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Chapter 9- forgotten
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Evelynn awoke with a peircing pain in head.She had such a wierd dream...A memory perhaps...
She could remember it so clearly.She had been chasing butterflies into the forest.Then it began to get darker.A light appeared and she followed it curious to know what it was.The forest was getting colder now and she was lost in the darkness.The light led her deeper into the forest.Her surroundings began to look familiar.She had been there before.Then she saw it.The lake of sins.But this time there was a girl standing there.It was the girl that looked like her.The girl called Nari...She was wearing a white dress and seemed to glow in the darkness.The girl bent over and placed something into the water.Evelynn walked closer and saw that it was the pendent.The pendent floated into the lake disapearing beneath it's waters. "Who are you?"Evelynn cried out.But the girl didn't seem to hear or know she was there.The young girl said something in a funny language."Equil eras lerna ojjooh kalssah reyss" 'That was odd...It sounded just like what the water gaurdian had said.'thought Evelynn Then there was a bright flash of light and Evelynn's head felt like it was going to explode and that was when she awoke.
The pain in her head began to slowly soothe as she rubbed her forhead.It was light out now.She could hear loud snoring in the other room.'It must be the Malenk still asleep'she thought.She got up and silently walked to collect the things she would need for the journey.She wasn't gonna be forced to stay in one place for long.Evelynn was not the type of girl to be locked up.She grabbed a brown bag and stuffed in some blankets and some food for the journey.She then wrapped her sword around her waist and silently crept out to the horse stables around back.After retrieving her horse, she started on a long journey towards Bast.
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Glen and Galeth rode through the thick dark forest.Glen had gotten sort of worried at the fact that Evelynn had to stay behind with the healer but Galeth had said that Malenk (the healer) was a good friend of his of whom he would trust with his life.After a while of riding they heard a rustle in a nearby bush.Glen and Galeth both reached for their swords.Just then a small figure jumped out.It was a yellowish, tiny, skinny creature that wore a red mushroom on it's head and had on the strangest leaf outfit."Likre!"exclaimed Galeth. "What are you doing here?"Glen looked at the creature in an awed expression."A light gaurdian!I've heard of you from Grandpa Slannen!"He exclaimed.
Galeth then turned to Glen and said."This is Likre. She's a friend of the Royal Family.Likre this is Glen.As you can see he's quite a bit of a nutter.Please don't mind him."Likre giggle at the last comment.Her voice sounded like little bells.
Then she bowed her head and looked back up at Galeth.Then with the most squeaky, smallest voice anyone can imagine she said"Your highness great danger is to come you must turn back.A certain friend of yours is in quite bit of a trouble."Galeth looked at her, then without question he turned his horse around.Glen stood there watching like an Idiot."Oh and your highness."cried Likre "Your mother also sent me to tell you that it's almost time for the gathering and that you must hurry to return."Galeth nodded then left in a flash through the forest with Glen following behind. _____________________________________________________
Kinda stupid so far I know...But tell me what you think~please!!!!!!
Chapter 9- forgotten
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Evelynn awoke with a peircing pain in head.She had such a wierd dream...A memory perhaps...
She could remember it so clearly.She had been chasing butterflies into the forest.Then it began to get darker.A light appeared and she followed it curious to know what it was.The forest was getting colder now and she was lost in the darkness.The light led her deeper into the forest.Her surroundings began to look familiar.She had been there before.Then she saw it.The lake of sins.But this time there was a girl standing there.It was the girl that looked like her.The girl called Nari...She was wearing a white dress and seemed to glow in the darkness.The girl bent over and placed something into the water.Evelynn walked closer and saw that it was the pendent.The pendent floated into the lake disapearing beneath it's waters. "Who are you?"Evelynn cried out.But the girl didn't seem to hear or know she was there.The young girl said something in a funny language."Equil eras lerna ojjooh kalssah reyss" 'That was odd...It sounded just like what the water gaurdian had said.'thought Evelynn Then there was a bright flash of light and Evelynn's head felt like it was going to explode and that was when she awoke.
The pain in her head began to slowly soothe as she rubbed her forhead.It was light out now.She could hear loud snoring in the other room.'It must be the Malenk still asleep'she thought.She got up and silently walked to collect the things she would need for the journey.She wasn't gonna be forced to stay in one place for long.Evelynn was not the type of girl to be locked up.She grabbed a brown bag and stuffed in some blankets and some food for the journey.She then wrapped her sword around her waist and silently crept out to the horse stables around back.After retrieving her horse, she started on a long journey towards Bast.
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Glen and Galeth rode through the thick dark forest.Glen had gotten sort of worried at the fact that Evelynn had to stay behind with the healer but Galeth had said that Malenk (the healer) was a good friend of his of whom he would trust with his life.After a while of riding they heard a rustle in a nearby bush.Glen and Galeth both reached for their swords.Just then a small figure jumped out.It was a yellowish, tiny, skinny creature that wore a red mushroom on it's head and had on the strangest leaf outfit."Likre!"exclaimed Galeth. "What are you doing here?"Glen looked at the creature in an awed expression."A light gaurdian!I've heard of you from Grandpa Slannen!"He exclaimed.
Galeth then turned to Glen and said."This is Likre. She's a friend of the Royal Family.Likre this is Glen.As you can see he's quite a bit of a nutter.Please don't mind him."Likre giggle at the last comment.Her voice sounded like little bells.
Then she bowed her head and looked back up at Galeth.Then with the most squeaky, smallest voice anyone can imagine she said"Your highness great danger is to come you must turn back.A certain friend of yours is in quite bit of a trouble."Galeth looked at her, then without question he turned his horse around.Glen stood there watching like an Idiot."Oh and your highness."cried Likre "Your mother also sent me to tell you that it's almost time for the gathering and that you must hurry to return."Galeth nodded then left in a flash through the forest with Glen following behind. _____________________________________________________
Kinda stupid so far I know...But tell me what you think~please!!!!!!