Disclaimer-I am not the God like form of J.K. Rowling unfortunately! I am
merely having a little fun with her characters, woo it's a party in here!
The plot is mine and so is Audrey but other than that I'm just playing in
J.K's world.
This is my first fanfic be gentle constructive criticism only please! And trust me I know my grammar sucks!
Green Star Chapter one
She burst into Hogwarts two hours late. Students were in their quarters and the feast was way over. She ran a hand through her shimmering long dirty blonde hair and sighed. "Why the hell am I here?" She asked herself out loud as she went in search of the Headmasters office.
Her name was Audrey Belivein. She technically was a 7th year but her mind was more, as we would say 'advanced'. She came from America, she was sent to Hogwarts when her mother died. Her father killed her mother, and the memory was still fresh in her mind.
She blinked her eyes to off set the tears welling in the purple sea that her gaze held. She inherited them from her mother, her eyes. A deep violet shade, with specks of lighter purple, her mother was part Veela, and well her father was.. just plain evil.
She turned a corner and ran straight into something rigid, a person, and a very black-cloaked individual. "GOD DAMN IT WHY ARE PEOPLE ALWAYS IN MY FUCKING GOD DAMN WAY!" she raged as she took off leaving a very confused mess of black behind.
"What in bloody hell was that?" Severus Snape asked himself. He knew it couldn't be a student he never saw her before and last time he checked THAT was not the school uniform. Bewildered he took off to the Headmaster to chat about this little encounter.
It took Audrey a good fifteen minutes to find the gargoyle statue that was described in the letter sent to her. She reached her pale hand out to touch it and before she did it moved. She retracted her hand to her chest as she spun around only to find what she was looking for. "Ahh, good evening, Audrey I trust your trip was all right?" beamed Dumbledore in a reassuring voice. She flung himself into his arms engulfing him in a hug.
"I missed you Uncle Albus" He was taken aback by this and stopped to look her over under his half moon spectacles. He spoke softly, "I missed you too dear." He turned only to see his beloved potions master walk up with the look of perplexity spread out on his worn face. Dumbledore chucked "Severus that face suits you well."
Snape turned and pointed a long bony finger at Audrey "YOU!" Audrey looked at him peculiarly as she added in a sarcastic manor "me" Dumbldore took this chance to introduce the two. "Audrey meet your new Potions master and your new mentor Severus Snape." Dumbldore watched in amusement as he saw many emotions run through his ebony eyes. "I take it you too have met already?" "She nearly ran me over as she took off cursing everything in existence!"
Dumbledore ushered them into his office and took his seat as Audrey plopped down in a rather large chair and Severus leaned on the wall as if he was hiding. "Why is she here Albus? That's my question." Snape asked as he massaged the bridge of his nose. "Maybe it is best if she tells the tail Severus, that is if she desires too."
Audrey nervously played with a lock of hair and cleared her throat," I was raised in America, I come from a pure blood family, my mother raised me mostly my father stayed away which was just as well because when he was home all we wanted, was for him to leave. I took my mothers last name I didn't want my fathers." She trailed off and turned her gaze to the floor. "My father was a very powerful wizard. When I was a mere eight years old he insisted I started my schooling. I was sent to The Salem Wizarding Academy. My father forced things upon me such as my Anamagus training.I could change fully into my animal form by the time I was twelve." She took a deep breath and continued on "My father would hurt my mother, and one day he decided it was my turn." Her eyes glazed over as she continued. "We dealt with the abuse physical or by wand, we were too scared of him, he was just too powerful. My mother refused to obey him and turn to the dark side," Tears were forming behind her eyes. "One night he came home the smell of blood hovering around him, I heard my mother's raged scream and ran downstairs. There he was and he repeated spell after spell over and over as he pointed the wand at my mother. I saw my mother twist and scream and claw at the floor, and I just stood there I couldn't scream. He must have heard me because he turned to face me. I tried to run but I never get far. He clawed at my face and body leaving numerous scratches and cuts. He turned to my mother and said the two words needed as I saw my mother die before my eyes." She was sobbing now "He.cast it on me.well over 5 times he laughed as I clawed as the floor and cried and withered in pain, he left.leaving me and my dead mother behind." She couldn't go on and the headmaster knew it so he finished it.
"I was her only family so I was awarded custody of her." He looked at her "There, there child its alright." Since the first time he entered the room Severus Snape spoke, "Who is her father?" He gazed to Albus then to Audrey. She muttered one word softly and emotionless but he heard her loud and clear. "Voldermolt"
This is my first fanfic may I remind you I'm working on getting my beta's to read through my chapters faster, Meg I'm sorry I just had to post it I have chapters 2 and 3 done as well I will probably be posting them tomorrow.
CUSTRUCTIVE CRITISM ONLY PLEASE! No flames!
This is my first fanfic be gentle constructive criticism only please! And trust me I know my grammar sucks!
Green Star Chapter one
She burst into Hogwarts two hours late. Students were in their quarters and the feast was way over. She ran a hand through her shimmering long dirty blonde hair and sighed. "Why the hell am I here?" She asked herself out loud as she went in search of the Headmasters office.
Her name was Audrey Belivein. She technically was a 7th year but her mind was more, as we would say 'advanced'. She came from America, she was sent to Hogwarts when her mother died. Her father killed her mother, and the memory was still fresh in her mind.
She blinked her eyes to off set the tears welling in the purple sea that her gaze held. She inherited them from her mother, her eyes. A deep violet shade, with specks of lighter purple, her mother was part Veela, and well her father was.. just plain evil.
She turned a corner and ran straight into something rigid, a person, and a very black-cloaked individual. "GOD DAMN IT WHY ARE PEOPLE ALWAYS IN MY FUCKING GOD DAMN WAY!" she raged as she took off leaving a very confused mess of black behind.
"What in bloody hell was that?" Severus Snape asked himself. He knew it couldn't be a student he never saw her before and last time he checked THAT was not the school uniform. Bewildered he took off to the Headmaster to chat about this little encounter.
It took Audrey a good fifteen minutes to find the gargoyle statue that was described in the letter sent to her. She reached her pale hand out to touch it and before she did it moved. She retracted her hand to her chest as she spun around only to find what she was looking for. "Ahh, good evening, Audrey I trust your trip was all right?" beamed Dumbledore in a reassuring voice. She flung himself into his arms engulfing him in a hug.
"I missed you Uncle Albus" He was taken aback by this and stopped to look her over under his half moon spectacles. He spoke softly, "I missed you too dear." He turned only to see his beloved potions master walk up with the look of perplexity spread out on his worn face. Dumbledore chucked "Severus that face suits you well."
Snape turned and pointed a long bony finger at Audrey "YOU!" Audrey looked at him peculiarly as she added in a sarcastic manor "me" Dumbldore took this chance to introduce the two. "Audrey meet your new Potions master and your new mentor Severus Snape." Dumbldore watched in amusement as he saw many emotions run through his ebony eyes. "I take it you too have met already?" "She nearly ran me over as she took off cursing everything in existence!"
Dumbledore ushered them into his office and took his seat as Audrey plopped down in a rather large chair and Severus leaned on the wall as if he was hiding. "Why is she here Albus? That's my question." Snape asked as he massaged the bridge of his nose. "Maybe it is best if she tells the tail Severus, that is if she desires too."
Audrey nervously played with a lock of hair and cleared her throat," I was raised in America, I come from a pure blood family, my mother raised me mostly my father stayed away which was just as well because when he was home all we wanted, was for him to leave. I took my mothers last name I didn't want my fathers." She trailed off and turned her gaze to the floor. "My father was a very powerful wizard. When I was a mere eight years old he insisted I started my schooling. I was sent to The Salem Wizarding Academy. My father forced things upon me such as my Anamagus training.I could change fully into my animal form by the time I was twelve." She took a deep breath and continued on "My father would hurt my mother, and one day he decided it was my turn." Her eyes glazed over as she continued. "We dealt with the abuse physical or by wand, we were too scared of him, he was just too powerful. My mother refused to obey him and turn to the dark side," Tears were forming behind her eyes. "One night he came home the smell of blood hovering around him, I heard my mother's raged scream and ran downstairs. There he was and he repeated spell after spell over and over as he pointed the wand at my mother. I saw my mother twist and scream and claw at the floor, and I just stood there I couldn't scream. He must have heard me because he turned to face me. I tried to run but I never get far. He clawed at my face and body leaving numerous scratches and cuts. He turned to my mother and said the two words needed as I saw my mother die before my eyes." She was sobbing now "He.cast it on me.well over 5 times he laughed as I clawed as the floor and cried and withered in pain, he left.leaving me and my dead mother behind." She couldn't go on and the headmaster knew it so he finished it.
"I was her only family so I was awarded custody of her." He looked at her "There, there child its alright." Since the first time he entered the room Severus Snape spoke, "Who is her father?" He gazed to Albus then to Audrey. She muttered one word softly and emotionless but he heard her loud and clear. "Voldermolt"
This is my first fanfic may I remind you I'm working on getting my beta's to read through my chapters faster, Meg I'm sorry I just had to post it I have chapters 2 and 3 done as well I will probably be posting them tomorrow.
CUSTRUCTIVE CRITISM ONLY PLEASE! No flames!