AN: alright its about time I thank everyone so far so here it goes
Blue Tiger: You know I do agree with you there. Tohru CAN fall in love with any Sohma male.*winks* even old meanie Akito. Man..i have never seen an Tohru Akito and it kind of scares me if there is x.x
Water Guardian: I can't say how much of a help you been, thanks a lot for this, and for reading. ^.^
Clow Angel: Well Yuki is a pretty messed up kid ya know? A lot of things go through his mind, but you won't know cuz I don't think I won't be doing that many POVs if any. *wink * And for what happens to the Sohma clan? Well I have a lot of stuff planed for them.
Hoppi: thanks for reading my dear friend.
Premierarchange: Yes indeed it does need a lot of time, I have to carefully plan out stuff. . will make you go nuts, but I am putting my time into it, and I am gonna see it through.
~* paper star *~: thanks, yeah so far I am the first to pull this off ne? and Beta- Reader? Do you mean editing? I would love it if I could have an editor normally I don't pick up on something until later.
MaroTapikoka: Thanks for pointing that out x.x Yeah I am horrible at grammar if you haven't noticed.
Niki: Heheh I agree Tohru goes good with Yuki but then I saw the ending, not gonna spill though its an eye opener.
Mae: Don't worry Akito will be saved still.maybe*evil smile* I have plans for him, so you will just have to wait and see.
Faraday: Well you will find out later on, you don't know who she is but she is the one who wished for Tohru never meting the Sohmas.
Pichachu: Hey thanks for reading and all. Hope you like it.
Tohru promised she would take more care of herself, truth is, how are you to do that if you live in a tent? Well it would be for a bit longer, she thought to herself. It was late, the nurse made sure her fever was gone, and that's when the clock said it was almost five. She glanced around the schoolyard before she crossed it. Tohru wasn't sure what she planed to do next; she let another sigh fall from her lips.
That's when she saw him, standing on the roof, a young man with bright orange hair like sunset. He stared out into space; his hand gripped the chain-linked fence. Down on the ground Tohru watched him, her heart slowly started to beat faster. Then she heard soft footsteps that came towards her; she blushed at the fact she stood there like a statue. Her head slowly turned to the soft steps and their owner. Yuki Sohma, the prince of the school, and also the one who saved her in the hallway.
Yuki glanced up at the girl, he hardly knew her, but something inside always drew him towards this girl. Maybe it was the fact Akito could be wrong, that he could be accepted in the real world outside the family, outside the cruse. As he watched this girl, he secretively hope, that maybe her heart would be big enough to accept him, or maybe the small hope that there was some one out there might. He let himself walked passed her without even a glance, his eyes watched only what was in front of him.
Tohru watched as the prince walked passed her, her mouth slightly ajar with a soundless word that passed through the pinkish colored lips. For what seemed like a lifetime, she slowly turned and her vocal cords began to work. "Sohma-kun! Please wait!"
The Sohma came to a stop, but said nothing as Tohru hurried over to him. "Sohma-kun.thank you for this morning. I'm." Tohru looked at him and panted slightly, her eyes locked on to him.
"Honda-san, do not say you are sorry. You are only human." He interrupted, however the last part came out a bit bitterly then he intended but he keep going, "It is natural to become ill when you push your self to much." His eyes slowly moved to her and there he watched her from the corner of his eye.
"Sohma-kun.Thank you. For everything you did do. Can I walk with you part ways?" She smiled at him warmly.
Yuki let a twitch at the corner of his mouth to show, before he nodded and started on his way with Tohru following at his side.
Back to the rooftop, Kyo watched bitterly as the rat walked away. He was being forced by Akito to live in the same damn house with that rat, and now school. The thought of it made him sick, but at the same time apart of him felt something here at this school, that for once in his life made him feel welcomed. However, he will never say that to anyone, and he walked his rival, and a stranger walk off together, but at that moment all he could think of was that stranger, then banished all those thoughts out of his head and went back to his original thoughts.
Blue Tiger: You know I do agree with you there. Tohru CAN fall in love with any Sohma male.*winks* even old meanie Akito. Man..i have never seen an Tohru Akito and it kind of scares me if there is x.x
Water Guardian: I can't say how much of a help you been, thanks a lot for this, and for reading. ^.^
Clow Angel: Well Yuki is a pretty messed up kid ya know? A lot of things go through his mind, but you won't know cuz I don't think I won't be doing that many POVs if any. *wink * And for what happens to the Sohma clan? Well I have a lot of stuff planed for them.
Hoppi: thanks for reading my dear friend.
Premierarchange: Yes indeed it does need a lot of time, I have to carefully plan out stuff. . will make you go nuts, but I am putting my time into it, and I am gonna see it through.
~* paper star *~: thanks, yeah so far I am the first to pull this off ne? and Beta- Reader? Do you mean editing? I would love it if I could have an editor normally I don't pick up on something until later.
MaroTapikoka: Thanks for pointing that out x.x Yeah I am horrible at grammar if you haven't noticed.
Niki: Heheh I agree Tohru goes good with Yuki but then I saw the ending, not gonna spill though its an eye opener.
Mae: Don't worry Akito will be saved still.maybe*evil smile* I have plans for him, so you will just have to wait and see.
Faraday: Well you will find out later on, you don't know who she is but she is the one who wished for Tohru never meting the Sohmas.
Pichachu: Hey thanks for reading and all. Hope you like it.
Tohru promised she would take more care of herself, truth is, how are you to do that if you live in a tent? Well it would be for a bit longer, she thought to herself. It was late, the nurse made sure her fever was gone, and that's when the clock said it was almost five. She glanced around the schoolyard before she crossed it. Tohru wasn't sure what she planed to do next; she let another sigh fall from her lips.
That's when she saw him, standing on the roof, a young man with bright orange hair like sunset. He stared out into space; his hand gripped the chain-linked fence. Down on the ground Tohru watched him, her heart slowly started to beat faster. Then she heard soft footsteps that came towards her; she blushed at the fact she stood there like a statue. Her head slowly turned to the soft steps and their owner. Yuki Sohma, the prince of the school, and also the one who saved her in the hallway.
Yuki glanced up at the girl, he hardly knew her, but something inside always drew him towards this girl. Maybe it was the fact Akito could be wrong, that he could be accepted in the real world outside the family, outside the cruse. As he watched this girl, he secretively hope, that maybe her heart would be big enough to accept him, or maybe the small hope that there was some one out there might. He let himself walked passed her without even a glance, his eyes watched only what was in front of him.
Tohru watched as the prince walked passed her, her mouth slightly ajar with a soundless word that passed through the pinkish colored lips. For what seemed like a lifetime, she slowly turned and her vocal cords began to work. "Sohma-kun! Please wait!"
The Sohma came to a stop, but said nothing as Tohru hurried over to him. "Sohma-kun.thank you for this morning. I'm." Tohru looked at him and panted slightly, her eyes locked on to him.
"Honda-san, do not say you are sorry. You are only human." He interrupted, however the last part came out a bit bitterly then he intended but he keep going, "It is natural to become ill when you push your self to much." His eyes slowly moved to her and there he watched her from the corner of his eye.
"Sohma-kun.Thank you. For everything you did do. Can I walk with you part ways?" She smiled at him warmly.
Yuki let a twitch at the corner of his mouth to show, before he nodded and started on his way with Tohru following at his side.
Back to the rooftop, Kyo watched bitterly as the rat walked away. He was being forced by Akito to live in the same damn house with that rat, and now school. The thought of it made him sick, but at the same time apart of him felt something here at this school, that for once in his life made him feel welcomed. However, he will never say that to anyone, and he walked his rival, and a stranger walk off together, but at that moment all he could think of was that stranger, then banished all those thoughts out of his head and went back to his original thoughts.