Sorry, this is probably going to be a short chapter. But it's better than
nothing right?
Knockaround Girl
Wait-I likes the story a lot, but did u even read any of the books? By reading this, I don't think u did. And by looking at the date, u should have read all the books by now. I'm a big draco/Hermione fan and I read ch 3, but I think u should read at least one of the books before u go on. It'll be so much easier for u 2 write this story.
You really have no idea what I'm talking about, you don't know who I am, where I've been or what I do, for all you know I could be apart of a little Harry Potter Message board or I could be JK Rowling her self. You're assumption was completely wrong, and I've read all 4 books numerous times and if you don't think I relates enough t the stories, then it's really quite simple - don't read it.
Artemis Oh dear.
*Lol* Okay then. Is that good or bad?
Punky Poet 'His manly hood pressing against her body' lmao! This Harry/Hermione/Draco thing is so overdone, but its fun to see how each author writes it differently. Please don't make this story too cliché, like, don't let Hermione and Draco instantly become a couple, but let Harry and Hermione go out for a while or something unexpected. I am eagerly awaiting a new chapter.
I'll take your advice then, I was going to make it to cliché. Then it'll just sound like all the others. ;) Although some are really good.
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The next morning at breakfast Hermione didn't say a word, Harry noticed she wasn't her usual self, blabbering on about useless facts, but he left her, wondering at it could be.
"Hey Harry," Ron said all of a sudden, "Can I have a talk with you after breakfast?"
Harry replied yes and kept eating his breakfast.
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Out side the dinning hall, after breakfast Ron pulled Harry into a dark corner, "I have something to tell you." 'Oh no.' Harry thought 'He's probably going to tell me he's gay.'
"Yes?" Harry said to Ron gesturing for him to go on. "Well, since the begging of the year, I've been feeling stronger feelings for Hermione that usual. And I've realised I can't hide from my feelings for her any more, Harry, I think I'm falling in lover with Hermione."
An uncomfortable silence filled the little corner they were standing in then-
"Harry, Ron, there you are. I wondered where you went, let's go to class, we have double potions next."
Harry followed Ron and Hermione think about what Ron ad just said to him, what if Ron really did have strong feelings for Hermione? Would he get in the way of his and Hermione's secret relationship? This was not good. Soon Ron would be admitting his love for her, and what if she's blown away by his courage to tell he such a thing?
Please R sorry that was such a short chap. I have to go to school now, bye!
Knockaround Girl
Wait-I likes the story a lot, but did u even read any of the books? By reading this, I don't think u did. And by looking at the date, u should have read all the books by now. I'm a big draco/Hermione fan and I read ch 3, but I think u should read at least one of the books before u go on. It'll be so much easier for u 2 write this story.
You really have no idea what I'm talking about, you don't know who I am, where I've been or what I do, for all you know I could be apart of a little Harry Potter Message board or I could be JK Rowling her self. You're assumption was completely wrong, and I've read all 4 books numerous times and if you don't think I relates enough t the stories, then it's really quite simple - don't read it.
Artemis Oh dear.
*Lol* Okay then. Is that good or bad?
Punky Poet 'His manly hood pressing against her body' lmao! This Harry/Hermione/Draco thing is so overdone, but its fun to see how each author writes it differently. Please don't make this story too cliché, like, don't let Hermione and Draco instantly become a couple, but let Harry and Hermione go out for a while or something unexpected. I am eagerly awaiting a new chapter.
I'll take your advice then, I was going to make it to cliché. Then it'll just sound like all the others. ;) Although some are really good.
~
The next morning at breakfast Hermione didn't say a word, Harry noticed she wasn't her usual self, blabbering on about useless facts, but he left her, wondering at it could be.
"Hey Harry," Ron said all of a sudden, "Can I have a talk with you after breakfast?"
Harry replied yes and kept eating his breakfast.
~
Out side the dinning hall, after breakfast Ron pulled Harry into a dark corner, "I have something to tell you." 'Oh no.' Harry thought 'He's probably going to tell me he's gay.'
"Yes?" Harry said to Ron gesturing for him to go on. "Well, since the begging of the year, I've been feeling stronger feelings for Hermione that usual. And I've realised I can't hide from my feelings for her any more, Harry, I think I'm falling in lover with Hermione."
An uncomfortable silence filled the little corner they were standing in then-
"Harry, Ron, there you are. I wondered where you went, let's go to class, we have double potions next."
Harry followed Ron and Hermione think about what Ron ad just said to him, what if Ron really did have strong feelings for Hermione? Would he get in the way of his and Hermione's secret relationship? This was not good. Soon Ron would be admitting his love for her, and what if she's blown away by his courage to tell he such a thing?
Please R sorry that was such a short chap. I have to go to school now, bye!