Ummmmmmmmmm....
Reviews are so _k3w1_!!
Gie:
The only way to write this chapter was to start in the ROSAT because I was having major trouble *getting there* which was what I wanted to do. I interspersed little vignette-ish memory scenes leading through the six months before they entered. All of the ROSAT scenes were in order, and all of the memories were in order, just shuffled a bit.
Ya know my science teacher from last year(who was my science teacher for five years at that school I went to for nine years) always said she was confuzzed... It's a wonderful state to be in, ne? *remembers End of Evangelion*
AnimeAngelVidel:
And I love you! *spins around in circles*
Van lover:
I'm gonna get more detailed, but the words were more important when the world gets that repetitive..
I wish I could find _more_ 'real' Gohan/Videl stories:( Good luck!
I was going to email you to ask you if you would write your thoughts as you read the chapter(like my best friend sometimes does for me) so that I can improve or add. He was the one who reminded me about how Videl was going to get that huge energy boost thingy. Good thing he did...
I wouldn't mind help on a lemon thingy, like I write a part and then you do, back and forth, correcting each other's and stuff, but I don't want to do that until later. I might do it after I get far in the fic, post it seperately, and call it a side-story. Or a sub-story. Depends on how vital to the plot...
Tamashii no Unmei means "My soul's destiny". I got it from the songs Zankoku no Tenshi Teeze, and Tamashii no Refuran(I didn't know enough japanese a month ago to compose a good title from scratch) Maybe I should post the meaning of the title in the summary. But that stops the lure of the simple gaijin percentage of my audience.
Serena:
Your reviews do the same for me that you say my story does for you;)
Saiyan Serpent:
I had hoped to emphasize how deeply connected they were, that they didn't even need words, articulating thoughts loosely based on the feelings of the other... but that didn't work. They got really close, and I wuv it too!
jean:
As soon as I pointed out what you did, I forgot what you did.
Summanaro:
I don't use "..."'s with thoughts. Except in the prologue, where Chi-chi and Piccolo talk, that's supposed to be Gohan's hazy mind thinking they were his own thoughts or something like that.
Kuko-chan:
It's not my fault, I swear!
Panchi-chan:
Mmm... cookies...
Wiegraf:
*huggles Wiegraf* (Nothing else I can say. Thank you.)
Lastly- Yes, I _am_ a fifteen year old *male*. Girls are so kewl, though! And much more kawaii than guys... *grins*
From before:
To Betsy:
Garsh durn it! Why the HFiL does everyone think I'm a girl? Is it because of my sensitive nature and great creative ability? No! It's because I chose a damn gender-neutral pseudonym! *feels like Ranma*
To Erica:
You offered, so expect a mail eventually...
To Summanaro:
Laziness? I was doing 3-day and 2-day waits between chapter before the fifth, and even then I compensated with chapter length(didn't really mean too, heheh, but I did compensate!) until the seventh chapter, which was in the middle of a depressing time and didn't come out so well, and now the eighth, which took three weeks because of time, real life, depression, non-inspiration, school, and some other things.
To Dragonking:
You should get off of ffnet. Or at least into some higher circles. I've read thousands and thousands of fics myself(I have a personal archive of something like 65000 pages) and I have to say that the best came from the series that hooked me into ff's- Evangelion. All hail Strike Fiss and Higher Learning! 45 chapters already! http://24.81.215.24/eva.html http://www.studioshinnyo.com/
Good evafic archive! http://www.geocities.com/seele_hq/Archive/index.htm
Good review sites!
http://www.eva.onegeek.org/efrs/
http://www.geocities.com/seele_hq/main.html
Email me. Let's talk fiction!
Reviews are so _k3w1_!!
Gie:
The only way to write this chapter was to start in the ROSAT because I was having major trouble *getting there* which was what I wanted to do. I interspersed little vignette-ish memory scenes leading through the six months before they entered. All of the ROSAT scenes were in order, and all of the memories were in order, just shuffled a bit.
Ya know my science teacher from last year(who was my science teacher for five years at that school I went to for nine years) always said she was confuzzed... It's a wonderful state to be in, ne? *remembers End of Evangelion*
AnimeAngelVidel:
And I love you! *spins around in circles*
Van lover:
I'm gonna get more detailed, but the words were more important when the world gets that repetitive..
I wish I could find _more_ 'real' Gohan/Videl stories:( Good luck!
I was going to email you to ask you if you would write your thoughts as you read the chapter(like my best friend sometimes does for me) so that I can improve or add. He was the one who reminded me about how Videl was going to get that huge energy boost thingy. Good thing he did...
I wouldn't mind help on a lemon thingy, like I write a part and then you do, back and forth, correcting each other's and stuff, but I don't want to do that until later. I might do it after I get far in the fic, post it seperately, and call it a side-story. Or a sub-story. Depends on how vital to the plot...
Tamashii no Unmei means "My soul's destiny". I got it from the songs Zankoku no Tenshi Teeze, and Tamashii no Refuran(I didn't know enough japanese a month ago to compose a good title from scratch) Maybe I should post the meaning of the title in the summary. But that stops the lure of the simple gaijin percentage of my audience.
Serena:
Your reviews do the same for me that you say my story does for you;)
Saiyan Serpent:
I had hoped to emphasize how deeply connected they were, that they didn't even need words, articulating thoughts loosely based on the feelings of the other... but that didn't work. They got really close, and I wuv it too!
jean:
As soon as I pointed out what you did, I forgot what you did.
Summanaro:
I don't use "..."'s with thoughts. Except in the prologue, where Chi-chi and Piccolo talk, that's supposed to be Gohan's hazy mind thinking they were his own thoughts or something like that.
Kuko-chan:
It's not my fault, I swear!
Panchi-chan:
Mmm... cookies...
Wiegraf:
*huggles Wiegraf* (Nothing else I can say. Thank you.)
Lastly- Yes, I _am_ a fifteen year old *male*. Girls are so kewl, though! And much more kawaii than guys... *grins*
From before:
To Betsy:
Garsh durn it! Why the HFiL does everyone think I'm a girl? Is it because of my sensitive nature and great creative ability? No! It's because I chose a damn gender-neutral pseudonym! *feels like Ranma*
To Erica:
You offered, so expect a mail eventually...
To Summanaro:
Laziness? I was doing 3-day and 2-day waits between chapter before the fifth, and even then I compensated with chapter length(didn't really mean too, heheh, but I did compensate!) until the seventh chapter, which was in the middle of a depressing time and didn't come out so well, and now the eighth, which took three weeks because of time, real life, depression, non-inspiration, school, and some other things.
To Dragonking:
You should get off of ffnet. Or at least into some higher circles. I've read thousands and thousands of fics myself(I have a personal archive of something like 65000 pages) and I have to say that the best came from the series that hooked me into ff's- Evangelion. All hail Strike Fiss and Higher Learning! 45 chapters already! http://24.81.215.24/eva.html http://www.studioshinnyo.com/
Good evafic archive! http://www.geocities.com/seele_hq/Archive/index.htm
Good review sites!
http://www.eva.onegeek.org/efrs/
http://www.geocities.com/seele_hq/main.html
Email me. Let's talk fiction!