Sorry I haven't been writing!Oh thanks for all the reviews!!!But sadly it's
only seven....anyways...I'll encourage all the names of the reviewers and
what they said....:
mysterious-angel (jenny_fur_05@hotmail.com) 2003-01-09 7 Anonymous javascript:alert('review id: 10540685') This is really good! Up date soon please. And e-mail me when you do! K?
Gwen 2003-01-06 Anonymous javascript:alert('review id: 10497621') Hey! i still love this story! i especially like how it is udated everyday! another suggestion: watch your spelling a little bit. you spelled the word allowed as aloud.
anyway, keep writing and i will keep reading and reviewing!
Clover (clover389@aol.com) 2003-01-06 6 Anonymous javascript:alert('review id: 10489428') I really like your story please continue with it. lot's of people may be reading your story but like me they just don't review well at least I used to not review as you see I do now.
literaryfreak 2003-01-05 5 Anonymous javascript:alert('review id: 10474798') A new fanfic! Yea! It's excellent, so write more! Soon!
meg87 /profile.php?userid=178257 2003-01-03 2 Signed GREAT STORY!! I like the way you started it! Keep writing!-me
literaryfreak 2003-01-03 1 Anonymous javascript:alert('review id: 10411406') It's very good! Don't stop writing it!
Gwen 2003-01-01 1 Anonymous javascript:alert('review id: 10388085') This is great! but Ella and Char don't die...right????you also might want to make each dialouge a separate paragraph so that the story is easier to follow!
Well thanks!I need more reviews....!Enjoy the story!
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Chapter-8:Memories before the end _________________________________________________
"Evelynn.....Evelynn wake up"A voice seemed to be calling her from a distance through the darkness.Her heavy eyelids began to open slowly.A blurry vision of a man.She couldn't make out just yet.She blinked a couple of times.It was Galeth.He stood above her. "She's awake!"He exclaimed over the other side of the room.
For the first time Evelynn noticed where she was.It looked like a small cottage.There was a small fire blazing in a fireplace to her right.She was in a bed.A big comfy warm bed.She tried to move but she felt weak.Too weak to move at all.Galeth had turned to face her.He smiled and brushed a strand of hair from her face.Glen came over and so did a man she had never saw.He was old with snowy white hair and blue eyes that held a sort of untold wisdom.She tried to speak and it came out raspy as if she hadn't used her voice for days."Where am I?"she asked "Your at the healer's cottage.This is Malenk. He's helped given you medicine to gain strength.You've been sleeping for a long time."said Galeth then he glanced back at Glen and nodded.Glen began to talk. "Were going to go to bast.You'll have to stay here.-Please,it's for your own good."He said as she started to argue."you must stay here and regain your strength."He looked at her for a while both light shining green eyes met with solemn elven eyes as if they shared a secret.Both understanding the fact that she was a princess and had to stay.
So a day went by.Glen and Galeth had left early in the morning.She was entrusted to the kind healer who had given her a drink that now enabled her to move around a little more and feel stronger.But not strong enough to get out of bed.She sat up in her bed watching out the window.The memories before played back in her head.How strange she thought as she went over the fact that the maiden had looked just like her except with darker hair and a more graceful and poised figure instead of a strong slim figure due to the fact of many years in training.The women's laugh was like her own and so was her eyes.Her face looked exact and she also wore the same lily necklace.Only the pendent wasn't there.The women couldn't be her.Could she?The young man...who was he?And those two people at the end.Were they her mother and Father?Yes...the man had called the lady Ella...Queen Eleanor was her mother...could it be?Thoughts rushed through her head until she finally fell asleep without knowing that her dream would be another confused vision.
__________________________________________________ Sorry...I know I know it's really short but I'm so tired.You see I'm sick and all and I need sleep.I had to get my ass up and update cuz I know people would be mad.Well maybe not mad because noone cares about my story but I'll just imagine you do and I'll flatter myself for a while.Please review and give me some Ideas!
mysterious-angel (jenny_fur_05@hotmail.com) 2003-01-09 7 Anonymous javascript:alert('review id: 10540685') This is really good! Up date soon please. And e-mail me when you do! K?
Gwen 2003-01-06 Anonymous javascript:alert('review id: 10497621') Hey! i still love this story! i especially like how it is udated everyday! another suggestion: watch your spelling a little bit. you spelled the word allowed as aloud.
anyway, keep writing and i will keep reading and reviewing!
Clover (clover389@aol.com) 2003-01-06 6 Anonymous javascript:alert('review id: 10489428') I really like your story please continue with it. lot's of people may be reading your story but like me they just don't review well at least I used to not review as you see I do now.
literaryfreak 2003-01-05 5 Anonymous javascript:alert('review id: 10474798') A new fanfic! Yea! It's excellent, so write more! Soon!
meg87 /profile.php?userid=178257 2003-01-03 2 Signed GREAT STORY!! I like the way you started it! Keep writing!-me
literaryfreak 2003-01-03 1 Anonymous javascript:alert('review id: 10411406') It's very good! Don't stop writing it!
Gwen 2003-01-01 1 Anonymous javascript:alert('review id: 10388085') This is great! but Ella and Char don't die...right????you also might want to make each dialouge a separate paragraph so that the story is easier to follow!
Well thanks!I need more reviews....!Enjoy the story!
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Chapter-8:Memories before the end _________________________________________________
"Evelynn.....Evelynn wake up"A voice seemed to be calling her from a distance through the darkness.Her heavy eyelids began to open slowly.A blurry vision of a man.She couldn't make out just yet.She blinked a couple of times.It was Galeth.He stood above her. "She's awake!"He exclaimed over the other side of the room.
For the first time Evelynn noticed where she was.It looked like a small cottage.There was a small fire blazing in a fireplace to her right.She was in a bed.A big comfy warm bed.She tried to move but she felt weak.Too weak to move at all.Galeth had turned to face her.He smiled and brushed a strand of hair from her face.Glen came over and so did a man she had never saw.He was old with snowy white hair and blue eyes that held a sort of untold wisdom.She tried to speak and it came out raspy as if she hadn't used her voice for days."Where am I?"she asked "Your at the healer's cottage.This is Malenk. He's helped given you medicine to gain strength.You've been sleeping for a long time."said Galeth then he glanced back at Glen and nodded.Glen began to talk. "Were going to go to bast.You'll have to stay here.-Please,it's for your own good."He said as she started to argue."you must stay here and regain your strength."He looked at her for a while both light shining green eyes met with solemn elven eyes as if they shared a secret.Both understanding the fact that she was a princess and had to stay.
So a day went by.Glen and Galeth had left early in the morning.She was entrusted to the kind healer who had given her a drink that now enabled her to move around a little more and feel stronger.But not strong enough to get out of bed.She sat up in her bed watching out the window.The memories before played back in her head.How strange she thought as she went over the fact that the maiden had looked just like her except with darker hair and a more graceful and poised figure instead of a strong slim figure due to the fact of many years in training.The women's laugh was like her own and so was her eyes.Her face looked exact and she also wore the same lily necklace.Only the pendent wasn't there.The women couldn't be her.Could she?The young man...who was he?And those two people at the end.Were they her mother and Father?Yes...the man had called the lady Ella...Queen Eleanor was her mother...could it be?Thoughts rushed through her head until she finally fell asleep without knowing that her dream would be another confused vision.
__________________________________________________ Sorry...I know I know it's really short but I'm so tired.You see I'm sick and all and I need sleep.I had to get my ass up and update cuz I know people would be mad.Well maybe not mad because noone cares about my story but I'll just imagine you do and I'll flatter myself for a while.Please review and give me some Ideas!