Disclaimer: I am neither rich nor Japanese, which automatically
disqualifies me from owning DBZ. ::sighs:: But if you want to give it to
me, it's my birthday 16/12.
Prologue:
The sun was setting behind the emerald hills, illuminating the valley with a red light the colour of blood.
Had the girl been superstitious she might have thought that the bloody light was an omen, however the girl was not superstitious so all comments of bad omens and the like are therefore completely irrelevant.
It was quiet in the small valley where the girl stood, almost too quiet. The birds whose chatter usually filled the valley seemed silent, as if they too sensed a great thing was about to happen.
"I summon the eternal dragon." The girl said, her brown-green eyes glittering with some unrecognised emotion as she let a slow smile creep over her face.
Had Trunks or Goten been there, they may or may not have recognised a kindred spirit in that smile.
The dragon appeared, with his customary rumbled, "Who has summoned me here?"
"I did." The girl said firmly, the somewhat mischievous smile not budging from her face.
The dragon had met many strong and insane mortals over the years, but this slightly frail girl standing before him with her somewhat insane smile was fast moving to the top of his list of strange mortals he'd encountered."
"Tell me child, what are your wishes?"
"I wish. that the planet Vegetasei and all the people who were killed when Frieza blew it up, would come back to this plain of existence, as if no time had passed." The girls smile widened and the insane glint in her eyes told anyone who cared to look that she was not in full possession of her sanity.
"Done." The dragon said, "And your second wish?"
"Second wish?" The girl asked, "Oh.er."
The girls eyes shifted colour, and her now green eyes sparkled crazily as she suddenly found her inspiration.
"I wish I was saiya-jin and had the ability to become super saiya-jin." The girl giggled eccentrically as the dragon turned to look at her.
"Done." The dragon sounded as if it doubted her sanity, joining the already foot long list of those who did. "That's two wishes."
The 7 dragon balls dulled, and shot off in various directions as the girl pondered her new abilities, the insane glint never disappearing from her eyes.
-Notes- Oh my god. I just rewrote the first chapter. I must be crazy. I decided I should since I made a lot of mistakes in my first copy, and to tell you the honest truth I didn't like the way it was written at all. This is slightly longer, and I corrected the mistake I made about Vegeta blowing up Vegeta- sei. I knew that Frieza blew it up, but I hadn't gone through my work to check for errors. Anyway, enjoy the new prologue. The girl now plays a slightly larger part, but she's kinda nuts. Tell me what you think. Better? Worse? The Same? I'll probably fix the rest anyway, since I hate the way I wrote this. Anyway, enjoy, and review. ___________________________________________________________
Prologue:
The sun was setting behind the emerald hills, illuminating the valley with a red light the colour of blood.
Had the girl been superstitious she might have thought that the bloody light was an omen, however the girl was not superstitious so all comments of bad omens and the like are therefore completely irrelevant.
It was quiet in the small valley where the girl stood, almost too quiet. The birds whose chatter usually filled the valley seemed silent, as if they too sensed a great thing was about to happen.
"I summon the eternal dragon." The girl said, her brown-green eyes glittering with some unrecognised emotion as she let a slow smile creep over her face.
Had Trunks or Goten been there, they may or may not have recognised a kindred spirit in that smile.
The dragon appeared, with his customary rumbled, "Who has summoned me here?"
"I did." The girl said firmly, the somewhat mischievous smile not budging from her face.
The dragon had met many strong and insane mortals over the years, but this slightly frail girl standing before him with her somewhat insane smile was fast moving to the top of his list of strange mortals he'd encountered."
"Tell me child, what are your wishes?"
"I wish. that the planet Vegetasei and all the people who were killed when Frieza blew it up, would come back to this plain of existence, as if no time had passed." The girls smile widened and the insane glint in her eyes told anyone who cared to look that she was not in full possession of her sanity.
"Done." The dragon said, "And your second wish?"
"Second wish?" The girl asked, "Oh.er."
The girls eyes shifted colour, and her now green eyes sparkled crazily as she suddenly found her inspiration.
"I wish I was saiya-jin and had the ability to become super saiya-jin." The girl giggled eccentrically as the dragon turned to look at her.
"Done." The dragon sounded as if it doubted her sanity, joining the already foot long list of those who did. "That's two wishes."
The 7 dragon balls dulled, and shot off in various directions as the girl pondered her new abilities, the insane glint never disappearing from her eyes.
-Notes- Oh my god. I just rewrote the first chapter. I must be crazy. I decided I should since I made a lot of mistakes in my first copy, and to tell you the honest truth I didn't like the way it was written at all. This is slightly longer, and I corrected the mistake I made about Vegeta blowing up Vegeta- sei. I knew that Frieza blew it up, but I hadn't gone through my work to check for errors. Anyway, enjoy the new prologue. The girl now plays a slightly larger part, but she's kinda nuts. Tell me what you think. Better? Worse? The Same? I'll probably fix the rest anyway, since I hate the way I wrote this. Anyway, enjoy, and review. ___________________________________________________________