I don't own dragonball Z (I would love to but I don't) Astral lines Chapter one What the hell?

I slammed the door to my house, it had not been a good day summer vacation had started months ago and yet I had not had one day off. My mom runs a vending business and is a workaholic so I haven't gotten to sleep earlier than 1 am this summer ether I stormed upstairs and slammed that door too ' that will show her' I thought angrily, I had worked all day and well into the night just to find that I had chores to do at home, namely it was 2 in the morning and she still had chewed me out for being a little grouchy. I walked over to the body length mirror and take a good look at my self my face looks tired my blue green eyes are determined I run my fingers over the crew cut that I always were. ' god my life is a center for misery' I thought as mom called me to do more chores ' doesn't she know the meaning of the word sleep?'. The next barrage of chores set the time to 3 in the morning but my weariness had just been worked out of me, so I sat in front of my computer and turned it on with the intention of going online the rest of the night I waited impatiently as it loaded. Before I knew it two hours had gone by when I am on the computer I just get into it, time disappears. At first I didn't here what had woken me from my coma but it had to have been loud or important 'I couldn't have been loud or mom would have woken up to' I thought ' probably just the wind' I mused. Then it happened again not a noise, more of a tingling at the back of the neck. Some one was in the house. I silently rose to my feet and walked over to my bed, 'good thing I collect this kind of stuff' the thought flashed by as I began driving all thought and feeling to the back of my mind if I had to fight a person I wanted to give it my best I reached under my bed and retrieved two items a hand and a half sword and a throwing axe I crept towards my rooms door and opened it just to be cautious I took a slow glance out the door on ether side, no one was there I went to check on mom, no one was in her bed, there was no sign of a struggle 'what happened? I would have heard her leave, where is she?' "Don't worry about your mother, Jake" the voice was cold as ice and as sharp as a knife blade "she is perfectly safe" 'who is this guy and how dose he know my name?' I swung around sword in one hand the axe in the other ready to throw. The lights flared into existence to revel a man in a black jacket and blue genes, his hair was short, his eyes a pricing purple he wore a frown, there was definitely something strange about him. ' purple?' I thought 'humans can't have purple eyes, can they?' I then mentally scolded myself ' of course it isn't his natural eyes he is wearing contact to change their color' "please put down your weapons, I didn't come to hurt or rob any one" 'ah, he thinks me an idiot, that is a grave mistake' " I just smiled and sheathed the sword and the axe but I left the axe unbuckled so that it was still available. "Thank you, you might want to be sitting down for this news can we go down to the kitchen?" I nodded curtly. "You go first, I have quite a few questions myself" he grinned. "I imagine you would" then I notices what was strange about him his eyes were slited like a cats 'what the hell?' I thought as I stared at him, he turned and began walking away he paused at the stairs and said " all questions will be answered in the kitchen, Jake, please hurry I don't have a lot of time" and with that he began descending the stairs. I let out a growl and went down after him. I found him in the living room looking at my dbz tapes " I see that you like dragonball Z...a lot" it was my turn to grin, I didn't know why but this stranger felt like a really old good friend "well, moving on, sorry for the delay" "no worries" I responded automatically. Once we were at the kitchen and we were both sitting down he let out a sigh that seemed to have been pent up in him for a long while "Is any thing wrong?" he looked up and grinned. "yes," he said "your life is wrong, I heard your ranting when you got home and you are not happy at all, I have been given permission to change this" he stopped temporally for this news to sink in completely my mind was working in over haul 'not happy? Permission?, what the hell is this guy talking about?' he must have noticed my frown and raised eye brow because he spoke instantly "I already now where your going to but your not to know, good bye, Jake" with the I felt conscience fading and my vision narrowed then it went completely and I remembered no more.

Was that a good start? Plz review ~codesage