Ha! Told ya...It's still tomorrow O.o;;
I have a little comment though, the person named 'noone' confused me with their review, i'm not sure what you meant, if you could tell me again, i'll try to fix my fic whichever way you would like to see fixed. I'm always looking for suggestions on my fics, thanks for your comment
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My Broken Shell
By: Lunatic Lisa
A Dedication Fan fiction To Yami Bakura
Chapter Eleven
"Mr. Bakura's Nightmare, Come True."
Let them see what is not there and feel what does not touch them, when they no longer trust their senses, that is the time to strike
-Magic The Gathering, Illusionary Wall.
"Where am I again?" I walked around the cold, dark, empty, scary looking place.
"Is this a dream?" I walked around the room some more, feeling a wall, or at least I think it was a room, but it certainly wasn't a dream…
"Hello!" I called out, "Is anyone there!"
I was getting desperate, if I couldn't find my way out, I might not live much longer… This place feels like it's eating my soul right out of me! I feel weak, tired, I might fall to the floor right here. But if I fall I might not get back up again…there has to be someone to help me.
"Help Me!" I called out, franticly, "Anyone!" I looked around to dark room. I was going to pass out any time now…but I can't die now, Ryou will have no one to look after him, where will he go, he has no relatives…
I finally heard a sinister, grave voice, though not exactly the savior I was hoping for.
"Why should I help you?" He chuckled, "You do not believe Ryou, so why should I believe you need help?"
What? What the hell is he saying, is he telling me that he is not helping me? Well if I were him I would help me…
I couldn't believe this, this was no dream, or a nightmare! This was real life or death!
"What did I do to you?" I asked him, such simple words, and yet meaningful words.
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Mid-Chapter Switch (Yami Bakura POV)
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Great, this will be a perfect time to teach him a lesson and maybe Ryou will get what he hopes for…The Shadows won't destroy him as fast as others, he does have a strong will. So I'll have my fun today…
"What you did to me?!" I smirked, "You don't even remember…how sad."
"What?! What do you mean sad?" He look to my voice although he can't see me.
"Remember, when he tried to tell you about the spirit inside the Millennium Ring?"
"Who or what are you?" His voice was nervous, he was nervous.
I think playing with his mind is actually fun, now don't think I'm evil again, I'm just having fun, and besides I think I like toying with people's minds better than physical attack. Hey I'm not hurting him.
"Answer me!"
This was pure humor.
"Me? Someone with great power, soon to be greater." I used one of my favorite lines. Hey it fits. Evasive answers are ever so fun...
"And someone who refuses to give a straight answer to that question, no matter how many times it's asked, it seems."
He mocked me slightly with that word phase, and I didn't like that, but I wouldn't hurt him, just because he IS Ryou's dad…
"Mortal, You are lucky you are an important part of Ryou's life, if you weren't I would've killed you a long time ago."
This is great, I love toying with people's minds, and when I'm done he is going to believe Ryou, because, I'm gonna make him believe one way or another.
"But…." He stammered at me, I would've kept him longer, but his soul was diminishing, then it hit me.
"How did you get in here?" I stepped in the room he was in and the lights flashed on, I revealed myself, as myself, not Ryou.
He looked at me for the longest time and stammered, "I…a…umm…"
I'm not the most patient person in the world, so I snapped at him, "Answer me mortal, I'm not going to kill you."
"Well…I was drifting off to sleep and then I just sort of got reallocated here…" He looked at me and questioned, "You aren't Ryou are you?"
"Finally," I stepped closer to him, "Do you believe him now?"
"I…ah…" He was speechless I guess my appearance really frightened him.
"I'm not as evil as I was before, books don't change things and people do." I reassured him, "Ask Ryou tomorrow about me, tell him Yami told you to ask him." I smiled, not a happy smile, a relieved smile.
"Okay…I will…" He was shaken, by my words and voice, I wonder why Ryou doesn't back away when I speak, I guess he's used to it by now…
"Good…"
I sent him out of my soul room, and back where he came from, and I vanished to my sleeping place and feel right back asleep
Told you! I told you!!! The next chapter hopefully will be out in 7 days (sorry, busy X.x) Is it just me or is this chapter the longest chapter yet? (I'm getting better!!)
I have a little comment though, the person named 'noone' confused me with their review, i'm not sure what you meant, if you could tell me again, i'll try to fix my fic whichever way you would like to see fixed. I'm always looking for suggestions on my fics, thanks for your comment
Onward!
"Where am I again?" I walked around the cold, dark, empty, scary looking place.
"Is this a dream?" I walked around the room some more, feeling a wall, or at least I think it was a room, but it certainly wasn't a dream…
"Hello!" I called out, "Is anyone there!"
I was getting desperate, if I couldn't find my way out, I might not live much longer… This place feels like it's eating my soul right out of me! I feel weak, tired, I might fall to the floor right here. But if I fall I might not get back up again…there has to be someone to help me.
"Help Me!" I called out, franticly, "Anyone!" I looked around to dark room. I was going to pass out any time now…but I can't die now, Ryou will have no one to look after him, where will he go, he has no relatives…
I finally heard a sinister, grave voice, though not exactly the savior I was hoping for.
"Why should I help you?" He chuckled, "You do not believe Ryou, so why should I believe you need help?"
What? What the hell is he saying, is he telling me that he is not helping me? Well if I were him I would help me…
I couldn't believe this, this was no dream, or a nightmare! This was real life or death!
"What did I do to you?" I asked him, such simple words, and yet meaningful words.
Mid-Chapter Switch (Yami Bakura POV)
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Great, this will be a perfect time to teach him a lesson and maybe Ryou will get what he hopes for…The Shadows won't destroy him as fast as others, he does have a strong will. So I'll have my fun today…
"What you did to me?!" I smirked, "You don't even remember…how sad."
"What?! What do you mean sad?" He look to my voice although he can't see me.
"Remember, when he tried to tell you about the spirit inside the Millennium Ring?"
"Who or what are you?" His voice was nervous, he was nervous.
I think playing with his mind is actually fun, now don't think I'm evil again, I'm just having fun, and besides I think I like toying with people's minds better than physical attack. Hey I'm not hurting him.
"Answer me!"
This was pure humor.
"Me? Someone with great power, soon to be greater." I used one of my favorite lines. Hey it fits. Evasive answers are ever so fun...
"And someone who refuses to give a straight answer to that question, no matter how many times it's asked, it seems."
He mocked me slightly with that word phase, and I didn't like that, but I wouldn't hurt him, just because he IS Ryou's dad…
"Mortal, You are lucky you are an important part of Ryou's life, if you weren't I would've killed you a long time ago."
This is great, I love toying with people's minds, and when I'm done he is going to believe Ryou, because, I'm gonna make him believe one way or another.
"But…." He stammered at me, I would've kept him longer, but his soul was diminishing, then it hit me.
"How did you get in here?" I stepped in the room he was in and the lights flashed on, I revealed myself, as myself, not Ryou.
He looked at me for the longest time and stammered, "I…a…umm…"
I'm not the most patient person in the world, so I snapped at him, "Answer me mortal, I'm not going to kill you."
"Well…I was drifting off to sleep and then I just sort of got reallocated here…" He looked at me and questioned, "You aren't Ryou are you?"
"Finally," I stepped closer to him, "Do you believe him now?"
"I…ah…" He was speechless I guess my appearance really frightened him.
"I'm not as evil as I was before, books don't change things and people do." I reassured him, "Ask Ryou tomorrow about me, tell him Yami told you to ask him." I smiled, not a happy smile, a relieved smile.
"Okay…I will…" He was shaken, by my words and voice, I wonder why Ryou doesn't back away when I speak, I guess he's used to it by now…
"Good…"
I sent him out of my soul room, and back where he came from, and I vanished to my sleeping place and feel right back asleep
Told you! I told you!!! The next chapter hopefully will be out in 7 days (sorry, busy X.x) Is it just me or is this chapter the longest chapter yet? (I'm getting better!!)