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This sucks, I only have 7 reviews!!! And only two of them were for chapter two!!! WHAT'S THE DEAL?!?!
Chapter 3 of Voyage of a Lonely Saiyan: Oh crap
Gohan sighed as he lay back down on his little bed with his arms around his neck. That Hafrutie or whatever-his-name-was guy was so close to busting him it wasn't even funny and he wasn't exactly very anxious to do it again. He lied his way out of it but tried to suck it up. If he was going to live on a ship by stealing food and killing whoever saw him, he had a lot of work to do on toughening up. Just the thought of when he strangled that guy, the life draining out of him through the act of Gohan's hands, was enough to make him puke. Thinking of that body reminded Gohan that he hadn't gotten rid of it yet and it was lying in the corner of his room, facedown so as not to have to look in it's face. The guy must've had a family expecting him to come home, Gohan thought, but now he won't because I killed him. Gohan hung his head, ashamed, and lay back more on his bed. Maybe he should just sleep for a bit. And he did.
A few hours later Gohan decided it'd be an ideal time for him to get rid of the body right now, so Gohan grabbed the smelly thing, holding it behind him and peeked around the corner of his small space. He hadn't had time to figure out the guards' rotations and he was too lazy so he just had to wing it.
He nearly walked out without the deceased guards clothes on but quickly stopped himself, put them on and continued.
He looked down the long white hallway and ran straight on it. He took a left, a right, two more lefts in no time he was at the hatch. He stared at the circular shining, chrome handle wheel thing and was about to turn it when he heard footsteps and voices from somewhere near. He spun around and instantly started looking for a hiding place. Just as he saw shadows at the min crossroads of white halls before him a large thundering boom that came from somewhere on the far side of the ship and the people looking for Gohan and Gohan himself all fell from the large tremors that it left. Very soon after a panicky voice screamed on the intercom.
"Everyone on board, you must go to your chambers immediately. The ship is being attacked, no wait, it's a major meteor shower that our pilots did not anticipate." A moment's silence, "Now move!"
Gohan on his spot of the floor heard the other saiyans, who nearly found him, scramble to their feet and dash off somewhere almost apoplectic with fear. Apparently a meteor shower was a big deal, Gohan thought absentmindedly, as he wobbled from the persistent shakings of the ship. He grinned smugly and started turning the handle of the hatch with the smelly corpse near at hand. He popped it open and was almost instantly sucked out right off of his feet, a loud whistling sound filling his ears. WOW, he thought and turned his head just in time to see the corpse fly out like a piece of paper, folding and bending in a very sick way, never to be seen again. Gohan held himself shakily in the doorway of life and death and shot out his right arm to pull the door shut, he had some trouble since his face seemed to be tearing right off and the door was swinging madly but he managed to grab it. All the sucking noises stopped and he was no longer being pulled out but e did notice a different sound. The alarm was ringing.
Oh crap, oh crap, oh crap, oh crap, oh crap, Eeeeehhhhhhhhh!!! Gohan's mind screamed. I'm dead! He ran as fast as he could but suddenly couldn't remember where he was going. He spun around and clenched his head with his hands, confused by all the whiteness and several different halls, having not the slightest notion of the correct direction. He could hear the pounding of many feet coming towards him from every way and the intercom yelling hoarsely, "Hall breach! Hall breach! Units 1-a, 1- c, 4-b, 5-d you are all to be dispatched to Sectors M, N and O. Go, go, go!" into his ear.
"They're coming for me, they're coming for me." Gohan mumbled repetitively to himself nearly chewing his fingers off but getting into a fighting position was what he really wanted to, wait, needed to do so he put his hands out in front of him and tried to look calm as he was being surrounded by a whole bunch of similarly dressed saiyans all snarling at him with a few checking their scouters. Feeling like a little mouse around five big, hungry cats, Gohan started looking for a good target to take down first, if he could.
Suddenly Gohan remembered he had his Mystic form and a big weight was lifted off his shoulders. He didn't have much time to think or power up though, because the large mass of saiyans started throwing themselves at him and shooting ki blasts at him, drowning him, blocking out his vision.
Ok, if you DO NOT review, there will definitely be some serious pain for someone and you won't get another chapter (if you like this story *sniff sniff* () and it'll make me very sad cuz I know you're reading but not reviewing. Come on, plz?!
~Godrin~
This sucks, I only have 7 reviews!!! And only two of them were for chapter two!!! WHAT'S THE DEAL?!?!
Chapter 3 of Voyage of a Lonely Saiyan: Oh crap
Gohan sighed as he lay back down on his little bed with his arms around his neck. That Hafrutie or whatever-his-name-was guy was so close to busting him it wasn't even funny and he wasn't exactly very anxious to do it again. He lied his way out of it but tried to suck it up. If he was going to live on a ship by stealing food and killing whoever saw him, he had a lot of work to do on toughening up. Just the thought of when he strangled that guy, the life draining out of him through the act of Gohan's hands, was enough to make him puke. Thinking of that body reminded Gohan that he hadn't gotten rid of it yet and it was lying in the corner of his room, facedown so as not to have to look in it's face. The guy must've had a family expecting him to come home, Gohan thought, but now he won't because I killed him. Gohan hung his head, ashamed, and lay back more on his bed. Maybe he should just sleep for a bit. And he did.
A few hours later Gohan decided it'd be an ideal time for him to get rid of the body right now, so Gohan grabbed the smelly thing, holding it behind him and peeked around the corner of his small space. He hadn't had time to figure out the guards' rotations and he was too lazy so he just had to wing it.
He nearly walked out without the deceased guards clothes on but quickly stopped himself, put them on and continued.
He looked down the long white hallway and ran straight on it. He took a left, a right, two more lefts in no time he was at the hatch. He stared at the circular shining, chrome handle wheel thing and was about to turn it when he heard footsteps and voices from somewhere near. He spun around and instantly started looking for a hiding place. Just as he saw shadows at the min crossroads of white halls before him a large thundering boom that came from somewhere on the far side of the ship and the people looking for Gohan and Gohan himself all fell from the large tremors that it left. Very soon after a panicky voice screamed on the intercom.
"Everyone on board, you must go to your chambers immediately. The ship is being attacked, no wait, it's a major meteor shower that our pilots did not anticipate." A moment's silence, "Now move!"
Gohan on his spot of the floor heard the other saiyans, who nearly found him, scramble to their feet and dash off somewhere almost apoplectic with fear. Apparently a meteor shower was a big deal, Gohan thought absentmindedly, as he wobbled from the persistent shakings of the ship. He grinned smugly and started turning the handle of the hatch with the smelly corpse near at hand. He popped it open and was almost instantly sucked out right off of his feet, a loud whistling sound filling his ears. WOW, he thought and turned his head just in time to see the corpse fly out like a piece of paper, folding and bending in a very sick way, never to be seen again. Gohan held himself shakily in the doorway of life and death and shot out his right arm to pull the door shut, he had some trouble since his face seemed to be tearing right off and the door was swinging madly but he managed to grab it. All the sucking noises stopped and he was no longer being pulled out but e did notice a different sound. The alarm was ringing.
Oh crap, oh crap, oh crap, oh crap, oh crap, Eeeeehhhhhhhhh!!! Gohan's mind screamed. I'm dead! He ran as fast as he could but suddenly couldn't remember where he was going. He spun around and clenched his head with his hands, confused by all the whiteness and several different halls, having not the slightest notion of the correct direction. He could hear the pounding of many feet coming towards him from every way and the intercom yelling hoarsely, "Hall breach! Hall breach! Units 1-a, 1- c, 4-b, 5-d you are all to be dispatched to Sectors M, N and O. Go, go, go!" into his ear.
"They're coming for me, they're coming for me." Gohan mumbled repetitively to himself nearly chewing his fingers off but getting into a fighting position was what he really wanted to, wait, needed to do so he put his hands out in front of him and tried to look calm as he was being surrounded by a whole bunch of similarly dressed saiyans all snarling at him with a few checking their scouters. Feeling like a little mouse around five big, hungry cats, Gohan started looking for a good target to take down first, if he could.
Suddenly Gohan remembered he had his Mystic form and a big weight was lifted off his shoulders. He didn't have much time to think or power up though, because the large mass of saiyans started throwing themselves at him and shooting ki blasts at him, drowning him, blocking out his vision.
Ok, if you DO NOT review, there will definitely be some serious pain for someone and you won't get another chapter (if you like this story *sniff sniff* () and it'll make me very sad cuz I know you're reading but not reviewing. Come on, plz?!
~Godrin~