ok i have to admit my story kinda sucks with the whole thing about some
people thinkin the yu yu characters were ooc and my battle was incredibly
short and pathetic......So i am going to continue and try to turn this story
around I would love more reviews so I have to make the story better.
Chapter cuarto aka 4 (spanish can sometimes be fun): Training Time!!!!
The group went to Kaede's hut. They had been walking for hours and
it was about dusk. Sango, Miroku, Kuwabara, and Yusuke went inside to see Kaede.
Meanwhile Chika and Shina decided to start their training then. Kagome
got her bow and quiver. Shina and Chika made swords appear.
"You meed to learn how to use a sword not a bow and arrow. It is useless when
someone attacks you head on and you have no time to dodge.Unless you want
your pretty little head cut off...,"said Shina.
"No give me a sword then,"said Kagome nervously.
Chika handed the sword to Kagome. Chika took one herself; then Shina
took one. Shina started walking towards the forest and motioned for everyone to
follow. Chika and Kagome followed her while Inuyasha, Kurama, and Hiei
lagged behind.
"I wonder why they decided to help her...Shina didnt seem too set on
talking let alone helping any of us...I guess people change,"said Kurama.
"If they hurt Kagome I'll tear them to shreds...,"said Inuyasha.
"I see that your infatuated by her interesting,"said Hiei.
"Infatuated?"
"You are in love with her baka!"
"WHAT I do not love her she is only a shard detector,"said Inuyasha.
"Ok Inuyasha..well here we are,"said Kurama.
The three guys walked into a small clearing that had tree stumps
everywhere and downed trees on the edges.
"Finally you all got here we had time to cut all the trees and sharpen the swords
with all the time it took for you all to get here,"said Shina.
"well lets get started,"said Chika brightly.
At this time it was dark around the clearing. Since it was in the past
and there were no street lights the only light was the moon. The woods around
them were pitch black were it made it impossible for Kagome to see into them.
It was easy for Hiei, Kurama, Chika, Shina, and Inuyasha because they
all were at least half demon but poor Kagome could barely see her hand infront
of her face let alone anyone else. Chika and Shina walked silently into the forest.
Suddenly Chika ran out of the forest (possibly faster than Hiei
can run) and slashed at Kagome. Kagome of course did not see her coming and
was no where near blocking the attack. Chika stopped her sword about a inch
from Kagome's head and jumped into the forest again. This happened about 10
more times. THe 11th time, Shina came out running faster than Chika and came
at Kagome from the right then jumped away then came from the left. She kept
popping up then stopped.
"Quiet too quiet...,"said Kagome.
Shina suddenly appeared out of no where and was about to land on
Kagome, sword first. Kagome took a step back and tryed to block the attack
with her sword. With Shina's strength and vast amount of spirit energy Kagome's
sword was knocked out of her hand as she was thrown back. Inuyasha caught her
right before she hit the ground.
"Jeez you could be a little MORE rough with her,"said Inuyasha.
"If we weren't she wouldn't learn well now it is time to teach you how to attack,
then we will move on to counterattacking then a combination of lessons 1
2 and 3,"said Shina.
"Errrrr,"said Kagome (AN does she ever say err well i say that every once in a
while so she will too)
--------------Later on--------------
"Kagome you are a great student, we will repeat that every night and before you
know it you will be a master swordsman,"said Shina.
The small group walked back to Kaede's hut,ate,and then went to bed.
Before they did Miroku got his usual smack, Kuwabara got bet up, and Inuyasha got
sat for attacking Shippo. All was well for now in the feudal era.
------------Meanwhile--------------------------
"Great plan Naraku kukukukukuku,"said Naraku.
"Yes The plan shall start tommorrow Inuyasha shall finally die and I get the Jewel
of the four Souls,"said Naraku (An I am making him even more insane looking by making him
talk to himself in third person I wont do that thatthat often because God knows
when people refure to themselves in third person it annoys me but i'm doing it anyway)
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ok end of chappie 4. pleaz review and at least answer this question: What do u all
think the lady that made Inuyasha (cant spell her name) is planning when she named
the jewel "Jewel of the Four Souls" and It come out of that ancient priestess's
heart? I wonder are Inuyasha's gang the four souls but then there are 5 or does
it have anything to do with the episode were Miroku said he represents wisdom
inuyasha courage, Kagome love and Sango something else...I forgot....well
got more to write byebye
people thinkin the yu yu characters were ooc and my battle was incredibly
short and pathetic......So i am going to continue and try to turn this story
around I would love more reviews so I have to make the story better.
Chapter cuarto aka 4 (spanish can sometimes be fun): Training Time!!!!
The group went to Kaede's hut. They had been walking for hours and
it was about dusk. Sango, Miroku, Kuwabara, and Yusuke went inside to see Kaede.
Meanwhile Chika and Shina decided to start their training then. Kagome
got her bow and quiver. Shina and Chika made swords appear.
"You meed to learn how to use a sword not a bow and arrow. It is useless when
someone attacks you head on and you have no time to dodge.Unless you want
your pretty little head cut off...,"said Shina.
"No give me a sword then,"said Kagome nervously.
Chika handed the sword to Kagome. Chika took one herself; then Shina
took one. Shina started walking towards the forest and motioned for everyone to
follow. Chika and Kagome followed her while Inuyasha, Kurama, and Hiei
lagged behind.
"I wonder why they decided to help her...Shina didnt seem too set on
talking let alone helping any of us...I guess people change,"said Kurama.
"If they hurt Kagome I'll tear them to shreds...,"said Inuyasha.
"I see that your infatuated by her interesting,"said Hiei.
"Infatuated?"
"You are in love with her baka!"
"WHAT I do not love her she is only a shard detector,"said Inuyasha.
"Ok Inuyasha..well here we are,"said Kurama.
The three guys walked into a small clearing that had tree stumps
everywhere and downed trees on the edges.
"Finally you all got here we had time to cut all the trees and sharpen the swords
with all the time it took for you all to get here,"said Shina.
"well lets get started,"said Chika brightly.
At this time it was dark around the clearing. Since it was in the past
and there were no street lights the only light was the moon. The woods around
them were pitch black were it made it impossible for Kagome to see into them.
It was easy for Hiei, Kurama, Chika, Shina, and Inuyasha because they
all were at least half demon but poor Kagome could barely see her hand infront
of her face let alone anyone else. Chika and Shina walked silently into the forest.
Suddenly Chika ran out of the forest (possibly faster than Hiei
can run) and slashed at Kagome. Kagome of course did not see her coming and
was no where near blocking the attack. Chika stopped her sword about a inch
from Kagome's head and jumped into the forest again. This happened about 10
more times. THe 11th time, Shina came out running faster than Chika and came
at Kagome from the right then jumped away then came from the left. She kept
popping up then stopped.
"Quiet too quiet...,"said Kagome.
Shina suddenly appeared out of no where and was about to land on
Kagome, sword first. Kagome took a step back and tryed to block the attack
with her sword. With Shina's strength and vast amount of spirit energy Kagome's
sword was knocked out of her hand as she was thrown back. Inuyasha caught her
right before she hit the ground.
"Jeez you could be a little MORE rough with her,"said Inuyasha.
"If we weren't she wouldn't learn well now it is time to teach you how to attack,
then we will move on to counterattacking then a combination of lessons 1
2 and 3,"said Shina.
"Errrrr,"said Kagome (AN does she ever say err well i say that every once in a
while so she will too)
--------------Later on--------------
"Kagome you are a great student, we will repeat that every night and before you
know it you will be a master swordsman,"said Shina.
The small group walked back to Kaede's hut,ate,and then went to bed.
Before they did Miroku got his usual smack, Kuwabara got bet up, and Inuyasha got
sat for attacking Shippo. All was well for now in the feudal era.
------------Meanwhile--------------------------
"Great plan Naraku kukukukukuku,"said Naraku.
"Yes The plan shall start tommorrow Inuyasha shall finally die and I get the Jewel
of the four Souls,"said Naraku (An I am making him even more insane looking by making him
talk to himself in third person I wont do that thatthat often because God knows
when people refure to themselves in third person it annoys me but i'm doing it anyway)
-------------------------------------------------------
ok end of chappie 4. pleaz review and at least answer this question: What do u all
think the lady that made Inuyasha (cant spell her name) is planning when she named
the jewel "Jewel of the Four Souls" and It come out of that ancient priestess's
heart? I wonder are Inuyasha's gang the four souls but then there are 5 or does
it have anything to do with the episode were Miroku said he represents wisdom
inuyasha courage, Kagome love and Sango something else...I forgot....well
got more to write byebye