Hello everyone, I am currently trying to fix my "big loooong paragraph" issue and decided to take a computer class, so now I am trying to HTML code the whole thing. Hope it is more or less pleasing to the eye!
Without further ado, I am proud to introduce my second fanfic. *Looking pleased with self*
-What? Four more girls in the Fellowship? -
Chapter 1
"So, Srennan, how did you get us into this mess again?" Arileen Valucci, a student at St. Maria Boarding School For Girls, complained to her fellow student, Srennan Chen. Srennan replied, exasperated, "I was talking to Ms. Angelus, and then the next thing I knew, she told me to decorate the Sec. 5 retreat room. And don't call me Srennan." Srennan Heittori, a distant cousin of Srenna (this is what she likes to be called as she hates getting mixed up with the other Srennan), piped up defensively, "Srenna asked you to help her and you agreed." "Be glad we didn't have to plan the five-day trip around the country." Lori Miller, the last girl of the quartet, said quietly. Lori, the prettiest of the four, had stunning blue eyes framed in long, dark lashes; her hair was a sea of gold, cascading all the way down to her back; her creamy complexion highlighting berry red lips. Arileen was average looking, but her face showed her stubbornness and braveness very clearly. Her brown hair fell on her shoulders, brown eyes of the same color stared at you under thin eyebrows, daring you to look straight back at her. The two Srennans were both typical looking Asian girls. Srennan kept mostly to herself and always had a dreamy look in her amber eyes. Srenna, on the other hand, was recovering from a bout of pimples, which left her lightly tanned face slightly splotchy, but if you look carefully, her dark caramel eyes held an unusual amount of mischievousness.
Arileen, with her usual athletic skill, pushed the other three girls into the retreat room before either of the Srennans could protest. What they found was jaw dropping…
Hee hee hee, I just love cliffies. So how's this for a beginning? Review please, it is the only way I can sustain myself in these endless months, toiling to produce good fanfiction. Okay, okay, so I'm being dramatic, but reviews do help a lot, it keeps one's spirit up while one is writing. Oh yeah, a warning to all you poetry-hating people, I can get pretty poetic at times. I have the next few chappies all thought up, so the only thing that can stand between me and publishing these puppies are… Computer Problems! And, I must say, they occur pretty often. I'll try my best. School is my number one block on getting these things finished, and it doesn't look like it's ending any time soon.