Ok I guess I need to clear up some things before I continue. Plus I will give you a little bit of a summary of what has happened so far. Kim wished that she could change her life (they only way to change her life is to die, but she isn't aware of that yet) so then she was involved in the train wreck. She isn't exactly dead (how can I put this) she is kinda dreaming. Nathan is like her guardian angel and is trying to show her why she shouldn't change her life. So he shows her some important events in her past and is now showing her the present. Meanwhile her "body" is still alive, but barely. I am sorry for not clarifying that but I was writing these chapters at midnight when I was half asleep and bursting with ideas. I will hopefully write a little better than I have been. It has also been hard because my computer is a cheap piece of crap that can't do anything but collect dust. Sorry again for the confusion. Thanks for reading…..
-KitannaRed
So here is chapter 6. (Taking a bite out of a double quarter pounder) I do not own Kim Possible or Mc Donald's (although I do like their breakfast. Hey they could get Kim Possible to advertise their food! But hey I don't think even a made up character would want to eat that garbage. *Looks at the burger in hand and grins*) I only own Nathan who is a character mad up off the top of my head.
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Kim's POV
I approached the ER window and positioned my hand on the glass. I could see a swarm of doctors and nurses attending to my limp body. I could see my parents reflection in the window. Removing my hand I turned and faced them.
Kim: I am sorry but I can not go back.
I knew they couldn't hear me, and I didn't want them to.
Nathan: I have one more thing I have to show you. Close your eyes…
I closed them.
Nathan: Open them
I opened my eyes. I was amazed at the sight I saw. I gazed around at the beautiful decorations. There were huge white ribbons everywhere accompanied by flowers of all colours. I looked on the wall to see a tiny sculpture of the virgin Mary.
Kim: Why am I in a church?
Nathan approached me and gently turned my head to see two colossal wooden doors. They were intricately carved with angels and the lord. I began to walk towards them when a sign caught my eye. I began to read it aloud.
Kim: Welcome to the wedding of Kimberly Ann Possible and-
Nathan blocked my view.
Kim: What are you doing?
Nathan: You are not allowed to read that part.
Kim: And why not? (trying to push him aside)
Nathan: Because this is your future, or it might be.
Kim: What do you mean? (still trying to push him out of the way)
Nathan: Kim the only way you can change your life is to die. (struggling to keep her from seeing the rest of the sign) That is the only way.
At this point I had given up on trying to look at the sign.
Kim: Well duh I kinda figured that out when you said you had made that mistake.
I noticed Nathan writing something on the sign.
Nathan: True.
Kim: What are you doing? (pushing him aside)
He had scratched out the other name. Well I guess it's for the best if I don't want to continue on with my life. A man passed through the double doors. I looked up at him but I couldn't see his face. The doors closed leaving a slight crack. I peeked through, but I couldn't see much. I glanced back at Nathan, he was nodding at me, I guess that meant I could go in. I walked through the doors to see that I was standing in the aisle. Everyone in the room turned and stood when I entered. Their faces were blank, no features at all. Nathan entered as well. He must have noticed my confused face.
Nathan: What's wrong Kim?
Kim: What is wrong with them? Why are their faces blank?
Nathan: Well Kim your future isn't planned out for you it is just molded as you go through life. This here might become your future but it could change. Who knows later on you could decide you don't want to marry, and that would change this.
Kim: Then why show it to me?
Nathan: Because look at what you could have Kim! (raising his hands in the air) You could have this!
I had to admit it was very beautiful, but who was the groom? Josh? Ha I wish.
Nathan: Actually Kim you never know, the groom could be Josh.
Kim: Stop reading my thoughts!
Nathan: Sorry. I can't help it.
There was a pause. A long slow pause that just didn't seem to end.
Kim: So is that the end of the tour captain?
Nathan: Do you want it to be? I mean I still have one thing to show you but if you don't want to see it then-
Kim: No! I want to see it!
Nathan: Darn I was hoping to stay for cake….I am just kidding
Kim: Do you want me to close my eyes again? (focusing on the floor) Or do you want m-
In a flash I was out of the church and on a road. It was now dark and I could only see the moonshine on the pavement. I looked up to see a town…or what's left of one. Houses were destroyed, cars had been vandalized, buildings were on the verge of collapsing, even the lawns were somewhat overgrown but they were brown. In fact all plant life was dead, and there was no sign of any kind of mammal life either. It was a ghost town no one was there. It was a suburban development, quite similar to Middleton. Wait….this was Middleton!
Kim: Am I seeing what I think I am seeing?
Nathan: Yes. This is Middleton, and over there is what used to be your house.
He pointed at a pile of ruble. I slowly walked up to the sidewalk, and then onto the dead lawn. It looked as if the house had been burned. I picked up what looked like the door knocker. I studied it carefully, there was black residue all over it.
Kim: What happened here?
Nathan: You mean what didn't happen here?
Kim: Excuse me?
Nathan: This is what would happen if you were to die. When Drakken found out you were dead he decided to seek out revenge on your friends and family. Since you were not here to stop him, he just destroyed to whole town.
Kim: What about my family? Ron and his family? What happened to them?
Nathan: They were slaughtered.
I chill came over me, it felt as if Death himself had touched me. I walked over to my neighbors backyard where a rusted swing set stood. I sat on the swing. I closed my eyes as tears came to them. I sat there trying to sort my thoughts………
*MEANWHILE BACK AT THE ER* (I am now going to switch back to Ron's POV)
"Ron. Ron wake up." I opened my eyes to see Kim's mother speaking to me.
Ron: What's wrong?
(Mrs.) Dr. Possible: nothing I just thought you might want your breakfast.
Ron: (taking the brown paper bag and the drink) Oh thanks. Have you heard anything yet?
(Mrs.) Dr. Possible: Yes the doctors said she is in stable condition. We are allowed to see her now.
I stood up, my ass was numb from sitting so long. (Mrs.) Dr. Possible led me to the elevators where we boarded and proceeded to the 12th floor. We stepped off of the elevator and followed the signs to room 1253. When we rounded a corner I could she Kim's dad off in the distance standing outside of her room. I walked up to (Mr.) Dr. Possible and looked him in the eyes. He nodded and led me into the room. Part of me didn't want to see her but the other part wanted to. I entered the room trying not to look at Kim. I approached the side of the bed with my head looking down at the floor. I followed the wires to the variety of machines up the wall and then down, I was now looking at her. She looked so peaceful, my eyes then began to wander down her arm to the IV. Her parents were watching me the entire time.
(Mrs.) Dr. Possible: Are you going to be okay Ron?
Ron: Yeah.
I sat down on the chair beside the bed, and started to unwrap my breakfast sandwich. Kim's parents sat down on the other chairs in the room. I glanced up at them, they looked like hell. They were not as perky as they usually are, but I didn't blame them. I looked down at my sandwich which was steaming I started to take a bite but I couldn't, I couldn't eat I was just too depressed. I wrapped the sandwich back up and stuck it back in the bag. Rufus popped out of my pocket when he smelled the food.
Ron (whispering): Sorry Rufus. (Handing him the breakfast burrito) Here you go.
Rufus started to eat it on my lap. I glanced up at Kim's parents again, they were now asleep in each others arms just like the young couple I observed in the waiting room. I scooted my chair closer to the side of the bed and took a hold of Kim's hand. Still holding her hand I propped my head and my other arm on the rail of the bed…..
*Meanwhile back to Kim and Nathan* (Now back to Kim's POV)
I kept swinging gently on the swing set. Suddenly two bright lights appeared taking the form of doorways.
Nathan: Time is up Kim. So what will it be? Live or die?
Kim: I don't know, I am so confused right now.
Nathan: Well make your decision. The doorway to the left leads you back to your life, and the other one sends you straight to the grave.
I stood up and started walking to the one on the right. Nathan put his hand on my shoulder and stopped me.
Nathan: Kim don't make the same mistake I did. I would kill to be able to go back to my old life. Please don't repeat what I did.
I looked at him and then at the door on the left, then back to the one on the right. I took one step forward and…………..
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Ha ha I shall leave it off there. So which way did she go? Wait and find out. I will try to get the next chapter up soon., if my computer lets me.
-KitannaRed
So here is chapter 6. (Taking a bite out of a double quarter pounder) I do not own Kim Possible or Mc Donald's (although I do like their breakfast. Hey they could get Kim Possible to advertise their food! But hey I don't think even a made up character would want to eat that garbage. *Looks at the burger in hand and grins*) I only own Nathan who is a character mad up off the top of my head.
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Kim's POV
I approached the ER window and positioned my hand on the glass. I could see a swarm of doctors and nurses attending to my limp body. I could see my parents reflection in the window. Removing my hand I turned and faced them.
Kim: I am sorry but I can not go back.
I knew they couldn't hear me, and I didn't want them to.
Nathan: I have one more thing I have to show you. Close your eyes…
I closed them.
Nathan: Open them
I opened my eyes. I was amazed at the sight I saw. I gazed around at the beautiful decorations. There were huge white ribbons everywhere accompanied by flowers of all colours. I looked on the wall to see a tiny sculpture of the virgin Mary.
Kim: Why am I in a church?
Nathan approached me and gently turned my head to see two colossal wooden doors. They were intricately carved with angels and the lord. I began to walk towards them when a sign caught my eye. I began to read it aloud.
Kim: Welcome to the wedding of Kimberly Ann Possible and-
Nathan blocked my view.
Kim: What are you doing?
Nathan: You are not allowed to read that part.
Kim: And why not? (trying to push him aside)
Nathan: Because this is your future, or it might be.
Kim: What do you mean? (still trying to push him out of the way)
Nathan: Kim the only way you can change your life is to die. (struggling to keep her from seeing the rest of the sign) That is the only way.
At this point I had given up on trying to look at the sign.
Kim: Well duh I kinda figured that out when you said you had made that mistake.
I noticed Nathan writing something on the sign.
Nathan: True.
Kim: What are you doing? (pushing him aside)
He had scratched out the other name. Well I guess it's for the best if I don't want to continue on with my life. A man passed through the double doors. I looked up at him but I couldn't see his face. The doors closed leaving a slight crack. I peeked through, but I couldn't see much. I glanced back at Nathan, he was nodding at me, I guess that meant I could go in. I walked through the doors to see that I was standing in the aisle. Everyone in the room turned and stood when I entered. Their faces were blank, no features at all. Nathan entered as well. He must have noticed my confused face.
Nathan: What's wrong Kim?
Kim: What is wrong with them? Why are their faces blank?
Nathan: Well Kim your future isn't planned out for you it is just molded as you go through life. This here might become your future but it could change. Who knows later on you could decide you don't want to marry, and that would change this.
Kim: Then why show it to me?
Nathan: Because look at what you could have Kim! (raising his hands in the air) You could have this!
I had to admit it was very beautiful, but who was the groom? Josh? Ha I wish.
Nathan: Actually Kim you never know, the groom could be Josh.
Kim: Stop reading my thoughts!
Nathan: Sorry. I can't help it.
There was a pause. A long slow pause that just didn't seem to end.
Kim: So is that the end of the tour captain?
Nathan: Do you want it to be? I mean I still have one thing to show you but if you don't want to see it then-
Kim: No! I want to see it!
Nathan: Darn I was hoping to stay for cake….I am just kidding
Kim: Do you want me to close my eyes again? (focusing on the floor) Or do you want m-
In a flash I was out of the church and on a road. It was now dark and I could only see the moonshine on the pavement. I looked up to see a town…or what's left of one. Houses were destroyed, cars had been vandalized, buildings were on the verge of collapsing, even the lawns were somewhat overgrown but they were brown. In fact all plant life was dead, and there was no sign of any kind of mammal life either. It was a ghost town no one was there. It was a suburban development, quite similar to Middleton. Wait….this was Middleton!
Kim: Am I seeing what I think I am seeing?
Nathan: Yes. This is Middleton, and over there is what used to be your house.
He pointed at a pile of ruble. I slowly walked up to the sidewalk, and then onto the dead lawn. It looked as if the house had been burned. I picked up what looked like the door knocker. I studied it carefully, there was black residue all over it.
Kim: What happened here?
Nathan: You mean what didn't happen here?
Kim: Excuse me?
Nathan: This is what would happen if you were to die. When Drakken found out you were dead he decided to seek out revenge on your friends and family. Since you were not here to stop him, he just destroyed to whole town.
Kim: What about my family? Ron and his family? What happened to them?
Nathan: They were slaughtered.
I chill came over me, it felt as if Death himself had touched me. I walked over to my neighbors backyard where a rusted swing set stood. I sat on the swing. I closed my eyes as tears came to them. I sat there trying to sort my thoughts………
*MEANWHILE BACK AT THE ER* (I am now going to switch back to Ron's POV)
"Ron. Ron wake up." I opened my eyes to see Kim's mother speaking to me.
Ron: What's wrong?
(Mrs.) Dr. Possible: nothing I just thought you might want your breakfast.
Ron: (taking the brown paper bag and the drink) Oh thanks. Have you heard anything yet?
(Mrs.) Dr. Possible: Yes the doctors said she is in stable condition. We are allowed to see her now.
I stood up, my ass was numb from sitting so long. (Mrs.) Dr. Possible led me to the elevators where we boarded and proceeded to the 12th floor. We stepped off of the elevator and followed the signs to room 1253. When we rounded a corner I could she Kim's dad off in the distance standing outside of her room. I walked up to (Mr.) Dr. Possible and looked him in the eyes. He nodded and led me into the room. Part of me didn't want to see her but the other part wanted to. I entered the room trying not to look at Kim. I approached the side of the bed with my head looking down at the floor. I followed the wires to the variety of machines up the wall and then down, I was now looking at her. She looked so peaceful, my eyes then began to wander down her arm to the IV. Her parents were watching me the entire time.
(Mrs.) Dr. Possible: Are you going to be okay Ron?
Ron: Yeah.
I sat down on the chair beside the bed, and started to unwrap my breakfast sandwich. Kim's parents sat down on the other chairs in the room. I glanced up at them, they looked like hell. They were not as perky as they usually are, but I didn't blame them. I looked down at my sandwich which was steaming I started to take a bite but I couldn't, I couldn't eat I was just too depressed. I wrapped the sandwich back up and stuck it back in the bag. Rufus popped out of my pocket when he smelled the food.
Ron (whispering): Sorry Rufus. (Handing him the breakfast burrito) Here you go.
Rufus started to eat it on my lap. I glanced up at Kim's parents again, they were now asleep in each others arms just like the young couple I observed in the waiting room. I scooted my chair closer to the side of the bed and took a hold of Kim's hand. Still holding her hand I propped my head and my other arm on the rail of the bed…..
*Meanwhile back to Kim and Nathan* (Now back to Kim's POV)
I kept swinging gently on the swing set. Suddenly two bright lights appeared taking the form of doorways.
Nathan: Time is up Kim. So what will it be? Live or die?
Kim: I don't know, I am so confused right now.
Nathan: Well make your decision. The doorway to the left leads you back to your life, and the other one sends you straight to the grave.
I stood up and started walking to the one on the right. Nathan put his hand on my shoulder and stopped me.
Nathan: Kim don't make the same mistake I did. I would kill to be able to go back to my old life. Please don't repeat what I did.
I looked at him and then at the door on the left, then back to the one on the right. I took one step forward and…………..
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Ha ha I shall leave it off there. So which way did she go? Wait and find out. I will try to get the next chapter up soon., if my computer lets me.