Sorry about the format on my previous chapters; I hope this works out better. Also, please review and tell me if you like the story! ;) I'm also going to switch from writing in 3rd person to writing in 1st person - I hope it's not too confusing.
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After the trip to Rivendel which was rather long, boring, and quiet, the group found Gandalf and Frodo.
Elrond, though, looked rather surprised to see Alephel. "It must be a day for hobbits," he explained, "There's another girl your age that just got here this morning."
He then led Alephel to her, and after introducing them to one another, left them alone for a while which later turned out to be a BIG mistake...
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After Elrond left them, he hurried off to a council containing everyone in Rivendel of any authority at all. Dee, as she insisted everyone call her, talked with Alephel for a while.
"...yeah, the trip up here was rather boring! Merry and Pippin were rather loud at first, but I need more excitement in my life than that! Okay, now that I've told my story, you have to tell me yours!"
"Okay, well it al started when I was sitting in my room one day. It was my fourteenth birthday-"
"You're 14? Me too!"
Diamond laughed before continuing, "Anyway, I was lying on my bed imagining what it would be like to live here, in Middle-earth. Then I felt myself lifting off the bed. I didn't dare open my eyes for fear that I would fall. When I felt myself lower, I breathed a sigh of relief. However, when I opened my eyes, I discovered that I was not in a bedroom, but rather, a patch of woods. I was desperate to get out - I hate being alone in woods - and after about a two day journey, I turned up here. Later I learned the woods were called Trollshaw; but anyway, I arrived here this morning and have been exploring all day.
"Wow that's quite a story!"
They sat in silence for a few minutes.
Then Diamond spoke up, "Do you want to go have some fun? Look what I found in my pocket." She pulled out several cans of spray paint.
"Sure I've been dying for fun ever since I got here!"
"Elrond trusts me and allows me to go anywhere I want - he thinks I'm harmless," Dee said with an evil glint in her eyes. "Oh, by the way, do you mind if I call you Ali? It's easier to say!"
"Sure I like that better too!"
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Several days later, Rivendel had a...um...quite...different appearance to it. Ali and Dee had used the spray paint somewhat sparingly, but the bottles seemed to be bottomless - not that they minded.
Unfortunately, the three-day council was just getting out and before he even had a chance to declare who the fellowship would be, some thing bright caught the corner of his eye. Because it appeared to be a neon-pink, he quickly ran to check it out. On his way over there, Elrond quickly discovered just how much of Rivendel was covered in spray paint.
Without a second thought he thundered, "Alephel and Diamond come here this instant!" Then hardly glancing at them, he grabbed them by the wrists and dragged them over to where the Fellowship was still standing.
"Pellegara and Dwalin here will be joining you," Elrond announced coldly.
Ali gathering her whit was awestricken for a minute before yelling, "You can't call me by that name! The wrath of the goddess will be upon you for this."
Elrond laughed icily sending chills down her spine, "Has SHE no name? She has no power over me."
Ali was suddenly quite afraid and could feel Elrond's gaze penetrating her.
Dee by this time was quite upset too, "How dare you call me by that name?" She clamored angrily. That was her real name but she had done everything she could to get rid of it.
Elrond, however, was not in the mood for conversation and quickly escorted the group out encouraging them to leave immediately. On the way out, Aragorn and Legolas swapped worried looks.
~ ~ ~
After the trip to Rivendel which was rather long, boring, and quiet, the group found Gandalf and Frodo.
Elrond, though, looked rather surprised to see Alephel. "It must be a day for hobbits," he explained, "There's another girl your age that just got here this morning."
He then led Alephel to her, and after introducing them to one another, left them alone for a while which later turned out to be a BIG mistake...
~ ~ ~
After Elrond left them, he hurried off to a council containing everyone in Rivendel of any authority at all. Dee, as she insisted everyone call her, talked with Alephel for a while.
"...yeah, the trip up here was rather boring! Merry and Pippin were rather loud at first, but I need more excitement in my life than that! Okay, now that I've told my story, you have to tell me yours!"
"Okay, well it al started when I was sitting in my room one day. It was my fourteenth birthday-"
"You're 14? Me too!"
Diamond laughed before continuing, "Anyway, I was lying on my bed imagining what it would be like to live here, in Middle-earth. Then I felt myself lifting off the bed. I didn't dare open my eyes for fear that I would fall. When I felt myself lower, I breathed a sigh of relief. However, when I opened my eyes, I discovered that I was not in a bedroom, but rather, a patch of woods. I was desperate to get out - I hate being alone in woods - and after about a two day journey, I turned up here. Later I learned the woods were called Trollshaw; but anyway, I arrived here this morning and have been exploring all day.
"Wow that's quite a story!"
They sat in silence for a few minutes.
Then Diamond spoke up, "Do you want to go have some fun? Look what I found in my pocket." She pulled out several cans of spray paint.
"Sure I've been dying for fun ever since I got here!"
"Elrond trusts me and allows me to go anywhere I want - he thinks I'm harmless," Dee said with an evil glint in her eyes. "Oh, by the way, do you mind if I call you Ali? It's easier to say!"
"Sure I like that better too!"
~ ~ ~
Several days later, Rivendel had a...um...quite...different appearance to it. Ali and Dee had used the spray paint somewhat sparingly, but the bottles seemed to be bottomless - not that they minded.
Unfortunately, the three-day council was just getting out and before he even had a chance to declare who the fellowship would be, some thing bright caught the corner of his eye. Because it appeared to be a neon-pink, he quickly ran to check it out. On his way over there, Elrond quickly discovered just how much of Rivendel was covered in spray paint.
Without a second thought he thundered, "Alephel and Diamond come here this instant!" Then hardly glancing at them, he grabbed them by the wrists and dragged them over to where the Fellowship was still standing.
"Pellegara and Dwalin here will be joining you," Elrond announced coldly.
Ali gathering her whit was awestricken for a minute before yelling, "You can't call me by that name! The wrath of the goddess will be upon you for this."
Elrond laughed icily sending chills down her spine, "Has SHE no name? She has no power over me."
Ali was suddenly quite afraid and could feel Elrond's gaze penetrating her.
Dee by this time was quite upset too, "How dare you call me by that name?" She clamored angrily. That was her real name but she had done everything she could to get rid of it.
Elrond, however, was not in the mood for conversation and quickly escorted the group out encouraging them to leave immediately. On the way out, Aragorn and Legolas swapped worried looks.