Wow I didn't really think that I would be updateing this so soon,the truth
is that I was getting rather discouraged about the number of reviuws I had
gotten on the previous chapters so with out any futher ado here is the fith
indtallment of astral lines
Astral line ch. 5 The party
Goku, Chi chi, Gohan and I landed at master Roshi's island to find that only a slim couple had arrived, Tien and Chozu were there already as was Krillin. Krillin was standing in the water practicing his Kamehameha wave, Tien was meditating quietly near the shore and Chozu was at work in the kitchen. When we arrived all of them dropped what they were doing and came out to see Goku and his family. Krillin looked me up and down from a short distance and finally came up. "hey man, so your finally up well Goku I heard that you had a new son where is he?" the cheerful Krillin asked looking from me to Goku. Goku laughed nervously and rubbed the back of his head. "well Krillin you just talked to him" Krillin spun to me in surprise and looked closely into my face. "yeah... I see it now" he laughed and held out his hand, which I gratefully shook. "my names Neo, and I am very pleased to meet you all" I looked at the whole crowd "is this it? Where is the big green guy?" I asked Goku" Goku looked around. "Piccolo" he said "he'll be here neo don't worry and also there is one other called Vageta that said he would show" Goku turned to the north "ah here's Piccolo" he said just as a small speak of light appeared on the horizon. chi chi went into the house to help chozu. Yamucha came out of Roshi's house and I greeted him as well. by that time piccolo had just landed and had wadded through the smaller people and stood before me he was tall I was over six feet tall now and I sill needed to look up to see his face. He wore a scowl and a turban which he removed to revel his antenna I held out my hand he shook my hand and smiled. "Goku, this boy will de a great help agenst the androids" I smiled and released his hand we both looked at each other for a while, man to man sizing each other up. Vageta landed with a growl and soon after that Bulma landed. She was very pregnant. Vageta stomped up to Goku "Well Kakarot where is this son I am supposed to be meeting, i have work to do" he looked rather unhappy about being pulled out of the grave chamber. Goku motioned towards me and Vageta's fearsome glare followed and he looked at me with a deep scowl on his face. He walked up to me "so this is the new brat" he said a note of amusement in his voice. "Hello Vageta" I said bowing respectfully "my name is neo and I would prefer to be called neo rather than brat, thank you" he smirked as I introduced myself. "So this one has attitude, and he shows the proper manners to his prince, I like him." Vageta walked towards to house and the other went back to chatting and reminiscing about old times and I got to talk to and just about every one I found that I really didn't like Yamucha I found him to be a cowardly honorless man. Krillin was a funny guy and a very loyal friend. Tien was almost perfect; brave, loyal, honorable. Then I approached Vageta. "What do you want brat?" he asked without turning to look at me "if you want me to help train you then I have already thought about it and I will but you will not slow my assention brat or you will be kicked out." He walked forward and got more food from the table. i turned to see Goku grinning at me, he walked forward and stood next to me. "Are you going to take him up on it?" asked Goku glancing down at me "you should think about it" he joined Vageta in the feeding frenzy. I put the decision off for later and joined the two mighty warriors, munching everything on the table but the plates. After everyone had eaten and the Sayians had cleaned the plates Goku called everyone's attention to me "tell them everything" he said to me as he retreated into the crowd of interested warriors. "Uh, hi!" I thought fast what could I remember about Afolians. "just so that all of you know I am not completely Sayian, but, I am not human at all." any one whom wasn't listening before was listening now " I am half Afolian" Vageta gasped, most of the group turned to him in surprise. "That's impossible!" he said "that planet blew up long before my time an army of Sayians were sent to conquer it but none returned" "and ever seance then the Afolians have had a great hatred for Sayians" I finished for him "but getting back to what I am. Afolians grow in power anywhere from two to four times faster than a Sayian. Also we have several "ultra stages" twelve in all the first comes around the power level of 2 million about twice a Super Sayian we have the ability to regenerate as piccolo dose and can heal others like Dende." There was a stunned silence even Goku was shocked "I am sorry to shock you but I really want to fight the androids and I don't know how to use any of my powers yet." Vageta stood next to me. I will help you in your battle, brat" he said as he crossed his arms over his chest "think of it as my apology for the damage done to your people." Goku stood next to me. "You have my help son just ask." I smiled at the two and burst into tears I flew into Goku hugging him tightly "dad I wont let you down." I closed my eyes as reassuring arms took me into an embrace "I wont let any of you down." after I had calmed down a little I had Krillin show me a destructo disk and found out that it wasn't that hard to do. "like this?" I lifted one arm above my head and began tochannel my ki to the tod of it I formed it into a disklike shape krillin clapped "hey I think ya got it bro!" he said as I threw it and it sliced through the water. I smiled I had plans for that attack. I knew how leathal it could be latter.i thanked krillin for shareing his attack with me he just smiled and told me not to sweat it. I ws having so much fun that I had really forgotten about the time and was rather surprised when Goku told me that it was time to go. I sadly waved goodbye to myfriends as I took to the air, flying towards my new home. That night I stayed up latter then all of the rest of my family. When I was certain that all were asleap I crept quietly outside and gazed at he stars. "why?" I asked them, wispering my question to the blackness. "why me? Why now?" I knew that no one would answer but it felt good to finally get them out. I sat on the grass, defeated, gazeing determindly at the sky. I wondered how mom was doing at home on the other plane, how my friends were doing. Tears once again began to well into my eyes, my friends, I knew I would never see them again and I could not bear it any longer thoughts of memories, buring pictures of them continued to flowthrough my mind poisoning it making me loose focus on the task at hand, slowly driving me to misery amongst all of this new happiness. I found my self scilently crying, laying on the grass, face to the sky. Slowly drifting, drifting off into uneasy dreams.
The was a crack like a thunder bolt, and i turned but what I saw when I turn made me never want to look at any thing ever again. there was a desolate wasteland before me riddled with long dead bodies, the ground seemed to rush below me and a huge tower suddenly loomed out of the darkness it made me want to run from it, it looked evil. How a tower can look evil I don't know but this one did. Then I was moveing up the tower at great speed and I came to a window it opened and from within two eyes glowed red and also from it emitted a voice not a voice full of chear like goku but a voice that sounded like several people being slowly cooked alive on a spit. "I see you!" It roared while the red eyes blazed.
I woke with a start, chi chi, goku and gohan were all standing above me but I wasn't out side, rather I was in my bed with rose curled comfortably on my chest.
Sorry for the cliff hanger but I just couldn't writ any more for now. Plz review
Astral line ch. 5 The party
Goku, Chi chi, Gohan and I landed at master Roshi's island to find that only a slim couple had arrived, Tien and Chozu were there already as was Krillin. Krillin was standing in the water practicing his Kamehameha wave, Tien was meditating quietly near the shore and Chozu was at work in the kitchen. When we arrived all of them dropped what they were doing and came out to see Goku and his family. Krillin looked me up and down from a short distance and finally came up. "hey man, so your finally up well Goku I heard that you had a new son where is he?" the cheerful Krillin asked looking from me to Goku. Goku laughed nervously and rubbed the back of his head. "well Krillin you just talked to him" Krillin spun to me in surprise and looked closely into my face. "yeah... I see it now" he laughed and held out his hand, which I gratefully shook. "my names Neo, and I am very pleased to meet you all" I looked at the whole crowd "is this it? Where is the big green guy?" I asked Goku" Goku looked around. "Piccolo" he said "he'll be here neo don't worry and also there is one other called Vageta that said he would show" Goku turned to the north "ah here's Piccolo" he said just as a small speak of light appeared on the horizon. chi chi went into the house to help chozu. Yamucha came out of Roshi's house and I greeted him as well. by that time piccolo had just landed and had wadded through the smaller people and stood before me he was tall I was over six feet tall now and I sill needed to look up to see his face. He wore a scowl and a turban which he removed to revel his antenna I held out my hand he shook my hand and smiled. "Goku, this boy will de a great help agenst the androids" I smiled and released his hand we both looked at each other for a while, man to man sizing each other up. Vageta landed with a growl and soon after that Bulma landed. She was very pregnant. Vageta stomped up to Goku "Well Kakarot where is this son I am supposed to be meeting, i have work to do" he looked rather unhappy about being pulled out of the grave chamber. Goku motioned towards me and Vageta's fearsome glare followed and he looked at me with a deep scowl on his face. He walked up to me "so this is the new brat" he said a note of amusement in his voice. "Hello Vageta" I said bowing respectfully "my name is neo and I would prefer to be called neo rather than brat, thank you" he smirked as I introduced myself. "So this one has attitude, and he shows the proper manners to his prince, I like him." Vageta walked towards to house and the other went back to chatting and reminiscing about old times and I got to talk to and just about every one I found that I really didn't like Yamucha I found him to be a cowardly honorless man. Krillin was a funny guy and a very loyal friend. Tien was almost perfect; brave, loyal, honorable. Then I approached Vageta. "What do you want brat?" he asked without turning to look at me "if you want me to help train you then I have already thought about it and I will but you will not slow my assention brat or you will be kicked out." He walked forward and got more food from the table. i turned to see Goku grinning at me, he walked forward and stood next to me. "Are you going to take him up on it?" asked Goku glancing down at me "you should think about it" he joined Vageta in the feeding frenzy. I put the decision off for later and joined the two mighty warriors, munching everything on the table but the plates. After everyone had eaten and the Sayians had cleaned the plates Goku called everyone's attention to me "tell them everything" he said to me as he retreated into the crowd of interested warriors. "Uh, hi!" I thought fast what could I remember about Afolians. "just so that all of you know I am not completely Sayian, but, I am not human at all." any one whom wasn't listening before was listening now " I am half Afolian" Vageta gasped, most of the group turned to him in surprise. "That's impossible!" he said "that planet blew up long before my time an army of Sayians were sent to conquer it but none returned" "and ever seance then the Afolians have had a great hatred for Sayians" I finished for him "but getting back to what I am. Afolians grow in power anywhere from two to four times faster than a Sayian. Also we have several "ultra stages" twelve in all the first comes around the power level of 2 million about twice a Super Sayian we have the ability to regenerate as piccolo dose and can heal others like Dende." There was a stunned silence even Goku was shocked "I am sorry to shock you but I really want to fight the androids and I don't know how to use any of my powers yet." Vageta stood next to me. I will help you in your battle, brat" he said as he crossed his arms over his chest "think of it as my apology for the damage done to your people." Goku stood next to me. "You have my help son just ask." I smiled at the two and burst into tears I flew into Goku hugging him tightly "dad I wont let you down." I closed my eyes as reassuring arms took me into an embrace "I wont let any of you down." after I had calmed down a little I had Krillin show me a destructo disk and found out that it wasn't that hard to do. "like this?" I lifted one arm above my head and began tochannel my ki to the tod of it I formed it into a disklike shape krillin clapped "hey I think ya got it bro!" he said as I threw it and it sliced through the water. I smiled I had plans for that attack. I knew how leathal it could be latter.i thanked krillin for shareing his attack with me he just smiled and told me not to sweat it. I ws having so much fun that I had really forgotten about the time and was rather surprised when Goku told me that it was time to go. I sadly waved goodbye to myfriends as I took to the air, flying towards my new home. That night I stayed up latter then all of the rest of my family. When I was certain that all were asleap I crept quietly outside and gazed at he stars. "why?" I asked them, wispering my question to the blackness. "why me? Why now?" I knew that no one would answer but it felt good to finally get them out. I sat on the grass, defeated, gazeing determindly at the sky. I wondered how mom was doing at home on the other plane, how my friends were doing. Tears once again began to well into my eyes, my friends, I knew I would never see them again and I could not bear it any longer thoughts of memories, buring pictures of them continued to flowthrough my mind poisoning it making me loose focus on the task at hand, slowly driving me to misery amongst all of this new happiness. I found my self scilently crying, laying on the grass, face to the sky. Slowly drifting, drifting off into uneasy dreams.
The was a crack like a thunder bolt, and i turned but what I saw when I turn made me never want to look at any thing ever again. there was a desolate wasteland before me riddled with long dead bodies, the ground seemed to rush below me and a huge tower suddenly loomed out of the darkness it made me want to run from it, it looked evil. How a tower can look evil I don't know but this one did. Then I was moveing up the tower at great speed and I came to a window it opened and from within two eyes glowed red and also from it emitted a voice not a voice full of chear like goku but a voice that sounded like several people being slowly cooked alive on a spit. "I see you!" It roared while the red eyes blazed.
I woke with a start, chi chi, goku and gohan were all standing above me but I wasn't out side, rather I was in my bed with rose curled comfortably on my chest.
Sorry for the cliff hanger but I just couldn't writ any more for now. Plz review