This is my first fanfic; give me some constructive criticism so that I'll
be able to improve the rest of my chapters. (Or just rewrite the whole
thing!) PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE! Thanx! (
Prologue
A boy in a black leather outfit drives on the cement on his motorcycle. He takes off his helmet and shows the face of a gorgeous young boy, with wavy brown hair. He smiles and drives off and parks in front of the newly reconstructed Foster home. He slips in through the back gate and slowly walks to the garden. An unbelievable expression on his face, he falls to his knees in front of the grave. It says 'Winifred Foster-Wonderful Mother and Wife'.
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Chapter One: The Message
"Winnie.no!" 17-year-old Jesse Tuck couldn't believe that Winnie died. Why didn't she take the water? Doesn't she realize how much I love her? Jesse slowly reaches out and touches the grave, head down. He doesn't realize a shadowy figure has reached the tree just behind him Jesse raises his head and stands up. As he turns around, he sees shadow. "Who's there?" Jesse turns to start running away. "NO! Wait, I have a message for you." The stranger came out from behind the tree. "Who are you?" Jesse inquired, afraid. "I am no one you should fear. I have a message from Ms. Winifred Tuck. She-" The stranger stopped, seeing the strange expression on Jesse's face. "Sir?" "Ms. Winifred Tuck?" Jesse couldn't believe it. "Yes.she wanted me to tell a young man named Jesse Tuck-and you are Mr. Jesse Tuck, am I correct? The long-lost husband of Ms. Winifred?" Jesse nodded and the stranger continued. "All right. She told me to tell you that she's going to be at the Bear Tavern at seven o'clock of the day that you came here. She will be expecting for you to be at the first table on the right of the bar. Good day." Jesse couldn't believe it. Winnie was alive and they were going to meet!
Prologue
A boy in a black leather outfit drives on the cement on his motorcycle. He takes off his helmet and shows the face of a gorgeous young boy, with wavy brown hair. He smiles and drives off and parks in front of the newly reconstructed Foster home. He slips in through the back gate and slowly walks to the garden. An unbelievable expression on his face, he falls to his knees in front of the grave. It says 'Winifred Foster-Wonderful Mother and Wife'.
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Chapter One: The Message
"Winnie.no!" 17-year-old Jesse Tuck couldn't believe that Winnie died. Why didn't she take the water? Doesn't she realize how much I love her? Jesse slowly reaches out and touches the grave, head down. He doesn't realize a shadowy figure has reached the tree just behind him Jesse raises his head and stands up. As he turns around, he sees shadow. "Who's there?" Jesse turns to start running away. "NO! Wait, I have a message for you." The stranger came out from behind the tree. "Who are you?" Jesse inquired, afraid. "I am no one you should fear. I have a message from Ms. Winifred Tuck. She-" The stranger stopped, seeing the strange expression on Jesse's face. "Sir?" "Ms. Winifred Tuck?" Jesse couldn't believe it. "Yes.she wanted me to tell a young man named Jesse Tuck-and you are Mr. Jesse Tuck, am I correct? The long-lost husband of Ms. Winifred?" Jesse nodded and the stranger continued. "All right. She told me to tell you that she's going to be at the Bear Tavern at seven o'clock of the day that you came here. She will be expecting for you to be at the first table on the right of the bar. Good day." Jesse couldn't believe it. Winnie was alive and they were going to meet!