Okay I rewrote this chapter so maybe it'll be better.
'thoughts' "speech" /hikari to yami/ //yami to hikari// [me interrupting]
Disclaimer: I don't own yugioh or yu yu hakusho.if I did the shows would be really weird. Ryou: uh-huh Zwen: you don't have to agree.. Kurama: uh-huh Zwen: o_0 oh well. on with the chapter.this one isn't as 'violent' as the other chapter.
~* Last time *~ "Oops." said Yusuke remembering that Ryou was there. "Ummm.did I forget to mention that we are spirit detectives and we fight, capture, and destroy evil demons?"
Revelations
"Ummmmm.excuse me? Demons? What?" said Ryou.
"Yup.you heard me right. We're spirit detectives. We are sort of like the police. Accept with demons. That guy," Yusuke said pointing to Koenma. "Is sort of like our boss. We have special powers. I can shoot my spirit energy. You probably can't see it because you don't have spirit powers and because you're not a demon."
"Can you show me anyway?" asked Ryou politely.
"Uhhh.sure." replied Yusuke. As he shot a weak beam of spirit energy out the window. "Umm.did you see it?" he asked.
".Yeah." replied Ryou ".but how can I see it if I'm not a demon or have spirit powers?"
"Maybe he's a demon, and he doesn't know." said Kurama.
"While you idiots were talking, the demon is still outside. What are the demons Koenma talked about after?" Hiei asked.
"Uhhh.I think they were looking after a youko with elemental powers, you know like fire, water, ice, spirit, thunder, earth, wind." Kuwabara stated until everyone ignored him.
"No wonder they want to find the youko, he sounds pretty strong though.uhhh.demon.outside? Let's GO." said Kurama.
Then everyone, with the exception of Ryou, rushed outside. They looked around to see what had caused the noise earlier.
"Do you guys see anything?" Kurama asked looking around.
"Nope." Said Yusuke.
"Do you know where Hiei is?" Kurama asked Yusuke.
Before Yusuke could answer Hiei appeared at Kurama's side.
"Hn." Was all Hiei said.
They stood glaring into the darkness [duh! It's like 2 in the morning] daring any creature to come out. Then they heard rustles in the bushes behind them. Quickly they turned around and faced two demons.
'Probably all in the upper A-class' thought Yusuke.
"Hello spirit detectives," said one of the male demons. "I am Kaoru, on my left is Kaori. As you probably heard, we are here for the elemental youko. We know he's here."
Suddenly a scream was heard towards the temple where.Ryou was.
"RYOU!!" yelled Kurama dashing to the temple.
At the temple.
Ryou was backed up into the corner of the room. Tears streaming down his face, and clutching his arm where the demon had kicked him. This was the third demon, Kyori.
The demon smirked, and kicked Ryou again. Ryou whimpered.
"Pathetic, how could you be the youko we're looking for?" Kyori spat glaring at Ryou.
"I-I don't know w-what you are t-talking about." stuttered Ryou truthfully.
"Don't lie to me!" Kyori hissed picking Ryou up by his shirt collar. "Let's see if you really are the youko or not!" Kyori chanted something and a searing pain ripped through Ryou's body.
"AHHHHHHHHH!!!" yelled Ryou franticly clawing at the demon's hands.
"Stop trying to resist."
Ryou's body twitched with the current pain he was in.
"RYOU!!" yelled Kurama kicking open the door [ooh he's angry].
"Sprit gun!" Yusuke yelled firing his blast at Kyori.
Kyori dropped Ryou and fell to the floor seemingly dead. Kurama rushed to Ryou, but before he could get there Kaori blocked him.
"Your friend killed our brother, now you must pay." Said Kaori forming a ball of black energy and firing it at Kurama.
"Kurama!" screamed Ryou. Everyone looked at Ryou as a blue glow surrounded his body. Fox ears appeared on his head and his hair grew a bit longer and a tail appeared at.whatever. Ryou intercepted the energy ball and bounced it at Kaoru. Kaoru screamed as he was hit and he died [^-^U ] Ryou glared at Kaori before gathering electrical power and fire in each of his hands. Then firing it at the demon, then he too died. Ryou turned around and looked at Kurama before he fell to the ground in a dead faint.
TBC
Zwen: that wasn't too bad was it?? Hiei: yes it was!! I didn't get to fight!!!!! Ryou: * sweatdrop * please review.
'thoughts' "speech" /hikari to yami/ //yami to hikari// [me interrupting]
Disclaimer: I don't own yugioh or yu yu hakusho.if I did the shows would be really weird. Ryou: uh-huh Zwen: you don't have to agree.. Kurama: uh-huh Zwen: o_0 oh well. on with the chapter.this one isn't as 'violent' as the other chapter.
~* Last time *~ "Oops." said Yusuke remembering that Ryou was there. "Ummm.did I forget to mention that we are spirit detectives and we fight, capture, and destroy evil demons?"
Revelations
"Ummmmm.excuse me? Demons? What?" said Ryou.
"Yup.you heard me right. We're spirit detectives. We are sort of like the police. Accept with demons. That guy," Yusuke said pointing to Koenma. "Is sort of like our boss. We have special powers. I can shoot my spirit energy. You probably can't see it because you don't have spirit powers and because you're not a demon."
"Can you show me anyway?" asked Ryou politely.
"Uhhh.sure." replied Yusuke. As he shot a weak beam of spirit energy out the window. "Umm.did you see it?" he asked.
".Yeah." replied Ryou ".but how can I see it if I'm not a demon or have spirit powers?"
"Maybe he's a demon, and he doesn't know." said Kurama.
"While you idiots were talking, the demon is still outside. What are the demons Koenma talked about after?" Hiei asked.
"Uhhh.I think they were looking after a youko with elemental powers, you know like fire, water, ice, spirit, thunder, earth, wind." Kuwabara stated until everyone ignored him.
"No wonder they want to find the youko, he sounds pretty strong though.uhhh.demon.outside? Let's GO." said Kurama.
Then everyone, with the exception of Ryou, rushed outside. They looked around to see what had caused the noise earlier.
"Do you guys see anything?" Kurama asked looking around.
"Nope." Said Yusuke.
"Do you know where Hiei is?" Kurama asked Yusuke.
Before Yusuke could answer Hiei appeared at Kurama's side.
"Hn." Was all Hiei said.
They stood glaring into the darkness [duh! It's like 2 in the morning] daring any creature to come out. Then they heard rustles in the bushes behind them. Quickly they turned around and faced two demons.
'Probably all in the upper A-class' thought Yusuke.
"Hello spirit detectives," said one of the male demons. "I am Kaoru, on my left is Kaori. As you probably heard, we are here for the elemental youko. We know he's here."
Suddenly a scream was heard towards the temple where.Ryou was.
"RYOU!!" yelled Kurama dashing to the temple.
At the temple.
Ryou was backed up into the corner of the room. Tears streaming down his face, and clutching his arm where the demon had kicked him. This was the third demon, Kyori.
The demon smirked, and kicked Ryou again. Ryou whimpered.
"Pathetic, how could you be the youko we're looking for?" Kyori spat glaring at Ryou.
"I-I don't know w-what you are t-talking about." stuttered Ryou truthfully.
"Don't lie to me!" Kyori hissed picking Ryou up by his shirt collar. "Let's see if you really are the youko or not!" Kyori chanted something and a searing pain ripped through Ryou's body.
"AHHHHHHHHH!!!" yelled Ryou franticly clawing at the demon's hands.
"Stop trying to resist."
Ryou's body twitched with the current pain he was in.
"RYOU!!" yelled Kurama kicking open the door [ooh he's angry].
"Sprit gun!" Yusuke yelled firing his blast at Kyori.
Kyori dropped Ryou and fell to the floor seemingly dead. Kurama rushed to Ryou, but before he could get there Kaori blocked him.
"Your friend killed our brother, now you must pay." Said Kaori forming a ball of black energy and firing it at Kurama.
"Kurama!" screamed Ryou. Everyone looked at Ryou as a blue glow surrounded his body. Fox ears appeared on his head and his hair grew a bit longer and a tail appeared at.whatever. Ryou intercepted the energy ball and bounced it at Kaoru. Kaoru screamed as he was hit and he died [^-^U ] Ryou glared at Kaori before gathering electrical power and fire in each of his hands. Then firing it at the demon, then he too died. Ryou turned around and looked at Kurama before he fell to the ground in a dead faint.
TBC
Zwen: that wasn't too bad was it?? Hiei: yes it was!! I didn't get to fight!!!!! Ryou: * sweatdrop * please review.