Original chapter eight author's notes:
Ohayo.
It's been three weeks. I'm sorry. *begs for forgiveness* I DIDN'T MEAN IT! PLEASE DON'T HURT ME!!!
j/k. Every idea was scrapped as crap until last wednesday, when I suddenly started writing and couldn't stop. It was done Friday night, but the library had closed early... *grumbles* But that was another three-day chapter! I've still got the magic! *dances a jig*
This chapter went wrong. What it was was the hint of a flaw in Gohan and Videl's love no matter how far they've come. I didn't like that! When they say 'it feels artificial' that was how I was feeling at the moment after rereading it. A problem didn't get solved. That could be a plot point later! Yay! The strength of their love will be tempered in the fire of my mind- later. But mentioning wrongness: My series itself just feels... off. I think that that feeling comes from how on TV they use BGMs to affect your emotions during scenes. Something always feels like it's missing and a writer has to fill in that space, be the manipulator of your emotions. How am I doing? Ya know, that would make a great fantasy fic- Every story you write is actually an enchantment spell. Let's tie all fiction together under dungeons and dragons! Yay!
I didn't write in a lemon portion because it doesn't fit. I'd say it might be safe to assume they 'did it' but that might become a crucial plot point later, so I won't make any guesses as to their private business *cough*. It would have been really sweet, too!
I hope to have the ninth chapter out very very soon. Give me a minute to catch my breath and I'll dive right back in. This should go fast. The Tenkichi Budoukai! I think I may have spelled that wrong...
I need to stress the point that Buu is not the end-all evil in my story. Babidi is a two-bit(a dumbass sunuvabitch) who happens to be able to unlock a mega-uberweapon(Buu). There are better than him. But since the method by which Buu will be defeated isn't a readily available solution, the plot shall continue! ACC evil villians! Yay! An intergalactic hierarchy! Buu should keep you guys reading until chapter twelve or thirteen, though.
Oh yeah... Does anyone else besides me save ffnet stuff to document files? I was wondering if anyone had copied my author's notes(the ones not included in the chapters) seperatly, 'cause I wanted to put them together to answer the questions of people first reading this fic... And I think the only two questions on the actual review page were those I answered after chapter five... Durn, I have to get a printout of the reviews to go along with my hardcopy of the story...
My website will be nicer once I get eye-candy. http://www.geocities.com/sageseeker777
My Evangelion fic got out of it's six-month prereading session. (That's what I get for writing a thirty page poem) I reccomend that anyone who looked at the prologue and first chapter on my site(the only parts posted) read the whole thing through. That first half wasn't the better half.
I WUV YOU ALL!
Vash-san: ^_^ \/ Love and Peace! \/ ^-^
~Sage7
"Man shall always seek his heaven, but what of when he finds it?"
Ohayo.
It's been three weeks. I'm sorry. *begs for forgiveness* I DIDN'T MEAN IT! PLEASE DON'T HURT ME!!!
j/k. Every idea was scrapped as crap until last wednesday, when I suddenly started writing and couldn't stop. It was done Friday night, but the library had closed early... *grumbles* But that was another three-day chapter! I've still got the magic! *dances a jig*
This chapter went wrong. What it was was the hint of a flaw in Gohan and Videl's love no matter how far they've come. I didn't like that! When they say 'it feels artificial' that was how I was feeling at the moment after rereading it. A problem didn't get solved. That could be a plot point later! Yay! The strength of their love will be tempered in the fire of my mind- later. But mentioning wrongness: My series itself just feels... off. I think that that feeling comes from how on TV they use BGMs to affect your emotions during scenes. Something always feels like it's missing and a writer has to fill in that space, be the manipulator of your emotions. How am I doing? Ya know, that would make a great fantasy fic- Every story you write is actually an enchantment spell. Let's tie all fiction together under dungeons and dragons! Yay!
I didn't write in a lemon portion because it doesn't fit. I'd say it might be safe to assume they 'did it' but that might become a crucial plot point later, so I won't make any guesses as to their private business *cough*. It would have been really sweet, too!
I hope to have the ninth chapter out very very soon. Give me a minute to catch my breath and I'll dive right back in. This should go fast. The Tenkichi Budoukai! I think I may have spelled that wrong...
I need to stress the point that Buu is not the end-all evil in my story. Babidi is a two-bit(a dumbass sunuvabitch) who happens to be able to unlock a mega-uberweapon(Buu). There are better than him. But since the method by which Buu will be defeated isn't a readily available solution, the plot shall continue! ACC evil villians! Yay! An intergalactic hierarchy! Buu should keep you guys reading until chapter twelve or thirteen, though.
Oh yeah... Does anyone else besides me save ffnet stuff to document files? I was wondering if anyone had copied my author's notes(the ones not included in the chapters) seperatly, 'cause I wanted to put them together to answer the questions of people first reading this fic... And I think the only two questions on the actual review page were those I answered after chapter five... Durn, I have to get a printout of the reviews to go along with my hardcopy of the story...
My website will be nicer once I get eye-candy. http://www.geocities.com/sageseeker777
My Evangelion fic got out of it's six-month prereading session. (That's what I get for writing a thirty page poem) I reccomend that anyone who looked at the prologue and first chapter on my site(the only parts posted) read the whole thing through. That first half wasn't the better half.
I WUV YOU ALL!
Vash-san: ^_^ \/ Love and Peace! \/ ^-^
~Sage7
"Man shall always seek his heaven, but what of when he finds it?"