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Chapter2- The elve's sword _________________________________________________
Mandy had taken Evelynn in hiding for 7 years now .They lived in a small cottage near the elve's village in the forest.Today was Evelynn's 7th birthday.
"Eve dear stand still."Cried mandy who was trying to sew her a new dress.
"But mandy I want to go out and play.The elves promised me something special."
"Don't you want me to finish your new dress.?OH stand still."
"Ow!stop poking me!"
"Now I wouldn't if you were standing still now would I?"
Evelynn scruched up her face little china doll like face in frustration.
"Oh mandy!I don't care about my dress I want to go out and play!I promise I'll let you finish it later.Just please let me go.Just for a little while?"She pleaded
"(sighs)Oh fine dear."
"Yay!"Cried Eve throwing off her unfinished dress and putting on a comfortable pants instead of a stupid fancy dress.
"Not like I'm gonna be able to finish with you fidgeting and all.To think maybe you can be more lady like."Said mandy shaking her head.
"Bye mandy." Eve pecked mandy on the cheek then ran off.
"Don't bump into the - oh too late..."
"Sorry!I'll clean it up later!Bye!"She cried out then ran off.
"Oh what am I going to do with her...So much like her mother..."a tear trickled ran down mandy's cheek as she watched Evelynn rush through the forest.
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"Glen!Glen I'm here!Whats the supprise?!"Evelynn asked a young elf boy.He was a skinny boy around her age.Like all elves his skin was a light green.
He smiled at her and said"If I told you it wouldn't be a supprise.I promised grandfather I wouldn't tell.He wants to give it to you himself."
"Where is he?Where is grandpa Slannen?"She asked her beautiful green eyes lighting up.Her light brown curls bouncing up and down as she jumped with joy.
"He's in his room waiting for you."
She rushed towards Slannen's room and threw open the door.Slannen looked up from his hammock and smiled and his old wrinkles showed more then ever in his old lined face as he looked at the daughter of Ella, the maid he befriended long ago.His people had sworn to protect her upon the death of the queen.His eyes saddened a bit.
"Where's the supprise?!"Asked evelynn jumping up and down.
"don't get so excited.It's here as promised."He got up and got out a box from the cabinet.It was a beautiful long thin wooden box with leaves carved around it.Inside was something even more beautiful.Slannen opened it and Evelynn went dead quiet with amazement.In all her life she's never seen something so wonderful.Ever since as long as she could remember she had always wanted one.Most of the fighter elves had one but not as unique as this one.It was a beautiful silver sword, the most rarest know Agulen made sword burnt by the fires of the deep and cooled by the water of Angel's lake.The handle had silver leaves entwined around it and on the blade it had the forgotten language of the elves carved on it.From the moment she held it she fell deaply inlove with it.It was as lighter than any sword she had been aloud to hold but it was sharper then any she had seen.
"Don't judge it by it's wieght.It can slice the bone perfectly and with it's lightness you can move swift and fast."
"It's beautiful...I don't know what to say...."
"Tell Mandy that you start training tomorrow with one of our finest swordsman."
She looked up at him happily smiling but a little confused.
"Well you have to learn to defend yourself.We can't let a little girl go prancing about without knowing how to use a sword now can we?"He smiled down at her.
"I'm not a little girl!I'm seven.That means almost eight!" Slannen laughed.She smiled back at him.
"Thankyou grandpa slannen!"She hugged him tight.
"Oh no! I have to go.I promised mandy I'd be home early.She's making such a fuss about my dress!"She hurried off after saying good bye to Slannen and Glen.
"It's time we train her for what lies ahead" slannen said quietly to Glen."She is soon to know her future...who she really is..."Glen nodded his head slightly. _____________________________________________________
And so during the years of the young princess's life she never even heard of the war called The great battle of Frell.Many have died in Frell.No one knows whether the king or queen are still alive.Not many remembers a time when there were peace.Some don't even knows what peace stands for anymore.For now the evil fairy Vorincia rules over their lands.Orges roam free everwhere, killing and eating everything.No longer peace but starvation and fear roams those lands.Yet, sadly the princess hadn't a clue what the elves were preparing her for.Once again the elves, allies of Frell will help their friends regain the land that is rightfully their's. ___________________________________________________
So what does everyone think?I hope I get lots more reviews.The last time I wrote a story on Harry Potter noone read it so I quit that one hopefully I can continue this one if I get more reviews.Well see ya.I'll update the next chapter soon.
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Chapter2- The elve's sword _________________________________________________
Mandy had taken Evelynn in hiding for 7 years now .They lived in a small cottage near the elve's village in the forest.Today was Evelynn's 7th birthday.
"Eve dear stand still."Cried mandy who was trying to sew her a new dress.
"But mandy I want to go out and play.The elves promised me something special."
"Don't you want me to finish your new dress.?OH stand still."
"Ow!stop poking me!"
"Now I wouldn't if you were standing still now would I?"
Evelynn scruched up her face little china doll like face in frustration.
"Oh mandy!I don't care about my dress I want to go out and play!I promise I'll let you finish it later.Just please let me go.Just for a little while?"She pleaded
"(sighs)Oh fine dear."
"Yay!"Cried Eve throwing off her unfinished dress and putting on a comfortable pants instead of a stupid fancy dress.
"Not like I'm gonna be able to finish with you fidgeting and all.To think maybe you can be more lady like."Said mandy shaking her head.
"Bye mandy." Eve pecked mandy on the cheek then ran off.
"Don't bump into the - oh too late..."
"Sorry!I'll clean it up later!Bye!"She cried out then ran off.
"Oh what am I going to do with her...So much like her mother..."a tear trickled ran down mandy's cheek as she watched Evelynn rush through the forest.
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"Glen!Glen I'm here!Whats the supprise?!"Evelynn asked a young elf boy.He was a skinny boy around her age.Like all elves his skin was a light green.
He smiled at her and said"If I told you it wouldn't be a supprise.I promised grandfather I wouldn't tell.He wants to give it to you himself."
"Where is he?Where is grandpa Slannen?"She asked her beautiful green eyes lighting up.Her light brown curls bouncing up and down as she jumped with joy.
"He's in his room waiting for you."
She rushed towards Slannen's room and threw open the door.Slannen looked up from his hammock and smiled and his old wrinkles showed more then ever in his old lined face as he looked at the daughter of Ella, the maid he befriended long ago.His people had sworn to protect her upon the death of the queen.His eyes saddened a bit.
"Where's the supprise?!"Asked evelynn jumping up and down.
"don't get so excited.It's here as promised."He got up and got out a box from the cabinet.It was a beautiful long thin wooden box with leaves carved around it.Inside was something even more beautiful.Slannen opened it and Evelynn went dead quiet with amazement.In all her life she's never seen something so wonderful.Ever since as long as she could remember she had always wanted one.Most of the fighter elves had one but not as unique as this one.It was a beautiful silver sword, the most rarest know Agulen made sword burnt by the fires of the deep and cooled by the water of Angel's lake.The handle had silver leaves entwined around it and on the blade it had the forgotten language of the elves carved on it.From the moment she held it she fell deaply inlove with it.It was as lighter than any sword she had been aloud to hold but it was sharper then any she had seen.
"Don't judge it by it's wieght.It can slice the bone perfectly and with it's lightness you can move swift and fast."
"It's beautiful...I don't know what to say...."
"Tell Mandy that you start training tomorrow with one of our finest swordsman."
She looked up at him happily smiling but a little confused.
"Well you have to learn to defend yourself.We can't let a little girl go prancing about without knowing how to use a sword now can we?"He smiled down at her.
"I'm not a little girl!I'm seven.That means almost eight!" Slannen laughed.She smiled back at him.
"Thankyou grandpa slannen!"She hugged him tight.
"Oh no! I have to go.I promised mandy I'd be home early.She's making such a fuss about my dress!"She hurried off after saying good bye to Slannen and Glen.
"It's time we train her for what lies ahead" slannen said quietly to Glen."She is soon to know her future...who she really is..."Glen nodded his head slightly. _____________________________________________________
And so during the years of the young princess's life she never even heard of the war called The great battle of Frell.Many have died in Frell.No one knows whether the king or queen are still alive.Not many remembers a time when there were peace.Some don't even knows what peace stands for anymore.For now the evil fairy Vorincia rules over their lands.Orges roam free everwhere, killing and eating everything.No longer peace but starvation and fear roams those lands.Yet, sadly the princess hadn't a clue what the elves were preparing her for.Once again the elves, allies of Frell will help their friends regain the land that is rightfully their's. ___________________________________________________
So what does everyone think?I hope I get lots more reviews.The last time I wrote a story on Harry Potter noone read it so I quit that one hopefully I can continue this one if I get more reviews.Well see ya.I'll update the next chapter soon.