The character comes up with a new name for him self Due to popular demand
and the demand of my friends I have decided to post the next chapter and am
planning to bring the cat-eyed man back into this story at some point of
time.
Many many thanks to;
Fool's Paradise (Jezebel) I did what I could with grammar and spell check thanks again
Ashley Herr I will make the man with the cat eyes come back.
Please continue reviewing and I will keep writing ~codesage ************************************************************************ I opened my eyes, at first my vision was blurry but as I blinked several times it slowly began to return too normal. I gazed at the green canopy; it was dense and let nearly no light through its tangled branches and leaves. I didn't recognize this place I knew that it couldn't be Maine because of the lack of pine trees 'where am I' I thought wearily. Then I became vaguely aware of voices around me "What should we do? He seems like he is coming around." At first I couldn't place then dim recognition of it came to view but it couldn't be, it couldn't be Piccolo " I don't know, Piccolo, he seems like he could be dangerous if he wanted" again it was a voice that couldn't belong to the person that I knew it had to, Goku " but I will take him home, me and chi chi can find room" then another voice I recognized spoke up "What if he turns out to be dangerous Goku?" that voice could only belong to Krillin. "Don't worry about me Krillin, if he turns out to be dangerous Piccolo will be there to help me" Goku countered "unless you would like to take care of him" Krillin's eyes went wide "Hey, hey I didn't mean that," said Krillin carefully covering his tracks "I just thought that he might be one of the androids completed early" I turned my head towards Goku's voice, determined that this was just some cruel joke but what was standing there amazed me. There not five paces away stood Krillin, Goku, Piccolo and Gohan. "Dad, is he strong enough to help with the androids, we are going to need all the help we can get." Said Gohan thoughtfully. Goku turned to smile at Gohan and Krillin when I spoke finally. "whe.....re...am...I" I started weakly "th....this........can't......be" I said in between huge breaths. I could feel myself sipping back into unconsciousness my vision narrowed "G...o....k.....u" my vision then completely shut down and I remembered nothing else. I sat up with a start and looked around, it took me around a secant to realize where I was. This was none other than Gohan's room. I took a look to my right and there was my throwing axe and my sword. My axe remained unchanged but my sword was definitely of better make. Then I took a look at my self and got another surprise I was no longer weak looking, the tank top I was wearing was stretched and my muscles were well defined and rounded I got up and looked at the mirror and my hair was spiky and platinum white but that wasn't all my eyes were like little emeralds with no whites 'what the fuck?' I thought as I looked my self over I had also grown an extra inch or two. Almost as if on beat Chi chi entered the room with a plate full of food and my stomach gave a mighty rumble. " I am glad to see you awake, you had us really worried" she put the plate of food on Gohan desk and turned to leave when I decided it was my time to speak "Um, mam?" I asked playing dumb no need to worry her needlessly "where is Goku? When can I talk to him?" I looked at her innocently enough and she turned around. "How do you know Goku?" She asked quizzically giving me a searching look 'shit!' I thought 'I gave to much away, just play it cool like when trunks got here' "I, um, can't tell you" it was lame and I knew it I just was hoping that Chi chi would not push for answers. "Oh, well okay. If you want to talk to Goku just head on out side he should be training with Piccolo and Gohan now" a look of disgust crossed her face "what am I going to do with that boy? He won't study in the day and he hasn't used the sleep teacher yet!" I left the room and left Chi chi to her lamenting. I made my way outside to see Piccolo and Goku throughing lightning fast blows towards Gohan I was amazed that I could follow them Goku spotted me and flew down leaving Piccolo to finish off Gohan. "Hi there finally awake I see" he said with one of his famous son grins "Um, Goku?" I asked timidly "could I talk to you in private please?" Goku's grin went down to a small frown. "Sure" he said. We walked a short ways away towards a forest and he finally turned around and questions tumbled out "what is it another thing of androids? What is your name how do you know mine?" they all tumbled out so fast that I barley caught them all "Um, wow, well, no I brink no more dire news," Goku let out a huge sigh of relief "Neo is my name, the rest of this is quite a tale and will take some telling." Goku nodded so I began a short recap of everything that had happened so far leaving out the dragonball z tapes. "Wow, so you cant remember how you got here?" asked Goku looking at the ground "Nope" I said "I am stuck here but I would like to help you with the androids if I can" he looked up "I mean I want to help you and your friends but also I will more than likely be here and I would like to be able to fight for myself, but if this is true then I need a master and I can think of no better than you" he grind "I guess that Piccolo could train Gohan so, yes I will train you. Wait here for a moment I'll go tell Piccolo" Goku flew off and I sat there thoughts tumbling recklessly through my mind 'what about mom? What have I gotten my self into now those androids will massacre me! But maybe if I train with Goku I might be strong enough.' just then Goku arrived and informed me that we were going to a secluded area of his land he flew over and picked me up like I was a feather "flying is so weird" I said as we flew over the landscape "Why?" Goku asked quizzically "It's just a different feeling that's all" I said. It was not long after that that we landed in a small glade with a small stream going through it to the north "so" I said turning to face Goku "what's first?" "well I would like to see how strong you are so I will teach you how to use your Ki first" this is what I really wanted to do to so I didn't complain "search for your center being" he instructed artfully " and once you feel a kind of pull bring it out of your body and center it in your hand or center it around you" I decided to try to center it around me so I cleared my mind till I entered the void once there I dug deeper and it wasn't long before I felt the pull he was taking about I tried to pull it out but it didn't want to move so I tried harder and all of a sudden it let go and I could feel it around me. i filled myself with the intoxicating stuff I felt so alive so I pulled as much as I could. I opened my eyes to see the white power radiating off of me like I was the core of a fireball. Was that good? It is really hard to keep people in character every time Goku speaks I have to sit there and wonder about how he would respond to this situation. Well anyway thank you to those whom reviewed before and I would like three reviews for my next installment thanx. ~codesage
Many many thanks to;
Fool's Paradise (Jezebel) I did what I could with grammar and spell check thanks again
Ashley Herr I will make the man with the cat eyes come back.
Please continue reviewing and I will keep writing ~codesage ************************************************************************ I opened my eyes, at first my vision was blurry but as I blinked several times it slowly began to return too normal. I gazed at the green canopy; it was dense and let nearly no light through its tangled branches and leaves. I didn't recognize this place I knew that it couldn't be Maine because of the lack of pine trees 'where am I' I thought wearily. Then I became vaguely aware of voices around me "What should we do? He seems like he is coming around." At first I couldn't place then dim recognition of it came to view but it couldn't be, it couldn't be Piccolo " I don't know, Piccolo, he seems like he could be dangerous if he wanted" again it was a voice that couldn't belong to the person that I knew it had to, Goku " but I will take him home, me and chi chi can find room" then another voice I recognized spoke up "What if he turns out to be dangerous Goku?" that voice could only belong to Krillin. "Don't worry about me Krillin, if he turns out to be dangerous Piccolo will be there to help me" Goku countered "unless you would like to take care of him" Krillin's eyes went wide "Hey, hey I didn't mean that," said Krillin carefully covering his tracks "I just thought that he might be one of the androids completed early" I turned my head towards Goku's voice, determined that this was just some cruel joke but what was standing there amazed me. There not five paces away stood Krillin, Goku, Piccolo and Gohan. "Dad, is he strong enough to help with the androids, we are going to need all the help we can get." Said Gohan thoughtfully. Goku turned to smile at Gohan and Krillin when I spoke finally. "whe.....re...am...I" I started weakly "th....this........can't......be" I said in between huge breaths. I could feel myself sipping back into unconsciousness my vision narrowed "G...o....k.....u" my vision then completely shut down and I remembered nothing else. I sat up with a start and looked around, it took me around a secant to realize where I was. This was none other than Gohan's room. I took a look to my right and there was my throwing axe and my sword. My axe remained unchanged but my sword was definitely of better make. Then I took a look at my self and got another surprise I was no longer weak looking, the tank top I was wearing was stretched and my muscles were well defined and rounded I got up and looked at the mirror and my hair was spiky and platinum white but that wasn't all my eyes were like little emeralds with no whites 'what the fuck?' I thought as I looked my self over I had also grown an extra inch or two. Almost as if on beat Chi chi entered the room with a plate full of food and my stomach gave a mighty rumble. " I am glad to see you awake, you had us really worried" she put the plate of food on Gohan desk and turned to leave when I decided it was my time to speak "Um, mam?" I asked playing dumb no need to worry her needlessly "where is Goku? When can I talk to him?" I looked at her innocently enough and she turned around. "How do you know Goku?" She asked quizzically giving me a searching look 'shit!' I thought 'I gave to much away, just play it cool like when trunks got here' "I, um, can't tell you" it was lame and I knew it I just was hoping that Chi chi would not push for answers. "Oh, well okay. If you want to talk to Goku just head on out side he should be training with Piccolo and Gohan now" a look of disgust crossed her face "what am I going to do with that boy? He won't study in the day and he hasn't used the sleep teacher yet!" I left the room and left Chi chi to her lamenting. I made my way outside to see Piccolo and Goku throughing lightning fast blows towards Gohan I was amazed that I could follow them Goku spotted me and flew down leaving Piccolo to finish off Gohan. "Hi there finally awake I see" he said with one of his famous son grins "Um, Goku?" I asked timidly "could I talk to you in private please?" Goku's grin went down to a small frown. "Sure" he said. We walked a short ways away towards a forest and he finally turned around and questions tumbled out "what is it another thing of androids? What is your name how do you know mine?" they all tumbled out so fast that I barley caught them all "Um, wow, well, no I brink no more dire news," Goku let out a huge sigh of relief "Neo is my name, the rest of this is quite a tale and will take some telling." Goku nodded so I began a short recap of everything that had happened so far leaving out the dragonball z tapes. "Wow, so you cant remember how you got here?" asked Goku looking at the ground "Nope" I said "I am stuck here but I would like to help you with the androids if I can" he looked up "I mean I want to help you and your friends but also I will more than likely be here and I would like to be able to fight for myself, but if this is true then I need a master and I can think of no better than you" he grind "I guess that Piccolo could train Gohan so, yes I will train you. Wait here for a moment I'll go tell Piccolo" Goku flew off and I sat there thoughts tumbling recklessly through my mind 'what about mom? What have I gotten my self into now those androids will massacre me! But maybe if I train with Goku I might be strong enough.' just then Goku arrived and informed me that we were going to a secluded area of his land he flew over and picked me up like I was a feather "flying is so weird" I said as we flew over the landscape "Why?" Goku asked quizzically "It's just a different feeling that's all" I said. It was not long after that that we landed in a small glade with a small stream going through it to the north "so" I said turning to face Goku "what's first?" "well I would like to see how strong you are so I will teach you how to use your Ki first" this is what I really wanted to do to so I didn't complain "search for your center being" he instructed artfully " and once you feel a kind of pull bring it out of your body and center it in your hand or center it around you" I decided to try to center it around me so I cleared my mind till I entered the void once there I dug deeper and it wasn't long before I felt the pull he was taking about I tried to pull it out but it didn't want to move so I tried harder and all of a sudden it let go and I could feel it around me. i filled myself with the intoxicating stuff I felt so alive so I pulled as much as I could. I opened my eyes to see the white power radiating off of me like I was the core of a fireball. Was that good? It is really hard to keep people in character every time Goku speaks I have to sit there and wonder about how he would respond to this situation. Well anyway thank you to those whom reviewed before and I would like three reviews for my next installment thanx. ~codesage