across the table, next to Goku. "Gohan grinned "I guess that breakfast here hasn't changed all that much" he turned to me "so how are you settling in?"
"I'm ok" I said turning my head, he looked truly concerned "well.. I said after a while of his gaze "I do miss a couple of people like my step mom and dad and one of the girls at my school also I just miss my old house and the way that it felt" Gohan nodded.
"but are you happy here?" he asked sincerely.
"yes! Oh please don't take what I said the wrong way, even with the dad things this is the happiest I have ever been in my life, I feel like." He paused for a while as he tried to come up with exactly what to say, then he knew that there was only one way to describe it. "I feel like I'm home." Gohan's grin widened into a smile.
"I'm really glad to hear that, neo, I don't think that you've met my daughter, pan yet." Neo looked across the table at pan, she had her father's eyes and her mothers hair 'and probably her hot temper as well' Neo thought to himself. Then Chi chi came in with two enormous plates of food, the smell was enough to set both me and Goku drooling, Gohan laughed. "It's amazing how much alike you two are!" he exclaimed through a fit of chuckles. Goku and Neo looked at each other, both of us still salivating due to the delicious odor and both of our stomachs gave a tremendous rumble at the same time that shook the house. Which just sent Gohan reeling with mirth. Goku and Neo both started laughing at each other and dug into the food. {Have you EVER seen four hungry Sayians eat? It's not pretty} food was flying from the plate to their mouths faster than should be humanly possible and in no time all the food was gone and Chi chi looked rather flustered and disgusted.
Chi chi went back into the kitchen and Gohan started to carry plates of food to her, Goku leaned back, rubbing his stomach. "Neo?" he asked, Neo turned his head to look at him curiously "you want to train tomorrow with me?" Neo had to think about it, he didn't want to get in Goku's way but he also wanted to see how life was here, also, he wanted to fit in. so Neo nodded with a smile.
"That's great son!" said Goku happily a huge smile exploding on his face. " I was hoping you would say that, other wise it was to school for you!" Neo sighed, he had really disliked school, the noise the arrogant teachers, it was all just too much for Neo.
Latter that day Goku built my room off of Gohan's, it was a little smaller than Neo previous room but he loved it all the same. It had two windows so it was pretty well lit and it had all the necessities, a bed a light and the rest of it was empty. There was a tree right out side his window and he had a beautiful view of the mountains. Neo was completely absorbed by the mountains and just enchanted by nature. That might have been why he never heard Goku enter.
"Are you alright son?" neo whirled around, he really didn't want to be waken up from his enchantment but he was glad for company any way.
"Yeah I'm fine." It was still hard for neo to call Goku dad, he knew that it was true but still. He could feel the bond between this man and him self growing. It was strange just two weeks ago he knew that school was the only way to go, two weeks ago he knew people couldn't fly without air planes, two weeks ago he had a different family. "Dad?" the word came hard. "Who broke us apart? I know that you are my father but I can also feel a rift between us." Goku looked concerned.
"I you want to know the monsters name was Ch^en. It was so powerful that not even all of us together could even dent him. But it wasn't us he was after, it was you, so everyone who was still alive had to decide to let you go." Goku's voice broke when he said 'let you go' but the mask of sorrow that had creased his face was instantly replaced by a huge smile. "but your home now and Ch^en is gone so that doesn't matter!" that was why Neo loved Goku, he never let anything keep him down and he always bounced back with a smile. "Oh, and Chi chi bought these for you!" he reached behind his back and pull out a training GI, it was black and had white boots. Goku left so he could put it on. So Neo went ahead and tried it, it was a good fit. Neo was amazed at how much freedom of movement it had. Goku came back in.
"Wow Neo, that really fits great, doesn't it?" Goku said grinning broadly. The rest of the day was spent by Neo helping Chi chi with the cooking and cleaning.
That night some thing strange happened that Neo hadn't noticed, he slept fitfully for the first time in months. But also above the planet earth a star exploded.
The next morning wasn't quite the feeding frenzy of yesterday but it was ample. After break fast Goku and went out side, Goku lifted me from under my arms and flew. He flew until we reached a barren place with only a couple of mountains in the distance. Goku set me down.
"what is this place, dad?" asked neo looking around.
"This is where we once fought a strong guy called cell but hat doesn't matter!" he crossed his arms over his chest "its time to start your training" he sat me down and started to talk. "Now, son, look for your center, it should be a warm feeling once you have it you have to pull it out of your body and focus it into your hands." Neo concentrated, it took him a long time to find his 'center' and when he tried to pull it out he found that it wouldn't budge. So Neo pulled harder, still it wouldn't budge. 'After all of this I can't even pull this stupid warmth out of my body!' this got Neo very annoyed.
Goku's view
Goku was really excited about his son, he had never sensed such immense power in a person with no formal training, but it seemed that he was having trouble getting his power out, he noticed that Neo was beginning to get angry 'that's it son! Get angry, let all of your emotion feed into this!' suddenly Neo growled and white flames burst around him, but that wasn't all Neo's rage had been tempted. Neo's power rose defiantly and then Goku realized, neo didn't know how to control his power enough to go super, if neo didn't calm down then he would burst, his current form just wouldn't be able to handle it.
"Neo!" said Goku sternly, Neo broke his concentration to look at Goku.
"what?" asked Neo nervously, afraid that he had done something wrong. Goku smiled kindly.
"don't worry, it's nothing you did," when Goku said that Neo let out a breath that he had been holding in "it's what you almost did." A confused look passed over Neo's face.
"what I almost did?" neo asked cautiously, he didn't want to upset his father, he owed so much to him. But neo woke up from dream-land just in time to catch Goku nodding.
"I had forgotten that you had never used your Ki before, and, if you don't learn to control it before you access it then you would have died." He said the last word softly and neo knew that Goku would rather die then loose Neo again, it was a welcome, warm feeling. "but," said Goku grinning "I know a place where we can train in peace and no one would get hurt." Goku picked Neo up again and flew. 'I got to get him to Kami's looked out, room of spirit and time here we come!' Goku powered up to SSJ two and blasted off towards the look out. In almost no time at all the thin, tall tower was in sight, neo couldn't understand how such a thin tower could stand so tall. 'I should probably introduce him to Korin.' Thought Goku, so he flew to the tower and started to fly up it, soon, the small roundhouse came into view. Goku flew up and landed inside, putting Neo down he looked around. It wasn't long be fore Korin came up behind neo.
"so Goku, this is the boy huh, I never expected to you again" Neo whirled round and took a good look at the cat. "is their something on my face?" neo leapt back.
"it talks?!" it was a half statement half question, Korin raised his eye brow.
"yes," Korin said dryly "you can close your mouth now." Korin added after a short silence. But as Korin had pointed out Neo's mouth as indeed hanging wide open in shock. Neo closed his mouth quickly and shook Korin's hand erm, paw. Goku grabbed neo and flew up to Kami's which reminded neo of a top with a castle on its flat face, it had a confortable air about it. Goku landed and sat Neo down softly. It wasn't long before a small green being came out of the grand house, followed by a rather well fed, shiny black guy with red lips, he wore a turban while the green guy wore robes a earthy colors, browns, whites and the such.
"Hi Dende!" yelled Goku waving enthusiastically. The green child smiled and waved back,
"Who's this?" asked Dende, looking at neo, interest evident on his face.
Goku smiled "this is my son Neo!" he put a reassuring hand on Neo's back as he said it "we were wondering if we could use the room of spirit and time so I can train him without hurting any thing."
"That's not a problem Goku!" said Dende smiling "you know that its your last time in and you know the other rules so I have no problem with it." Dende pointed to a stairwell that led up into the house. Goku walked up the stairs and neo followed him closely. Finally at the top of the stairs they came to a heavy set wooden door. Goku opened it and walked inside.
Neo was astonished by what was in the room or I should say the lack of stuff in the room. By the door it had a fridge and two beds, the rest was a milky bluish-white color that seemed to have no substance but was solid enough under your feet.
"Now we can begin your training!" said Goku smiling broadly from ear to ear. Goku started Neo much the same way he had before, by having neo attempt to master his Ki. The first time neo had fainted because that power he had tapped was so vast he couldn't handle it. The second time Goku had helped him channel some of his power through anger and by the end of the lesson neo had been flying, something that he had really wanted to do ever since Goku had flown him up here.
Earlier that day Goku had told him that he would learn Ki attacks and the next day Neo would learn martial arts, he seemed to think that it would only take neo one day to learn the arts so that was why the two were far away from the door.
"Okay, neo, power up as far as you can." Goku put his hands on his hips as the white glow appeared around neo once more. Neo growled at the effort but he didn't let hinder him, he made the effort into anger and it came easier. "Good now try to focus it into your hands, a ball should be easiest." Neo's brow furrowed in concentration he could feel his Ki rebelling to being told hat to do but even though a balls began to swirl into existence. "Good now send it from you in any direction that you wish and don't worry once you do this more it will come easier." Neo tried to send it away but it just wouldn't go it sat stubbornly in his hand. Finally Neo got frustrated and he poured his frustration into anger and the ball flew, quick as lightning, Neo let it dissipate after it flew for a ways. "I think that that is enough for today, neo, this stuff doesn't come easy." Neo shook his head.
"I got to far to go, I need to keep going until I drop or I will never catch up." Neo formed another ball and fired it into nothingness. "I can handle this, dad" said Neo determinedly "I have to e ready for what you're going to teach me next." Goku looked on with pride, he had been hoping that neo would say what he did because he had wanted to know if neo had he fighting spirit to drive him onward.
For the next two weeks neo did nothing but eat, fly and fling Ki balls in to the blue mists. By the end of it Goku had taken him aside and taught him the Kamehameha attack and the Kaioken power up. And neo had gotten very good at Ki and flying. But soon Goku had told him that he had advanced as far as he wanted neo to go before teaching him martial arts.
"Neo," said Goku smiling, his eyes gleaming with pride at his sons accomplishments. "You had gone far beyond where I thought you'd be when I started teaching you and I am really excited about teaching you this." Goku put his hands on his hips, waiting, letting neo process the information. Finally Goku lowered into a fighting stance and grinned "Ya ready!?"
at first Neo couldn't keep up with Goku but after a while something in side of Neo began to recognize Goku's attacks and Neo even started to block them. The first time this happened Goku froze for a moment, unsure if what h had seen really had happened, Neo had used an advanced block with out being told how to perform it, and he had done it in perfect form! Goku blinked 'May bee it's like what Ubu went through, his powers and style are awakening instead of growing' Goku thought briefly and he decided that he would find out. Goku went harder on neo but still Neo's power and from rose to match Goku's, punch for punch I wasn't until Goku's power was border lining Super Sayian that Goku finally out classed him and hit neo squarely on the nose. Both Goku and Neo were breathing heavily, sweat almost pouring off of their foreheads.
"Wow son." Goku said, he was really amazed at the level Neo's skill had risen to during the battle "you did great!" Neo blinked.
"I did?" neo asked innocently. He really hadn't done much against Goku, as he thought, he was just doing what came naturally to him. But Goku seemed really pleased so h had to if done something right.
"Yeah!" said Goku laughing out loud "some of the move that you pulled in there were really advanced!" Goku rubbed the back of his head "I bet that in a few days you and I will be having some monster fights!" but the next time the two fought Goku immediately went into SSJ1 and started to royally kick ass. Neo hadn't been able to put up much of a defense but was getting angry at the thought of disappointing Goku. Goku was delivering punch after punch into Neo's stomach, which made neo wish he hadn't eaten breakfast. Finally neo began to block more and more attacks as he had done the day before but he found the punches were coming in to fast, Goku's new form was superior to his neo backed off. 'if something doesn't change then I'm squirrel fodder' neo thought so he began to power up until he hit a wall. He pushed against it but it wouldn't budge so he gave a mighty heave, yelling at the strain. Immediately neo wished he had left the wall alone, he could feel a burning pain all over him as his muscles expanded and neo grew till he was some seven foot tall. But the pain stopped as a new golden glow exploded into existence, then glow some how seemed to comfort Neo and banish the pain.
Goku was starring at Neo in astonishment. He hadn't seen that kind of super transformation since Brolly neo had become huge and his hair had gone golden and it was now going in every direction. Neo's eyes opened, Goku could see the struggle in Neo mind through his eyes, he was struggling to maintain control but seemed to be able to handle it, if only barely. Neo blasted off and threw a punch at Goku's head Goku dodged but not by much and the spar began again. Earth shattering punches were traded and received they were blocking, punching and kicking. Finally both went for a punch and each hit the other in the face, hard. They both were set on their ass and neo powered down.
How was that, plz review and I would like to suggest a fic, check out castle walls by PLS it really is an awesome fic, its got gohan.. but why am I telling you go read it!
Chapter two: fitting in
Neo had only been in the home for two weeks and already he had noticed how alike he was to them, he could eat as much as Goku which had chi-chi cooking almost non stop. Goku and Neo also had many other similar qualities like; their sense of justice and fairness. Neo had also discovered that he had better be one of the first people to the table at meals or he wouldn't be full afterwards. Which was why Neo was sitting at the table eyeing Goku down. Gohan walked in with a girl who looked about Neo's age.
"hey dad!" sad Gohan cheerily.
"hey Gohan, and you brought Pan!" said Goku standing, running and hugging them both in one swift movement. "hey you're just in time for breakfast!" Gohan sat next to pan and me sat across the table, next to Goku. "Gohan grinned "I guess that breakfast here hasn't changed all that much" he turned to me "so how are you settling in?"
"I'm ok" I said turning my head, he looked truly concerned "well.. I said after a while of his gaze "I do miss a couple of people like my step mom and dad and one of the girls at my school also I just miss my old house and the way that it felt" Gohan nodded.
"but are you happy here?" he asked sincerely.
"yes! Oh please don't take what I said the wrong way, even with the dad things this is the happiest I have ever been in my life, I feel like." He paused for a while as he tried to come up with exactly what to say, then he knew that there was only one way to describe it. "I feel like I'm home." Gohan's grin widened into a smile.
"I'm really glad to hear that, neo, I don't think that you've met my daughter, pan yet." Neo looked across the table at pan, she had her father's eyes and her mothers hair 'and probably her hot temper as well' Neo thought to himself. Then Chi chi came in with two enormous plates of food, the smell was enough to set both me and Goku drooling, Gohan laughed. "It's amazing how much alike you two are!" he exclaimed through a fit of chuckles. Goku and Neo looked at each other, both of us still salivating due to the delicious odor and both of our stomachs gave a tremendous rumble at the same time that shook the house. Which just sent Gohan reeling with mirth. Goku and Neo both started laughing at each other and dug into the food. {Have you EVER seen four hungry Sayians eat? It's not pretty} food was flying from the plate to their mouths faster than should be humanly possible and in no time all the food was gone and Chi chi looked rather flustered and disgusted.
Chi chi went back into the kitchen and Gohan started to carry plates of food to her, Goku leaned back, rubbing his stomach. "Neo?" he asked, Neo turned his head to look at him curiously "you want to train tomorrow with me?" Neo had to think about it, he didn't want to get in Goku's way but he also wanted to see how life was here, also, he wanted to fit in. so Neo nodded with a smile.
"That's great son!" said Goku happily a huge smile exploding on his face. " I was hoping you would say that, other wise it was to school for you!" Neo sighed, he had really disliked school, the noise the arrogant teachers, it was all just too much for Neo.
Latter that day Goku built my room off of Gohan's, it was a little smaller than Neo previous room but he loved it all the same. It had two windows so it was pretty well lit and it had all the necessities, a bed a light and the rest of it was empty. There was a tree right out side his window and he had a beautiful view of the mountains. Neo was completely absorbed by the mountains and just enchanted by nature. That might have been why he never heard Goku enter.
"Are you alright son?" neo whirled around, he really didn't want to be waken up from his enchantment but he was glad for company any way.
"Yeah I'm fine." It was still hard for neo to call Goku dad, he knew that it was true but still. He could feel the bond between this man and him self growing. It was strange just two weeks ago he knew that school was the only way to go, two weeks ago he knew people couldn't fly without air planes, two weeks ago he had a different family. "Dad?" the word came hard. "Who broke us apart? I know that you are my father but I can also feel a rift between us." Goku looked concerned.
"I you want to know the monsters name was Ch^en. It was so powerful that not even all of us together could even dent him. But it wasn't us he was after, it was you, so everyone who was still alive had to decide to let you go." Goku's voice broke when he said 'let you go' but the mask of sorrow that had creased his face was instantly replaced by a huge smile. "but your home now and Ch^en is gone so that doesn't matter!" that was why Neo loved Goku, he never let anything keep him down and he always bounced back with a smile. "Oh, and Chi chi bought these for you!" he reached behind his back and pull out a training GI, it was black and had white boots. Goku left so he could put it on. So Neo went ahead and tried it, it was a good fit. Neo was amazed at how much freedom of movement it had. Goku came back in.
"Wow Neo, that really fits great, doesn't it?" Goku said grinning broadly. The rest of the day was spent by Neo helping Chi chi with the cooking and cleaning.
That night some thing strange happened that Neo hadn't noticed, he slept fitfully for the first time in months. But also above the planet earth a star exploded.
The next morning wasn't quite the feeding frenzy of yesterday but it was ample. After break fast Goku and went out side, Goku lifted me from under my arms and flew. He flew until we reached a barren place with only a couple of mountains in the distance. Goku set me down.
"what is this place, dad?" asked neo looking around.
"This is where we once fought a strong guy called cell but hat doesn't matter!" he crossed his arms over his chest "its time to start your training" he sat me down and started to talk. "Now, son, look for your center, it should be a warm feeling once you have it you have to pull it out of your body and focus it into your hands." Neo concentrated, it took him a long time to find his 'center' and when he tried to pull it out he found that it wouldn't budge. So Neo pulled harder, still it wouldn't budge. 'After all of this I can't even pull this stupid warmth out of my body!' this got Neo very annoyed.
Goku's view
Goku was really excited about his son, he had never sensed such immense power in a person with no formal training, but it seemed that he was having trouble getting his power out, he noticed that Neo was beginning to get angry 'that's it son! Get angry, let all of your emotion feed into this!' suddenly Neo growled and white flames burst around him, but that wasn't all Neo's rage had been tempted. Neo's power rose defiantly and then Goku realized, neo didn't know how to control his power enough to go super, if neo didn't calm down then he would burst, his current form just wouldn't be able to handle it.
"Neo!" said Goku sternly, Neo broke his concentration to look at Goku.
"what?" asked Neo nervously, afraid that he had done something wrong. Goku smiled kindly.
"don't worry, it's nothing you did," when Goku said that Neo let out a breath that he had been holding in "it's what you almost did." A confused look passed over Neo's face.
"what I almost did?" neo asked cautiously, he didn't want to upset his father, he owed so much to him. But neo woke up from dream-land just in time to catch Goku nodding.
"I had forgotten that you had never used your Ki before, and, if you don't learn to control it before you access it then you would have died." He said the last word softly and neo knew that Goku would rather die then loose Neo again, it was a welcome, warm feeling. "but," said Goku grinning "I know a place where we can train in peace and no one would get hurt." Goku picked Neo up again and flew. 'I got to get him to Kami's looked out, room of spirit and time here we come!' Goku powered up to SSJ two and blasted off towards the look out. In almost no time at all the thin, tall tower was in sight, neo couldn't understand how such a thin tower could stand so tall. 'I should probably introduce him to Korin.' Thought Goku, so he flew to the tower and started to fly up it, soon, the small roundhouse came into view. Goku flew up and landed inside, putting Neo down he looked around. It wasn't long be fore Korin came up behind neo.
"so Goku, this is the boy huh, I never expected to you again" Neo whirled round and took a good look at the cat. "is their something on my face?" neo leapt back.
"it talks?!" it was a half statement half question, Korin raised his eye brow.
"yes," Korin said dryly "you can close your mouth now." Korin added after a short silence. But as Korin had pointed out Neo's mouth as indeed hanging wide open in shock. Neo closed his mouth quickly and shook Korin's hand erm, paw. Goku grabbed neo and flew up to Kami's which reminded neo of a top with a castle on its flat face, it had a confortable air about it. Goku landed and sat Neo down softly. It wasn't long before a small green being came out of the grand house, followed by a rather well fed, shiny black guy with red lips, he wore a turban while the green guy wore robes a earthy colors, browns, whites and the such.
"Hi Dende!" yelled Goku waving enthusiastically. The green child smiled and waved back,
"Who's this?" asked Dende, looking at neo, interest evident on his face.
Goku smiled "this is my son Neo!" he put a reassuring hand on Neo's back as he said it "we were wondering if we could use the room of spirit and time so I can train him without hurting any thing."
"That's not a problem Goku!" said Dende smiling "you know that its your last time in and you know the other rules so I have no problem with it." Dende pointed to a stairwell that led up into the house. Goku walked up the stairs and neo followed him closely. Finally at the top of the stairs they came to a heavy set wooden door. Goku opened it and walked inside.
Neo was astonished by what was in the room or I should say the lack of stuff in the room. By the door it had a fridge and two beds, the rest was a milky bluish-white color that seemed to have no substance but was solid enough under your feet.
"Now we can begin your training!" said Goku smiling broadly from ear to ear. Goku started Neo much the same way he had before, by having neo attempt to master his Ki. The first time neo had fainted because that power he had tapped was so vast he couldn't handle it. The second time Goku had helped him channel some of his power through anger and by the end of the lesson neo had been flying, something that he had really wanted to do ever since Goku had flown him up here.
Earlier that day Goku had told him that he would learn Ki attacks and the next day Neo would learn martial arts, he seemed to think that it would only take neo one day to learn the arts so that was why the two were far away from the door.
"Okay, neo, power up as far as you can." Goku put his hands on his hips as the white glow appeared around neo once more. Neo growled at the effort but he didn't let hinder him, he made the effort into anger and it came easier. "Good now try to focus it into your hands, a ball should be easiest." Neo's brow furrowed in concentration he could feel his Ki rebelling to being told hat to do but even though a balls began to swirl into existence. "Good now send it from you in any direction that you wish and don't worry once you do this more it will come easier." Neo tried to send it away but it just wouldn't go it sat stubbornly in his hand. Finally Neo got frustrated and he poured his frustration into anger and the ball flew, quick as lightning, Neo let it dissipate after it flew for a ways. "I think that that is enough for today, neo, this stuff doesn't come easy." Neo shook his head.
"I got to far to go, I need to keep going until I drop or I will never catch up." Neo formed another ball and fired it into nothingness. "I can handle this, dad" said Neo determinedly "I have to e ready for what you're going to teach me next." Goku looked on with pride, he had been hoping that neo would say what he did because he had wanted to know if neo had he fighting spirit to drive him onward.
For the next two weeks neo did nothing but eat, fly and fling Ki balls in to the blue mists. By the end of it Goku had taken him aside and taught him the Kamehameha attack and the Kaioken power up. And neo had gotten very good at Ki and flying. But soon Goku had told him that he had advanced as far as he wanted neo to go before teaching him martial arts.
"Neo," said Goku smiling, his eyes gleaming with pride at his sons accomplishments. "You had gone far beyond where I thought you'd be when I started teaching you and I am really excited about teaching you this." Goku put his hands on his hips, waiting, letting neo process the information. Finally Goku lowered into a fighting stance and grinned "Ya ready!?"
at first Neo couldn't keep up with Goku but after a while something in side of Neo began to recognize Goku's attacks and Neo even started to block them. The first time this happened Goku froze for a moment, unsure if what h had seen really had happened, Neo had used an advanced block with out being told how to perform it, and he had done it in perfect form! Goku blinked 'May bee it's like what Ubu went through, his powers and style are awakening instead of growing' Goku thought briefly and he decided that he would find out. Goku went harder on neo but still Neo's power and from rose to match Goku's, punch for punch I wasn't until Goku's power was border lining Super Sayian that Goku finally out classed him and hit neo squarely on the nose. Both Goku and Neo were breathing heavily, sweat almost pouring off of their foreheads.
"Wow son." Goku said, he was really amazed at the level Neo's skill had risen to during the battle "you did great!" Neo blinked.
"I did?" neo asked innocently. He really hadn't done much against Goku, as he thought, he was just doing what came naturally to him. But Goku seemed really pleased so h had to if done something right.
"Yeah!" said Goku laughing out loud "some of the move that you pulled in there were really advanced!" Goku rubbed the back of his head "I bet that in a few days you and I will be having some monster fights!" but the next time the two fought Goku immediately went into SSJ1 and started to royally kick ass. Neo hadn't been able to put up much of a defense but was getting angry at the thought of disappointing Goku. Goku was delivering punch after punch into Neo's stomach, which made neo wish he hadn't eaten breakfast. Finally neo began to block more and more attacks as he had done the day before but he found the punches were coming in to fast, Goku's new form was superior to his neo backed off. 'if something doesn't change then I'm squirrel fodder' neo thought so he began to power up until he hit a wall. He pushed against it but it wouldn't budge so he gave a mighty heave, yelling at the strain. Immediately neo wished he had left the wall alone, he could feel a burning pain all over him as his muscles expanded and neo grew till he was some seven foot tall. But the pain stopped as a new golden glow exploded into existence, then glow some how seemed to comfort Neo and banish the pain.
Goku was starring at Neo in astonishment. He hadn't seen that kind of super transformation since Brolly neo had become huge and his hair had gone golden and it was now going in every direction. Neo's eyes opened, Goku could see the struggle in Neo mind through his eyes, he was struggling to maintain control but seemed to be able to handle it, if only barely. Neo blasted off and threw a punch at Goku's head Goku dodged but not by much and the spar began again. Earth shattering punches were traded and received they were blocking, punching and kicking. Finally both went for a punch and each hit the other in the face, hard. They both were set on their ass and neo powered down.
How was that, plz review and I would like to suggest a fic, check out castle walls by PLS it really is an awesome fic, its got gohan.. but why am I telling you go read it!