Oh, wow, thanks for all the reviews! Sorry for all the really bad typo's in
the last chap, but you all wanted me to write more. So I did it in a rush.
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uhuh...right...
it was OKAY. id give it maybe a 6.5 out of 10.
there were MANY MANY spelling mistakes, grammatical errors, blah blah blah, but otherwise i like the plot and i LOVE DRACO/HERM FICS!
Yeah, I know, sorry about that. =p Can't be perfect all the time you know.
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Draco'sGirl
Good. I like it. Keep writing. I like the 'Oh no.' Harry thought 'He's probably going to tell me he's gay.', thing. Keep it up, dude(ette?)!
Yup, dudette, lol.
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"Herm? Herm!! Her-mion-e Gran-ger!!" Draco yelled at Hermione, she'd fallen asleep on her desk again from working too hard,
"What? What?!" she said sitting up from her desk looking all flushed.
"What were you dreaming about.?" Draco asked a naughty little smirk appearing on his face,
"Oh! Uhh. Nothing, I didn't have a dream." She said embarrassed.
"Well, I think, from the sounds you were making you must have." He said and winked
"What sounds?" she said quickly.
Draco did a dramatised replay of the noises she'd supposedly been making while napping - "Draco! Ooh Draco, Yes, YES, YES!!"
"No." she said plainly, "Anyway, what are you doing in the Gryffindor common room? You shouldn't be allowed in here!"
"Well, he said moving closer to Hermione's face, "I came so we could replay that little dream you had. No ones around, just you and me and that naughty little mind of yours." he took her hand and led her to the couch near the fire and started to kiss her passionately unbuttoning her shirt.
"But Draco. We really-" she broke off as he let his hand wonder up her skirt, her knees buckled as the pleasure tingled through her body, "Ohhh. Draco. Draco."
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"Herm? Herm!! Her-mion-e Gran-ger!!" Harry yelled at Hermione, she'd fallen asleep on her desk again from working too hard,
"What? What?!" she said sitting up from her desk looking all flushed.
"What were you dreaming about.?" Harry said looking a little worried,
"Oh! Uhh. Nothing, I didn't have a dream." She said embarrassed.
"Well, I think, from the sounds you were making you must have." He said smiling,
"What sounds?" she said quickly, the realising the conversation was extremely familiar.
"Never mind. We're late for class, we've got Herbology now."
"Ok, I'm coming. Just - Hang on, I've got to get my books," she said going behind a tall shelf of books.
She went to her table when she heard someone whispering her name, "Hermione, hey, Herm."
"Ron?" she said walking over to him, "What are you doing? Why are we whispering? -"
Out of nowhere Ron pulled Hermione forward by her waist and started kissing her, slowly. Then his tongue swept across her lips and into her mouth, he pulled away.
"I love you Hermione Granger. With all my heart."
He stared into her beautiful eyes,
"What?! Are you serious!" she started laughing, "Yeah, I love you too Ron." She said and walked away back to Harry.
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"Harry, the funniest thing happened in the Library when I went to get my books." she said beginning to laugh again, "Ron kissed me - "
"What?" Harry said shocked,
"No, wait. And he said he loved me, with all his heart! Isn't that funny? It must've been a dare, but god. I never knew he could act so serious!"
"Err." Harry said going kind of pale, "I think he was being serious Hermione, the other day he told me he loved you, then before I could say anything you came and we went to class."
Herm breathed out, feeling slightly sick. She ran out of the green house to go to Ron.
"Miss Granger! Miss Granger, you have not been dismissed!" But she was already well out of hearing range. All she could think about was how much she must have hurt Ron.
She burst into the Muggle Studies classroom and grabbed Ron by the arm and as the Professor opened his mouth to say something she shut the door. Without a word she led Ron into the hall and pulled him into a corner.
"Ron-" she started but he cut in,
"What the hell do you think you're doing!?? First you laugh in my face for telling you my true feelings then you take me from class in the middle of a test!! You idiot!"
"Ron! I'm sorry; I didn't think you were being serious! I just thought you were fooling around."
She looked at him sincerely and he gave her a weak smile,
"Ron." she said taking his hand, "Ron, I love you too, but - "
That seemed to be enough for Ron, he took her by the waist yet again and kissed her deeply, Hermione heard Harry and Draco coming down the hall talking to each other,
"Why do you care where she went, Draco?" Harry said annoyed, "Why do you care if I care about where she went?" he said snapping back, "Because I care about her." "Well, who says I don't!"
They were getting closer and to no doubt Ron could here them, but something inside of Hermione told her that Ron wanted them to find out, but she didn't, she tried to pull away but Ron had a tight grip on her and she couldn't, how was she meant to explain this to both of the boys? She didn't know whom she loved. Harry or Draco. Certainly not Ron, she'd figured that out, but whom? Draco or Harry.
She kept on struggling to get away from Ron, but he was too strong soon the boys had reached the corner. They both stoped and their jaws dropped and Ron finally let go, looking quit happy with himself,
"Looks like I've got a girlfriend," he said smiling at Hermione, expecting her to smile back, "Isn't that right Hermione?"
But she didn't, she just stood there feeling a cross between upset embarrassment and anger.
"Draco, Harry. It's not - Well, It didn't, It wasn't my fault, I just, Ron - he grabbed me and kissed me!" Hermione didn't feel right dobbing Ron in, but it was the truth.
Ron looked like he'd just been stabbed in the back, his mouth open, gaping at Hermione.
"Ron! How could you!" Harry and Draco yelled at the same time.
Ron ignored them and turned to look at Hermione, "You bitch." He mouthed and walked off.
Harry and Draco ran after him.
Harry grabbed him by the shirt and punched him in the stomach.
"Don't you ever-" another punch "-ever-" and another "-ever hurt Hermione!" he said as letting go as Ron dropped to the ground.
Now it was Draco's turn, he pulled Ron up and hit him in the nose this time, "And NEVER call a beautiful girl like Hermione a bitch!"
They walked up to Hermione to comfort her, as Ron looked up from the ground pathetically and hopelessly looking for help. She shook her head and turned to Draco and Harry.
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R$R please, or no more story!
Looove Alley!
`````````` panda (mandypandy713@hotmail.com)
uhuh...right...
it was OKAY. id give it maybe a 6.5 out of 10.
there were MANY MANY spelling mistakes, grammatical errors, blah blah blah, but otherwise i like the plot and i LOVE DRACO/HERM FICS!
Yeah, I know, sorry about that. =p Can't be perfect all the time you know.
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Draco'sGirl
Good. I like it. Keep writing. I like the 'Oh no.' Harry thought 'He's probably going to tell me he's gay.', thing. Keep it up, dude(ette?)!
Yup, dudette, lol.
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"Herm? Herm!! Her-mion-e Gran-ger!!" Draco yelled at Hermione, she'd fallen asleep on her desk again from working too hard,
"What? What?!" she said sitting up from her desk looking all flushed.
"What were you dreaming about.?" Draco asked a naughty little smirk appearing on his face,
"Oh! Uhh. Nothing, I didn't have a dream." She said embarrassed.
"Well, I think, from the sounds you were making you must have." He said and winked
"What sounds?" she said quickly.
Draco did a dramatised replay of the noises she'd supposedly been making while napping - "Draco! Ooh Draco, Yes, YES, YES!!"
"No." she said plainly, "Anyway, what are you doing in the Gryffindor common room? You shouldn't be allowed in here!"
"Well, he said moving closer to Hermione's face, "I came so we could replay that little dream you had. No ones around, just you and me and that naughty little mind of yours." he took her hand and led her to the couch near the fire and started to kiss her passionately unbuttoning her shirt.
"But Draco. We really-" she broke off as he let his hand wonder up her skirt, her knees buckled as the pleasure tingled through her body, "Ohhh. Draco. Draco."
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"Herm? Herm!! Her-mion-e Gran-ger!!" Harry yelled at Hermione, she'd fallen asleep on her desk again from working too hard,
"What? What?!" she said sitting up from her desk looking all flushed.
"What were you dreaming about.?" Harry said looking a little worried,
"Oh! Uhh. Nothing, I didn't have a dream." She said embarrassed.
"Well, I think, from the sounds you were making you must have." He said smiling,
"What sounds?" she said quickly, the realising the conversation was extremely familiar.
"Never mind. We're late for class, we've got Herbology now."
"Ok, I'm coming. Just - Hang on, I've got to get my books," she said going behind a tall shelf of books.
She went to her table when she heard someone whispering her name, "Hermione, hey, Herm."
"Ron?" she said walking over to him, "What are you doing? Why are we whispering? -"
Out of nowhere Ron pulled Hermione forward by her waist and started kissing her, slowly. Then his tongue swept across her lips and into her mouth, he pulled away.
"I love you Hermione Granger. With all my heart."
He stared into her beautiful eyes,
"What?! Are you serious!" she started laughing, "Yeah, I love you too Ron." She said and walked away back to Harry.
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"Harry, the funniest thing happened in the Library when I went to get my books." she said beginning to laugh again, "Ron kissed me - "
"What?" Harry said shocked,
"No, wait. And he said he loved me, with all his heart! Isn't that funny? It must've been a dare, but god. I never knew he could act so serious!"
"Err." Harry said going kind of pale, "I think he was being serious Hermione, the other day he told me he loved you, then before I could say anything you came and we went to class."
Herm breathed out, feeling slightly sick. She ran out of the green house to go to Ron.
"Miss Granger! Miss Granger, you have not been dismissed!" But she was already well out of hearing range. All she could think about was how much she must have hurt Ron.
She burst into the Muggle Studies classroom and grabbed Ron by the arm and as the Professor opened his mouth to say something she shut the door. Without a word she led Ron into the hall and pulled him into a corner.
"Ron-" she started but he cut in,
"What the hell do you think you're doing!?? First you laugh in my face for telling you my true feelings then you take me from class in the middle of a test!! You idiot!"
"Ron! I'm sorry; I didn't think you were being serious! I just thought you were fooling around."
She looked at him sincerely and he gave her a weak smile,
"Ron." she said taking his hand, "Ron, I love you too, but - "
That seemed to be enough for Ron, he took her by the waist yet again and kissed her deeply, Hermione heard Harry and Draco coming down the hall talking to each other,
"Why do you care where she went, Draco?" Harry said annoyed, "Why do you care if I care about where she went?" he said snapping back, "Because I care about her." "Well, who says I don't!"
They were getting closer and to no doubt Ron could here them, but something inside of Hermione told her that Ron wanted them to find out, but she didn't, she tried to pull away but Ron had a tight grip on her and she couldn't, how was she meant to explain this to both of the boys? She didn't know whom she loved. Harry or Draco. Certainly not Ron, she'd figured that out, but whom? Draco or Harry.
She kept on struggling to get away from Ron, but he was too strong soon the boys had reached the corner. They both stoped and their jaws dropped and Ron finally let go, looking quit happy with himself,
"Looks like I've got a girlfriend," he said smiling at Hermione, expecting her to smile back, "Isn't that right Hermione?"
But she didn't, she just stood there feeling a cross between upset embarrassment and anger.
"Draco, Harry. It's not - Well, It didn't, It wasn't my fault, I just, Ron - he grabbed me and kissed me!" Hermione didn't feel right dobbing Ron in, but it was the truth.
Ron looked like he'd just been stabbed in the back, his mouth open, gaping at Hermione.
"Ron! How could you!" Harry and Draco yelled at the same time.
Ron ignored them and turned to look at Hermione, "You bitch." He mouthed and walked off.
Harry and Draco ran after him.
Harry grabbed him by the shirt and punched him in the stomach.
"Don't you ever-" another punch "-ever-" and another "-ever hurt Hermione!" he said as letting go as Ron dropped to the ground.
Now it was Draco's turn, he pulled Ron up and hit him in the nose this time, "And NEVER call a beautiful girl like Hermione a bitch!"
They walked up to Hermione to comfort her, as Ron looked up from the ground pathetically and hopelessly looking for help. She shook her head and turned to Draco and Harry.
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R$R please, or no more story!
Looove Alley!