Sorry I have not updated for a while. I wont be updating more, though for about a week cuz I am going to be out of the country so I am sorry. I will try to write the chapters so I can type them out when I come back. It may take a while because I also have a report due at my school when I return so I apologize to the people who like this story.

To the people who do not like this story, I am sorry and I hope you find a story u like reading BUT DON'T BITCH AT ME BECAUSE I DON'T CARE. I am writing for my joy and the joy of the people reading but if you don't like it, tough.

Constructive Criticism is VERY welcome. I know my story kinda (ok, REALLY) sucks, but I AM trying here.

Oh, I like the songs and they are NOT pop songs!

Chapter 2

Orcs and Weird People With Pointy Ears

       Her body never hit the water.

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       Ravyn had a small amount of time to wonder about why the hell she had not hit the water yet when her body did hit something. Rock hard ground.

       She groaned as she attempted to get to her feet. She then noticed a faint pain in her wrist and the odd smell of where ever the heck she had landed.

'Well that makes my sound like an alien.' She thought as she re-thought the 'wherever the heck she had landed' part.

She flexed her wrist. A small spasm of pain shoot through it but nothing bad. 'Must be sprained.' She mentally commended.

She looked around and took stock of her things. One backpack, two bags, and five lethal weapons strapped to various parts of her body.

She then proceeded to have a look at her surroundings and try to figure out if she was dead or not.

Blue sky. Thick foliage. Odd smell of rotting things. This could not be her home.

She thought for a moment, wondering by some odd twist in fate that she was in heaven. She sniffed the air again.

'Heaven would not smell like rotting flesh.'  Her mind answered.

As she looked around, she caught sight of movement behind the thick plants. Actually, there were a lot of things moving.

'Great, just my luck. Now I am going to be attacked by ravenous wolves and have no way to . . .' Her train of thought ended there because the ugliest thing she had ever seen had just stepped out from behind a tree. I few more started to come out from behind it.

Ravyn took a step back only to find three more behind her. That would make a total of six ugly whatsits totally surrounding her.

Unfortunately for her, they were drooling at her and giving her looks like 'Yum. Dinner."

She looked around, suddenly very aware of how close they were getting to her. At the moment, her brain cells came back together and reminded her of her weaponry. She put her hand to her side and felt the cold handle of her sword against her palm.

'Super, I have a ton of weapons that I will probably do more damage to myself than those, um, things over there.' She sighed. 'Might as well swing the sword around an hope I hit something.'

Ravyn pulled out the sword and the creatures just sneered at her as if saying 'You do not even know how to use that thing.'

'Damn right' she thought as three of the walking corpse thing approached her. When they got close enough, Ravyn closed her eyes and spun, swung the sword. She felt it hit something.  She opened her eyes just in time to see three heads hit the ground with a sickening thud. The other three its stepped back, looking as shocked as their mutilated faces could show.

"Yah. In your face, ugly." Ravyn said, while scooping up her courage and charging at them.

She cut the right arm off one, the legs of the other, and decapitated the other.

The one with no arm charged at her, teeth bared. She just thrust the sword forward but kept her eyes open this time. Luck was on her side because the ugly it ran straight into her sword. Seconds later, the thing was a kabob on the end of her sword.

She yelped in alarm when she felt something sharp hit her ankle. She looked down to see the creature she had cut the legs off of gnawing at her boot. She kicked it in the head, affectingly breaking its head.

At that point, she noticed the shallow gash across her stomach. Not big enough to kill, but big enough to loose blood. To much blood.

She groaned and collapsed, losing cautiousness before she hit the ground.

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"It's not that deep. Just a flesh wound."

"Yes, but she has bleed much."

"We must get her back to Rivendall. The orc blade was poisoned."

Ravyn groaned as she felt herself being lifted off of the ground.

Panicking, she started to struggle but the arms that held her tightened.

"Be still." She heard a male voice whisper in her ear. She stiffened. She attempted to open her eyes, but the light was to bright and she had to close them immediately.

Ravyn felt nauseated and dizzy even though she was not standing. She drifted in and out of consciousness as she lay in the strangers' arms.

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Legolas and Aragorn rode towards Rivendall at a gallop. They were only a half days ride away but that could make all the difference.

Aragorn had offered to carry the girls' things leaving Legolas with the tedious work of carrying the girl. Not that she was heavy. Being an elf, he had the strength of many man.

He looked down at the girl in his lap. She seemed to be wearing unbelievably baggy laggings made up of some foreign material. The shirt, which he could not see because of some odd, half cloak covered it. Yet he knew, under the shirt was a flesh wound that the Orcs had made.

He could not comprehend how she was the one to kill the arcs that had fallowed Aragorn and the remainder of the hobbits through the forest after Arwen had brought Frodo to Rivendalle. That was just two days before. Another question was, How did this girl get into the woods of Rivendall without being detected?

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Ravyn groaned and opened her eyes to see a beige ceiling. She sat up but had to slump back down again because of the horrible pain in her stomach. She looked down just noticing the bandages. Her memories came back and she smacked her forehead.

'Great. Now I really don't know where the hell I am.'

At the moment, a tall woman with dark brown hair walked through the door. The woman's eyes held much wisdom and she had an air of superiority about her. Ravyn just glared at her as she attempted to get out of the bed.

A sudden pain shoot through her stomach and she winced. 'Ouch, not a smart idea.'

Ravyn looked up at the woman to see her looking at her, concerned. Mental eye roll there.

Ravyn grabbed her head in pain. Her head was suddenly banging like a drum. When the pain subsided, she looked up to see the woman sitting on her bed, looking at her oddly.

Arwen. Ravyn knitted her eyes together. The name had just popped into her mind. Just like that. Yet it sounded so familiar

Ravyn blinked, clearing her mind and her vision. The woman, Arwen, was still looking at her oddly. Ravyn raised and eyebrow. That was weird. Did she have . . . pointed ears?

I'm Just a Kid

 
I woke up it was 7
Waited till 11
Just to figure out that no one would call
I think I got a lot of friends but I don't hear from them
What's another night all alone?
When your spending everyday on you own
And here it goes
 
[CHORUS]
I'm just a kid and life is a nightmare
I'm just a kid, I know that it's not fair
Nobody cares, cause I'm alone and the world is
Having more fun than me
 
And maybe when the night is dead, I'll crawl into my bed
Staring at these 4 walls again
I'll try to think about the last time, I had good time
Everyone's got somewhere to go
And their gonna leave me here on my own
 
[REPEAT CHORUS]
 
What the fuck is wrong with me?
Don't fit in with anybody
How did this happen to me?
Wide-awake I'm bored and I can't fall asleep
Cause every night is the worst night ever
 
I'm just a kid [repeat 5X]
 
[CHORUS (repeat 2X)]
 
I'm all alone tonight
Nobody cares tonight
Cause I'm just a kid tonight

I am starting the third chapter and I have, like the fifth chapter but nothing in-between. I will try to finish the third chapter and type it out before I leave. Hope you guy like it!