OK, Here is Chapter 2 of Misconceptions. I would really appreciate some
reviews so that I would be able to make this a better story for you people
to enjoy. I might even put you in the story if you have an interesting
review. Uhhh.yeah. Anyways, Flames are ok with me. This stuff belongs to
their aprropriate owners.and so and so on! Here we go.then!
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The car sped down the side-roads as Jason was trying to see if maybe they could catch up with the Police chase so they could see some action. Jose looked at the sky. It was so clear. He envied how pure it seemed. He just couldn't understand how fast all this stuff was happening. He was getting caught up in too much of a rush. Is this how his Father's last days were back when he was with the Cartel? Jose quickly awoke from his deep thoughts as his brother called to him.
Jason: Jose? You alright man?
Jose: Yeah, Just thinking about stuff.
Jason: Alright. That's cool.
They remained quiet for a few moments until they saw a horrendous sight.
Jose: Oh S***!
Three SWAT Enforcers were floating in the channel of water near a bridge. The intense heat from their flaming wreckage could be felt even from their distance of 20 feet. Sirens from Firetrucks, Police Cruisers, and Ambulances Could be heard in the distance.
Jason: Those Guys Must've Done this.
Jose: Damn.And those SWAT were just doing their job..
Jason: It's a part of the job.I guess?
Jose: Lets go to the party.
They drove away quickly.both looking in the rear view mirrors, incapable of taking their eyes off of the burnt corpses floating amongst the vehicles in the water. The Huge Mansion came into view as they reached Starfish Island. They parked outside the Estate next to the sidewalk. They exited the car and walked up to the Mansion. A guard stood at the doorway preventing them from entering.
Guard: Name or Invitation? (He held a pad with names on it in one hand and a pen in the other.)
Jose: This girl Vivian invited me..
Guard: Oh, I see, go ahead.
Jose looked at each other and they shrugged. They didn't give it another thought and they entered. The Party was pretty casual. Jose looked around to see if he could find Vivian anywhere. Jason took off for the bar to see if he could get a drink. Jose finally spotted Vivian standing next to a man in his late 50's. He made his way through all the people and stood in front of her and spoke.
Jose: Hey.
Vivian turned away from the Middle-Aged Man and Responded.
Vivian: Jose? You came!
Jose: Yeah.Is there something wrong with that? Vivian: No, Not at all. Actually, I have someone I want you to meet. (She turned to the Man she was standing next to.) Jose, I'd like you to meet my Father, Thomas Vercetti.
Jose's eyes widened. He couldn't believe that the biggest Coke Dealer in the South and One of The Biggest Mafia Families in the United States, Head Honcho was standing before him. And that he was kinda having a thing for his daughter. Jose quickly came to his senses and shook Tommy Vercetti's Hand.
Jose: Nice to meet you, sir.
Vercetti: Call me Tommy.
Jose: Sure.Tommy.
Vivian and Jose bid her Father farewell and proceeded up to the rooftop. They stood next to a helicopter and stared at the ocean.
Jose: This place is Beautiful.
Vivian: Is it? I've forgotten.
They stood silent and looked out into the sea. Jose felt at peace but then the mood was ruined as a helicopter approached. It was coming towards the mansion at a high speed. It didn't have any intention of landing. As is got close, Jose could make out a male figure hanging on the side with an M-16 is hand. As the helicopter got close, it opened fire on Jose and Vivian. Jose grabbed Vivian and dropped them both to the ground. The bullets missed and hit the chopper on the rooftop. The Enemy Chopper began to circle around for another strike.
Vivian: There's a shotgun in the chopper!!
Jose jumped up and ran to the chopper slamming open the door. He quickly searched the cockpit and found a Remington and some ammo. He loaded the gun and readied himself for the choppers next assault. It approached and the enemy gunner readied himself for his chance to shoot. When the chopper was in range the gunner was about to pull the trigger but it was too late. Jose had shot 2 shots, and neither missed. The gunner was hit in the Thigh and his left arm. He fell from the chopper and hit the rooftop with a thud. The chopper quickly retreated and Jose ran to the fallen gunman.
Jose: Get Up! (He cocked the shotgun and aimed at the fallen man) Get Up!
The gunman turned to face Jose. Blood was coming from his mouth. There was also blood on his face, from his wounds, covering his blue eyes. His blonde hair now an orange after mixing with his blood. Basically, A lot of blood.
Gunman: Fin.Finis.Finish me! (coughs up more blood)
Jose: Who do you work for? Why were you trying to kill the girl?
Gunman: What.What girl? We..we.came..came for you..
Jose took a step back. And in his anger shot the wounded man in the face. Blood splatted onto Jose's face. Vivian ran over to Jose's side and gasped at the site of the dead body. Jose bent down and searched the body. He found some I.D. He glanced at the name.
"Nicholas Weiler, Age 23, Origin: European Descent."
Jose: (To himself) Why did this guy want to take me out? He's got not tattoos, no noticeable affiliation. Who did this guy work for? Vivian: Jose. Lets got tell my father. He'll know what to do.
Jose: Ok.yeah..sure.
They both walked inside.Bloody, Tired, and Full of Questions.With no answers.
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That was Chapter 2 of Misconceptions. Please Review. I think it was pretty action filled. A tad bit cliché but interesting none the less. Nick! You got your part in the story. But you died..heh. Dave and Me are next. Chapter 3 Coming VERY soon. I'm working on this stuff often. A Chapter a day. Stay Tuned.
-Rob
The car sped down the side-roads as Jason was trying to see if maybe they could catch up with the Police chase so they could see some action. Jose looked at the sky. It was so clear. He envied how pure it seemed. He just couldn't understand how fast all this stuff was happening. He was getting caught up in too much of a rush. Is this how his Father's last days were back when he was with the Cartel? Jose quickly awoke from his deep thoughts as his brother called to him.
Jason: Jose? You alright man?
Jose: Yeah, Just thinking about stuff.
Jason: Alright. That's cool.
They remained quiet for a few moments until they saw a horrendous sight.
Jose: Oh S***!
Three SWAT Enforcers were floating in the channel of water near a bridge. The intense heat from their flaming wreckage could be felt even from their distance of 20 feet. Sirens from Firetrucks, Police Cruisers, and Ambulances Could be heard in the distance.
Jason: Those Guys Must've Done this.
Jose: Damn.And those SWAT were just doing their job..
Jason: It's a part of the job.I guess?
Jose: Lets go to the party.
They drove away quickly.both looking in the rear view mirrors, incapable of taking their eyes off of the burnt corpses floating amongst the vehicles in the water. The Huge Mansion came into view as they reached Starfish Island. They parked outside the Estate next to the sidewalk. They exited the car and walked up to the Mansion. A guard stood at the doorway preventing them from entering.
Guard: Name or Invitation? (He held a pad with names on it in one hand and a pen in the other.)
Jose: This girl Vivian invited me..
Guard: Oh, I see, go ahead.
Jose looked at each other and they shrugged. They didn't give it another thought and they entered. The Party was pretty casual. Jose looked around to see if he could find Vivian anywhere. Jason took off for the bar to see if he could get a drink. Jose finally spotted Vivian standing next to a man in his late 50's. He made his way through all the people and stood in front of her and spoke.
Jose: Hey.
Vivian turned away from the Middle-Aged Man and Responded.
Vivian: Jose? You came!
Jose: Yeah.Is there something wrong with that? Vivian: No, Not at all. Actually, I have someone I want you to meet. (She turned to the Man she was standing next to.) Jose, I'd like you to meet my Father, Thomas Vercetti.
Jose's eyes widened. He couldn't believe that the biggest Coke Dealer in the South and One of The Biggest Mafia Families in the United States, Head Honcho was standing before him. And that he was kinda having a thing for his daughter. Jose quickly came to his senses and shook Tommy Vercetti's Hand.
Jose: Nice to meet you, sir.
Vercetti: Call me Tommy.
Jose: Sure.Tommy.
Vivian and Jose bid her Father farewell and proceeded up to the rooftop. They stood next to a helicopter and stared at the ocean.
Jose: This place is Beautiful.
Vivian: Is it? I've forgotten.
They stood silent and looked out into the sea. Jose felt at peace but then the mood was ruined as a helicopter approached. It was coming towards the mansion at a high speed. It didn't have any intention of landing. As is got close, Jose could make out a male figure hanging on the side with an M-16 is hand. As the helicopter got close, it opened fire on Jose and Vivian. Jose grabbed Vivian and dropped them both to the ground. The bullets missed and hit the chopper on the rooftop. The Enemy Chopper began to circle around for another strike.
Vivian: There's a shotgun in the chopper!!
Jose jumped up and ran to the chopper slamming open the door. He quickly searched the cockpit and found a Remington and some ammo. He loaded the gun and readied himself for the choppers next assault. It approached and the enemy gunner readied himself for his chance to shoot. When the chopper was in range the gunner was about to pull the trigger but it was too late. Jose had shot 2 shots, and neither missed. The gunner was hit in the Thigh and his left arm. He fell from the chopper and hit the rooftop with a thud. The chopper quickly retreated and Jose ran to the fallen gunman.
Jose: Get Up! (He cocked the shotgun and aimed at the fallen man) Get Up!
The gunman turned to face Jose. Blood was coming from his mouth. There was also blood on his face, from his wounds, covering his blue eyes. His blonde hair now an orange after mixing with his blood. Basically, A lot of blood.
Gunman: Fin.Finis.Finish me! (coughs up more blood)
Jose: Who do you work for? Why were you trying to kill the girl?
Gunman: What.What girl? We..we.came..came for you..
Jose took a step back. And in his anger shot the wounded man in the face. Blood splatted onto Jose's face. Vivian ran over to Jose's side and gasped at the site of the dead body. Jose bent down and searched the body. He found some I.D. He glanced at the name.
"Nicholas Weiler, Age 23, Origin: European Descent."
Jose: (To himself) Why did this guy want to take me out? He's got not tattoos, no noticeable affiliation. Who did this guy work for? Vivian: Jose. Lets got tell my father. He'll know what to do.
Jose: Ok.yeah..sure.
They both walked inside.Bloody, Tired, and Full of Questions.With no answers.
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That was Chapter 2 of Misconceptions. Please Review. I think it was pretty action filled. A tad bit cliché but interesting none the less. Nick! You got your part in the story. But you died..heh. Dave and Me are next. Chapter 3 Coming VERY soon. I'm working on this stuff often. A Chapter a day. Stay Tuned.
-Rob