A Review has come to my attention about an on coming character.
Unfortunately the owner of the brutally honest review did not leave his/her
E-mail address, so I was not able to tell him/her that I agree with them. A
pity really, I wanted to ask them for Ideas. But seeing as how I could not
get a hold of them I just changed it to a different person. Crabbe will no
longer be Vizzini. I think I will change it to be Mr. Malfoy. Please is any
of you have an objection to certain characters please tell me and I'll see
if I like your Idea or not. This story IS a Harry/Ginny shipper and those
to are NOT to be changed.
I read the first Chapter and - to me - it seemed to be very choppy, so I plan on doing something a little different with this Chapter to make it more understandable. Well I hope you enjoy.
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VISSION: FLORIN CASTLE - DAY TIME
The main square is packed with town-folk - gossiping women, children laughing as the play and a man talking business - among their livestock.
DUMBLEDORE
(Off-screen) (Reading)
Five years later, the main square of Florin City was filled as never before to hear the announcement of the great Prince Humperdinck's (Draco's) bride-to be.
VISSION: PRINCE HUMPERDINCK (Draco) is a man of incredible power and bearing. He stands in his royal robes on the castle balcony. Standing behind him is a dark bearded man who seems the Prince's match in strength: this is COUNT RUGEN (Snape).
HUMPERDINCK (Draco) (Raises his hands for silence)
My people ... a month from now, our country will have its 500th anniversary. On that sundown, I shall marry a lady who was once a commoner like yourselves --
(Pauses for effect)
-- but perhaps you will not find her common now. Would you like to meet her?
The cheers' booms like summer thunder. VISSION: A giant staircase leading to the CROWD and a FIGURE of a beautiful young woman stands unsure of herself but as steady as a proper lady should.
THE CROWD holds its breath, as they see Ginny (Buttercup).
HUMPERDINCK (Draco) My people ... I give you, Princess Ginny!!
VISSION: She descends the stairs and starts to move amongst the people.
THE CROWD suddenly goes to their knees. Great waves of people kneeling. Ginny - terribly moved - stands immobile among her subjects, blinking back tears.
DUMBLEDORE (Off-screen)
Buttercup's emptiness consumed her. Although the law of the land gave Humperdinck the right to choose his bride, she did not love him.
VISSION: WOODLANDS -- Ginny, barreling along, controlling her horse easily.
DUMBLEDORE (Off-screen)
Despite Humperdinck's reassurance that she would grow to love him, the only joy she found was in her daily ride.
VISSION: A WOODED GLEN, CLOSE TO SUNDOWN. Lovely, quiet, deserted. Ginny reins in.
VOICE A word, milady?
VISSION: THREE MEN are standing close together in the path. Beyond them were the waters of Florin Channel. The three men are not your everyday commuter types. Standing in front is a man with the most angelic face. He is Sicilian and his name is VIZZINI (Lucius Malfoy). Beside him is a Spaniard (Redhead), with a sword. His name is INIGO MONTOYA (Ron Weasley). Beside him is a giant that goes by the name FEZZIK (Hagrid).
VIZZINI (Lucius)
We are but poor, lost circus performers. Is there a village nearby?
GINNY
There is nothing nearby, not for miles.
VIZZINI (Lucius)
Then there will be no one to hear you scream-
VIZZINI (Lucius) nods to the Fezzik (Hagrid), who merely reaches over and touches a nerve on GINNY neck, the start of a scream is all she manages -- unconsciousness met her before she even fell to the dusty path.
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So sorry that is so short but it's getting late and that just seemed like a great Cliffhanger. I hope that the Form is more efficient than the last. Gotta go Grandma's getting irritable.
Blessed Be,
PS Please Review.
I read the first Chapter and - to me - it seemed to be very choppy, so I plan on doing something a little different with this Chapter to make it more understandable. Well I hope you enjoy.
*~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*
VISSION: FLORIN CASTLE - DAY TIME
The main square is packed with town-folk - gossiping women, children laughing as the play and a man talking business - among their livestock.
DUMBLEDORE
(Off-screen) (Reading)
Five years later, the main square of Florin City was filled as never before to hear the announcement of the great Prince Humperdinck's (Draco's) bride-to be.
VISSION: PRINCE HUMPERDINCK (Draco) is a man of incredible power and bearing. He stands in his royal robes on the castle balcony. Standing behind him is a dark bearded man who seems the Prince's match in strength: this is COUNT RUGEN (Snape).
HUMPERDINCK (Draco) (Raises his hands for silence)
My people ... a month from now, our country will have its 500th anniversary. On that sundown, I shall marry a lady who was once a commoner like yourselves --
(Pauses for effect)
-- but perhaps you will not find her common now. Would you like to meet her?
The cheers' booms like summer thunder. VISSION: A giant staircase leading to the CROWD and a FIGURE of a beautiful young woman stands unsure of herself but as steady as a proper lady should.
THE CROWD holds its breath, as they see Ginny (Buttercup).
HUMPERDINCK (Draco) My people ... I give you, Princess Ginny!!
VISSION: She descends the stairs and starts to move amongst the people.
THE CROWD suddenly goes to their knees. Great waves of people kneeling. Ginny - terribly moved - stands immobile among her subjects, blinking back tears.
DUMBLEDORE (Off-screen)
Buttercup's emptiness consumed her. Although the law of the land gave Humperdinck the right to choose his bride, she did not love him.
VISSION: WOODLANDS -- Ginny, barreling along, controlling her horse easily.
DUMBLEDORE (Off-screen)
Despite Humperdinck's reassurance that she would grow to love him, the only joy she found was in her daily ride.
VISSION: A WOODED GLEN, CLOSE TO SUNDOWN. Lovely, quiet, deserted. Ginny reins in.
VOICE A word, milady?
VISSION: THREE MEN are standing close together in the path. Beyond them were the waters of Florin Channel. The three men are not your everyday commuter types. Standing in front is a man with the most angelic face. He is Sicilian and his name is VIZZINI (Lucius Malfoy). Beside him is a Spaniard (Redhead), with a sword. His name is INIGO MONTOYA (Ron Weasley). Beside him is a giant that goes by the name FEZZIK (Hagrid).
VIZZINI (Lucius)
We are but poor, lost circus performers. Is there a village nearby?
GINNY
There is nothing nearby, not for miles.
VIZZINI (Lucius)
Then there will be no one to hear you scream-
VIZZINI (Lucius) nods to the Fezzik (Hagrid), who merely reaches over and touches a nerve on GINNY neck, the start of a scream is all she manages -- unconsciousness met her before she even fell to the dusty path.
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So sorry that is so short but it's getting late and that just seemed like a great Cliffhanger. I hope that the Form is more efficient than the last. Gotta go Grandma's getting irritable.
Blessed Be,
PS Please Review.