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Chapter-3: Stranger ____________________________________________
Many more years have passed and our little princess now 16 is trained and ready for what though?She still has yet to find out...
"Watch yourself master Rin."Called Eve to a chubby like elf.
"Ahhh..Eve you've out done every swordsman I've come to know and here you are defeating me...why do we have to continue this?"asks Master Rin while blocking another blow.
"Well who else would practice with me.They all runaway from me when ever I mention anything to do with swords.."
"Ahh..well I would've too if only I hadn't all this fat.."He mumbled to himself."You know what- woah!Watch it."He cried ducking her sword."You just seem to love fighting so much that you would force a person to keep on practicing for hours.It gets tiring."
"I do not force them!"Cried Eve back and swung her sword one more time then twisted it around and defeated him.
"Right....Well can I go now?"He recieved a glare from her. "It's getting late me wife be calling me home for dinner."
"Oh fine!Mandy probably wants me back now." They walked off in opposite directions after saying goodbye.
She walked home through the forest it was getting dark.She walked on thinking quietly to herself.'I wonder what Glen is up to?He's been avoiding me lately.." she was brought out of her thoughts by a sudden noise.
"Who's there?"
She asked aloud.
A man came forward on his horse.He was somewhere around her age.He had deep blue eyes and a mass of black hair.He was quite handsome as some might think but Eve has never seen a human man to know for sure.
"I am Galeth from Calthorn I come in no harm."Said the man.His voice was deep and rich.He spoke with a strange air about him.
"What business do you have here?"She asked sternly.
"I am on a quest to seek the Elder of the elves.Do you know where to find him?"
"I might but it depends on what you want with him."
"I have come as the Prince of Calthorn to ask for an alliance in defeating the dark witch whom has taken over the Lands of Frell and Ayothra."
"A war you say?I have heard of no such thing.Tell me what it is about."She asked.He looked at her shocked beyond all meanings.
"You mean to tell me you've been through the forest that is so close to Frell and have never heard of the war?"He asked supprised(and shocked beyond all meanings)
"Well my keeper Mandy has never aloud me to venture far from here."He nodded understandingly. "If you want you can come and stay at our cottage for the night and tomorrow I shall take you to Grandfather Slannen."
"Thankyou for your help fair maiden."She nodded and led him towards the cottage all the while thinking.This guy must be nuts!Fair maiden?I'm all filthy and I look like crap.What a nuthead.....
Mandy aloud him to stay the night after he told her of the war and the news of alliance with the elves.During dinner he explained to Evelynn about the war.
"That was how the war came to be.Noone knows whether the king and queen are still alive.With Orges roaming around there's only death that lies in the lands of Frell.We believe that if we unite with the elves and bast we will beable to defeat their army.Yet we can only hope."
"So your headed to bast next then?"asked Mandy. Galeth nodded his head.
"Are you good with swords?"Evelynn asked suddenly.
"Eve!"Mandy exclaimed.
"Oh shoosh Mandy.Well are you?"she asked looking back at Galeth.
"Well I suppose."He chuckeled"why?"
"Come lets fight."She said and pulled him outside after grabbing her sword.
"What?"He asked even more supprised then before.
She took out her sword and he was supprised a young maiden such as her owned such a rare and beautiful sword made by Agulen no doubt.
And so they fought a brilliant battle.Galeth was supprised at her skill and she was supprised he could take her on for so long.But it ended with Evelynn winning as always.They then went to sleep.
That night Mandy shook Evelynn awake while Galeth was fast asleep and said"Come outside.We must talk."
When they reached outside Evelynn asked"What is it?" While rubbing her tired eyes.
"It's very important well...Haven't you ever wondered who you are?"
"Well that never really entered my head up until now..."She answered suspiciously.
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Chapter-3: Stranger ____________________________________________
Many more years have passed and our little princess now 16 is trained and ready for what though?She still has yet to find out...
"Watch yourself master Rin."Called Eve to a chubby like elf.
"Ahhh..Eve you've out done every swordsman I've come to know and here you are defeating me...why do we have to continue this?"asks Master Rin while blocking another blow.
"Well who else would practice with me.They all runaway from me when ever I mention anything to do with swords.."
"Ahh..well I would've too if only I hadn't all this fat.."He mumbled to himself."You know what- woah!Watch it."He cried ducking her sword."You just seem to love fighting so much that you would force a person to keep on practicing for hours.It gets tiring."
"I do not force them!"Cried Eve back and swung her sword one more time then twisted it around and defeated him.
"Right....Well can I go now?"He recieved a glare from her. "It's getting late me wife be calling me home for dinner."
"Oh fine!Mandy probably wants me back now." They walked off in opposite directions after saying goodbye.
She walked home through the forest it was getting dark.She walked on thinking quietly to herself.'I wonder what Glen is up to?He's been avoiding me lately.." she was brought out of her thoughts by a sudden noise.
"Who's there?"
She asked aloud.
A man came forward on his horse.He was somewhere around her age.He had deep blue eyes and a mass of black hair.He was quite handsome as some might think but Eve has never seen a human man to know for sure.
"I am Galeth from Calthorn I come in no harm."Said the man.His voice was deep and rich.He spoke with a strange air about him.
"What business do you have here?"She asked sternly.
"I am on a quest to seek the Elder of the elves.Do you know where to find him?"
"I might but it depends on what you want with him."
"I have come as the Prince of Calthorn to ask for an alliance in defeating the dark witch whom has taken over the Lands of Frell and Ayothra."
"A war you say?I have heard of no such thing.Tell me what it is about."She asked.He looked at her shocked beyond all meanings.
"You mean to tell me you've been through the forest that is so close to Frell and have never heard of the war?"He asked supprised(and shocked beyond all meanings)
"Well my keeper Mandy has never aloud me to venture far from here."He nodded understandingly. "If you want you can come and stay at our cottage for the night and tomorrow I shall take you to Grandfather Slannen."
"Thankyou for your help fair maiden."She nodded and led him towards the cottage all the while thinking.This guy must be nuts!Fair maiden?I'm all filthy and I look like crap.What a nuthead.....
Mandy aloud him to stay the night after he told her of the war and the news of alliance with the elves.During dinner he explained to Evelynn about the war.
"That was how the war came to be.Noone knows whether the king and queen are still alive.With Orges roaming around there's only death that lies in the lands of Frell.We believe that if we unite with the elves and bast we will beable to defeat their army.Yet we can only hope."
"So your headed to bast next then?"asked Mandy. Galeth nodded his head.
"Are you good with swords?"Evelynn asked suddenly.
"Eve!"Mandy exclaimed.
"Oh shoosh Mandy.Well are you?"she asked looking back at Galeth.
"Well I suppose."He chuckeled"why?"
"Come lets fight."She said and pulled him outside after grabbing her sword.
"What?"He asked even more supprised then before.
She took out her sword and he was supprised a young maiden such as her owned such a rare and beautiful sword made by Agulen no doubt.
And so they fought a brilliant battle.Galeth was supprised at her skill and she was supprised he could take her on for so long.But it ended with Evelynn winning as always.They then went to sleep.
That night Mandy shook Evelynn awake while Galeth was fast asleep and said"Come outside.We must talk."
When they reached outside Evelynn asked"What is it?" While rubbing her tired eyes.
"It's very important well...Haven't you ever wondered who you are?"
"Well that never really entered my head up until now..."She answered suspiciously.
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