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Chapter-7:Cries of the wind
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"Evelynn...."a voice echoed in night.It was a melodious voice of a women calling to her.She knew the voice.
"Mommy?"she cried but her voice came out as a child's small cry.She was in a form of a child now.All alone in the darkness.She knew she had to find her mommy.Her mommy was waiting.
"Evelynn....."The voice cooed."Come to mommy Evelynn."
"Mommy?!Mommy where are you?"She looked and looked in the darkness.She couldn't find mommy. Mommy was lost from her.She started to sob in frustration as a million voices called to her in every direction.They were all mommy's voices but which one?Where?She ran this way then that,but she couldn't find mommy.Suddenly two pairs of hands came out of no where and grabbed her shaking her while calling out"Evelynn!Evelynn!"Her eyes snapped open.It was Galeth who was shaking her.
"They have you under a spell wake up!"He then started dragging her along through the dark.Glen was in front of them leading the way.It was still raining and as dark as ever.There was a shrill screech through the sound of pounding rain.She looked through the darkness.That was when she noticed them. Wraiths!" she gasped out.White mists of ghost souls lingered around them stretching out their hands as if to pull them back.The wraiths started calling to Evelynn.At first chanting musically as if they were her friend.Friends that would give her anything she wanted.She stopped a while lingering.
"What are you doing?"Galeth asked histerically.
"I must go to them."She said her eyes blank.
"Snap out of it!"he yelled at her"Evelynn please!"
He shook her hard.But she wouldn't budge.
"Please Evelynn!"Tears came in his eyes and mixed with the rain.He felt frightened.They were closer now.Really closer.They were calling to Evelynn because they thought she was the maiden.He knew it. he couldn't lose her."Please Evelynn come on!Dammit!Snap out of it I love you!Damn this!!!"
She blinked and shook her head."What did you say?"
"Come on lets go.!"He yelled out.
The wraiths got angrier.The musical tone was gone.They were screeching now.Yelling out her name with hatred.They were everywhere.Surounding Evelnynn,Galeth,and Glen.Then an odd thing happened.The spirits started chanting"Nari.Nari!" Then one of the wraiths stood in front of Evelynn.It grabbed her before she could runaway.It held onto her necklace."Nari....."It whispered at her face,Galeth and Glen where being dragged away by the rest of the wraiths.She looked right into the spirit's face.It was a lady with a face of pure hatred.She would've been beautiful if her face had not held such evil."Nari...I've got you!"It hissed.Then it yelled in pain and released her.The necklace had gotten brighter.It shoned a white beautiful light.First it was barely visible but then it got brighter and brighter.A powerful forced of light shone through out the Clave.The wraiths screeched loudly. But in Evelynn's head there was only room for silence. Pictures flashed through her eyes even though they were closed.
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Flash back:
A girl sat in the middle of a beautiful field.She was a beautiful maiden with straight brown hair and deep green eyes."Valen!I hadn't Expected you back so early!"She eclaimed when she saw a young man jump out from behind."I wanted to see you"He said smiling. His blue eyes shone with love.He handed her flowers and they shared a kiss.Then the memory started to fade and another scene formed.
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It was the same maiden dancing with the same young man in a grand ball room.
"Nari?"The man spoke"When we marry lets have 10 kids.I can teach the boys how to sword fight and how to rule the kingdom and you can teach the girls how to sew."
"I never said I was going to marry you!"cried the young maiden and she spun away laughing.
"Nari!"The young man cried back at her panicking."stop fooling around!"
once again it faded to a different picutre.
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It was in a wedding chapel.The same two couples before held hand in hand."The young man leaned forward and whispered into his soon to be wife's ears"I love you."They kissed and she fell limp into his arms .Then there was a shrill crackle throughout the land.Cries were heard.The young man stood holding his wife in his arms weeping.Then he called out"Find the witch!Get the jewel!"
The scene fades into another
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"She's lovely my dear Ella.What shall we call her?"A man said looking down at a pink bundle.
"Lets call her Evelynn"said the sweating women who was laying on the bed with the bundle in her arms.
"My dear Evelynn."the man smiled
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Flash back ends-
Then everything stopped and went black. The last thing Evelynn heard was a voice telling her to hold on.
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Chapter-7:Cries of the wind
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"Evelynn...."a voice echoed in night.It was a melodious voice of a women calling to her.She knew the voice.
"Mommy?"she cried but her voice came out as a child's small cry.She was in a form of a child now.All alone in the darkness.She knew she had to find her mommy.Her mommy was waiting.
"Evelynn....."The voice cooed."Come to mommy Evelynn."
"Mommy?!Mommy where are you?"She looked and looked in the darkness.She couldn't find mommy. Mommy was lost from her.She started to sob in frustration as a million voices called to her in every direction.They were all mommy's voices but which one?Where?She ran this way then that,but she couldn't find mommy.Suddenly two pairs of hands came out of no where and grabbed her shaking her while calling out"Evelynn!Evelynn!"Her eyes snapped open.It was Galeth who was shaking her.
"They have you under a spell wake up!"He then started dragging her along through the dark.Glen was in front of them leading the way.It was still raining and as dark as ever.There was a shrill screech through the sound of pounding rain.She looked through the darkness.That was when she noticed them. Wraiths!" she gasped out.White mists of ghost souls lingered around them stretching out their hands as if to pull them back.The wraiths started calling to Evelynn.At first chanting musically as if they were her friend.Friends that would give her anything she wanted.She stopped a while lingering.
"What are you doing?"Galeth asked histerically.
"I must go to them."She said her eyes blank.
"Snap out of it!"he yelled at her"Evelynn please!"
He shook her hard.But she wouldn't budge.
"Please Evelynn!"Tears came in his eyes and mixed with the rain.He felt frightened.They were closer now.Really closer.They were calling to Evelynn because they thought she was the maiden.He knew it. he couldn't lose her."Please Evelynn come on!Dammit!Snap out of it I love you!Damn this!!!"
She blinked and shook her head."What did you say?"
"Come on lets go.!"He yelled out.
The wraiths got angrier.The musical tone was gone.They were screeching now.Yelling out her name with hatred.They were everywhere.Surounding Evelnynn,Galeth,and Glen.Then an odd thing happened.The spirits started chanting"Nari.Nari!" Then one of the wraiths stood in front of Evelynn.It grabbed her before she could runaway.It held onto her necklace."Nari....."It whispered at her face,Galeth and Glen where being dragged away by the rest of the wraiths.She looked right into the spirit's face.It was a lady with a face of pure hatred.She would've been beautiful if her face had not held such evil."Nari...I've got you!"It hissed.Then it yelled in pain and released her.The necklace had gotten brighter.It shoned a white beautiful light.First it was barely visible but then it got brighter and brighter.A powerful forced of light shone through out the Clave.The wraiths screeched loudly. But in Evelynn's head there was only room for silence. Pictures flashed through her eyes even though they were closed.
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Flash back:
A girl sat in the middle of a beautiful field.She was a beautiful maiden with straight brown hair and deep green eyes."Valen!I hadn't Expected you back so early!"She eclaimed when she saw a young man jump out from behind."I wanted to see you"He said smiling. His blue eyes shone with love.He handed her flowers and they shared a kiss.Then the memory started to fade and another scene formed.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
It was the same maiden dancing with the same young man in a grand ball room.
"Nari?"The man spoke"When we marry lets have 10 kids.I can teach the boys how to sword fight and how to rule the kingdom and you can teach the girls how to sew."
"I never said I was going to marry you!"cried the young maiden and she spun away laughing.
"Nari!"The young man cried back at her panicking."stop fooling around!"
once again it faded to a different picutre.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
It was in a wedding chapel.The same two couples before held hand in hand."The young man leaned forward and whispered into his soon to be wife's ears"I love you."They kissed and she fell limp into his arms .Then there was a shrill crackle throughout the land.Cries were heard.The young man stood holding his wife in his arms weeping.Then he called out"Find the witch!Get the jewel!"
The scene fades into another
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
"She's lovely my dear Ella.What shall we call her?"A man said looking down at a pink bundle.
"Lets call her Evelynn"said the sweating women who was laying on the bed with the bundle in her arms.
"My dear Evelynn."the man smiled
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Flash back ends-
Then everything stopped and went black. The last thing Evelynn heard was a voice telling her to hold on.
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