Love Hina
Endless Love
By: Belldandy'sKeiichi
Note: [any text in here is a thought text]
Author's Time: Whoa! I've gotten so many reviews for the first chapter...thxs for reviewing and now, the next person in line!
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Shinobu came back to the waiting room in tears and everyone started to comfort her. "Wow, must be really bad to make Shinobu cry like this..." Kitsune said. "I'll go see Urashima now..." Motoko said to them, leaving the room. Naru still sitting alone with her head buried in her hands.
Motoko: Sword Play
"Urashima?" Motoko called as she opened the door to Keitaro's room. She walked in and almost screamed when she saw the current state of Keitaro. "Hi Motoko..." he said in a weak voice. "Don't talk; you need all the strength you can get." Motoko told him. He nodded and laid back. "I can't believe that this is how it's going to end..." Motoko started. "You know, you have taught me a lot since you came to the Hinata House..."
Motoko got up and looked out the window. "Before you came Urashima...I was doll. Goalless, mindless, and emotionless. Before you came, I didn't have to worry about anything but my training. Hell, to tell you the truth, I didn't care about anyone except for myself. Ever since my sister got married, she abandoned her training and she threw away the inheritance of the school all because of a man. She was my role model. She was everything I always wanted to be. And to see her abandon all that just for a man...it just broke my heart! I guess that is the reason I hated you when we first met Keitaro. I thought that you're going to bring drastic change that would lead me to abandon my training to, just like my sister did.
You helped me a lot when I was training and if it weren't for you, I probably wouldn't have learned the god's cry ultimate technique and my sister's secret way of training...to have fun. I was always holding my emotions to myself so I wouldn't show any weaknesses. Fright, nervousness, and love are things that I taught myself to hide. But by doing so, I wasn't able to learn the technique. But then you reminded me about my sister. You reminded me what my sister did all the time. She smiled. She laughed. She was always in a happy mood and I couldn't figure out why. Then it struck me, it was her happiness that made her master those techniques. So now, I show my emotions, not afraid of showing any weaknesses anymore and I have to thank you for that Urashima.
You inspired me a lot you know that. You're a good man Urashima. Always putting other people ahead of you. I always wondered why you keep helping other people even though you had your own problems. You also inspire me to keep at my training and to never give up. I see you studying with Naru to achieve a goal that you couldn't for 3 years and yet you didn't show any signs of giving up. Although you know that your future didn't look good, you still went for your dreams. I wish that I was as determined at you are."
Motoko started to head for the door.
"Keitaro...thank you for being there for me when things got bad. I must take my leave; don't take this a good-bye...but a see you later. I know that you'll pull through in this situation. So I'll see you back at the Hinata House when you get better..." Motoko said to him, and walked out of the room. As Motoko closed the door, tears started to fall from her eyes.
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Well...just to let you know, here is the order each person is going: Shinobu, Motoko, Su, Kitsune, Mutsumi, Naru. Review plzs!
Endless Love
By: Belldandy'sKeiichi
Note: [any text in here is a thought text]
Author's Time: Whoa! I've gotten so many reviews for the first chapter...thxs for reviewing and now, the next person in line!
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Shinobu came back to the waiting room in tears and everyone started to comfort her. "Wow, must be really bad to make Shinobu cry like this..." Kitsune said. "I'll go see Urashima now..." Motoko said to them, leaving the room. Naru still sitting alone with her head buried in her hands.
Motoko: Sword Play
"Urashima?" Motoko called as she opened the door to Keitaro's room. She walked in and almost screamed when she saw the current state of Keitaro. "Hi Motoko..." he said in a weak voice. "Don't talk; you need all the strength you can get." Motoko told him. He nodded and laid back. "I can't believe that this is how it's going to end..." Motoko started. "You know, you have taught me a lot since you came to the Hinata House..."
Motoko got up and looked out the window. "Before you came Urashima...I was doll. Goalless, mindless, and emotionless. Before you came, I didn't have to worry about anything but my training. Hell, to tell you the truth, I didn't care about anyone except for myself. Ever since my sister got married, she abandoned her training and she threw away the inheritance of the school all because of a man. She was my role model. She was everything I always wanted to be. And to see her abandon all that just for a man...it just broke my heart! I guess that is the reason I hated you when we first met Keitaro. I thought that you're going to bring drastic change that would lead me to abandon my training to, just like my sister did.
You helped me a lot when I was training and if it weren't for you, I probably wouldn't have learned the god's cry ultimate technique and my sister's secret way of training...to have fun. I was always holding my emotions to myself so I wouldn't show any weaknesses. Fright, nervousness, and love are things that I taught myself to hide. But by doing so, I wasn't able to learn the technique. But then you reminded me about my sister. You reminded me what my sister did all the time. She smiled. She laughed. She was always in a happy mood and I couldn't figure out why. Then it struck me, it was her happiness that made her master those techniques. So now, I show my emotions, not afraid of showing any weaknesses anymore and I have to thank you for that Urashima.
You inspired me a lot you know that. You're a good man Urashima. Always putting other people ahead of you. I always wondered why you keep helping other people even though you had your own problems. You also inspire me to keep at my training and to never give up. I see you studying with Naru to achieve a goal that you couldn't for 3 years and yet you didn't show any signs of giving up. Although you know that your future didn't look good, you still went for your dreams. I wish that I was as determined at you are."
Motoko started to head for the door.
"Keitaro...thank you for being there for me when things got bad. I must take my leave; don't take this a good-bye...but a see you later. I know that you'll pull through in this situation. So I'll see you back at the Hinata House when you get better..." Motoko said to him, and walked out of the room. As Motoko closed the door, tears started to fall from her eyes.
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Well...just to let you know, here is the order each person is going: Shinobu, Motoko, Su, Kitsune, Mutsumi, Naru. Review plzs!