When I looked at my first chapter after I'd posted it, I saw quite a few mistakes (I have so many run on sentences it isn't even funny) but ah well, who cares? As long as you can read it, it's fine. I've only gotten one review, since the last time I checked anyway, but I appreciate it, (thanks!). Anyway, might as well get on with the fic.
The pounding, it wouldn't stop, Gaz looked around for the source of the wretched noise, but all she could see was black. Suddenly, it stopped, but the silence was soon broken by shouts and screams of pain and anger. They started out hollow sounding, but with each passing second they got thicker and realer, until it seemed they were right next to her ear.
"WAKE UP FILTHY WORM BABY!" Gaz jerked awake, an Irken was standing an inch from her face. Pressing herself against the wall, she looked around frantically. There were around thirty or forty Irkens in the crowded basement either shaking awake the sleeping humans, fighting with the waken ones, or leading humans up the stairs. The Irken in front of her reached for her arm and Gaz brought her leg up and kicked the Irken in the jaw, making him fly backward into another Irken and a human, which knocked all of them to the ground. Jumping up, she looked for her brother but only saw a few individual fights between Irken's and humans, and a small, mobish group by the staircase. Running over, she had to fight a few Irken's, giving each of them a well-placed kick or punch. Some of them had earth guns, but most of them had Irken lasers. She pushed past a couple of people, still looking for Dib.
"Dib!" Gaz shouted over the mayhem, "DIB!!"
"Gaz?" a small voice asked, she turned around and saw Tia, the youngest of the group, huddled under the staircase; she had a few bumps, scratches, and bruises on her arms.
"They took'm, he was their first prisoner." She said, in a tired voice.
"What!" Gaz shouted, keeping an eye on the fighting. They were losing, badly. Most of the rebels had already been captured, but Kyan was still fighting and so were a few others. Gaz itched to join them but instead she slunk further into the shadows, it wouldn't matter anyway. If she fought, she might end up getting killed, and she couldn't let that happen, not until Zim was dead and had paid for what he'd done.
"When they first got here, the moment they saw Dib they knocked'm out and took him away." Tia explained, "Then they began attacking everyone and taking them away. Dee told me to stay here, out of the way." Tia said, mentioning her older brother who was very, very protective of her.
"How'd they find us?" Gaz asked uneasily, praying that it wasn't her fault.
"Bri," Tia replied, "They followed her here." They both turned their attention to the fighting, which had slowed considerably down. Now there were only 3 fighters left; Kyan, Dee, and a girl, Fi. The three were back to back, surrounded by Irkens.
"Surrender, and we'll let you live." The apparent leader of the Irkens said.
"Go to hell!" Dee sneered, jumping forward to attack him. A laser beam was shot from the crowd of Irkens through Dee's chest, showering the closer Irkens and humans, with blood. A look of shock and pain was seen on his face before he fell to the ground.
"DEE!!!" Tia shouted, jumping up, the Irken faces turned toward them as Tia shoved through the alien-beings and to her deceased brothers side. Gaz walked coolly past the Irken's, giving everyone that made eye contact with her, a death glare. She placed a hand on Tia's shaking shoulder and looked at Fi and Kyan.
"C'mon, it's time to go." Gaz said, her voice held an icy tone, not meant for her fellow rebels, but for the Irkens. Nevertheless, the humans, long with the Irken's, flinched as she spoke.
Gaz put a hand on Tia's shoulder, giving it a comforting squeeze as the Irken's led them to a large ship that was right outside the destroyed pizza parlor. The traumatized girl didn't give any notice of the reassuring gesture other than a blank look before she walked toward the ship. It looked large enough to hold around 2,000 people, and was a dark purple and green. They were led up a metal ramp, with the prodding of a few Irkens, and inside the darkness of the alien spaceship.
I'm just adding this to *remind* you to R&R this, or else! I mean it, I've got an Uzi an I belong to the Mafia! J/k, anyway, please R&R
The pounding, it wouldn't stop, Gaz looked around for the source of the wretched noise, but all she could see was black. Suddenly, it stopped, but the silence was soon broken by shouts and screams of pain and anger. They started out hollow sounding, but with each passing second they got thicker and realer, until it seemed they were right next to her ear.
"WAKE UP FILTHY WORM BABY!" Gaz jerked awake, an Irken was standing an inch from her face. Pressing herself against the wall, she looked around frantically. There were around thirty or forty Irkens in the crowded basement either shaking awake the sleeping humans, fighting with the waken ones, or leading humans up the stairs. The Irken in front of her reached for her arm and Gaz brought her leg up and kicked the Irken in the jaw, making him fly backward into another Irken and a human, which knocked all of them to the ground. Jumping up, she looked for her brother but only saw a few individual fights between Irken's and humans, and a small, mobish group by the staircase. Running over, she had to fight a few Irken's, giving each of them a well-placed kick or punch. Some of them had earth guns, but most of them had Irken lasers. She pushed past a couple of people, still looking for Dib.
"Dib!" Gaz shouted over the mayhem, "DIB!!"
"Gaz?" a small voice asked, she turned around and saw Tia, the youngest of the group, huddled under the staircase; she had a few bumps, scratches, and bruises on her arms.
"They took'm, he was their first prisoner." She said, in a tired voice.
"What!" Gaz shouted, keeping an eye on the fighting. They were losing, badly. Most of the rebels had already been captured, but Kyan was still fighting and so were a few others. Gaz itched to join them but instead she slunk further into the shadows, it wouldn't matter anyway. If she fought, she might end up getting killed, and she couldn't let that happen, not until Zim was dead and had paid for what he'd done.
"When they first got here, the moment they saw Dib they knocked'm out and took him away." Tia explained, "Then they began attacking everyone and taking them away. Dee told me to stay here, out of the way." Tia said, mentioning her older brother who was very, very protective of her.
"How'd they find us?" Gaz asked uneasily, praying that it wasn't her fault.
"Bri," Tia replied, "They followed her here." They both turned their attention to the fighting, which had slowed considerably down. Now there were only 3 fighters left; Kyan, Dee, and a girl, Fi. The three were back to back, surrounded by Irkens.
"Surrender, and we'll let you live." The apparent leader of the Irkens said.
"Go to hell!" Dee sneered, jumping forward to attack him. A laser beam was shot from the crowd of Irkens through Dee's chest, showering the closer Irkens and humans, with blood. A look of shock and pain was seen on his face before he fell to the ground.
"DEE!!!" Tia shouted, jumping up, the Irken faces turned toward them as Tia shoved through the alien-beings and to her deceased brothers side. Gaz walked coolly past the Irken's, giving everyone that made eye contact with her, a death glare. She placed a hand on Tia's shaking shoulder and looked at Fi and Kyan.
"C'mon, it's time to go." Gaz said, her voice held an icy tone, not meant for her fellow rebels, but for the Irkens. Nevertheless, the humans, long with the Irken's, flinched as she spoke.
Gaz put a hand on Tia's shoulder, giving it a comforting squeeze as the Irken's led them to a large ship that was right outside the destroyed pizza parlor. The traumatized girl didn't give any notice of the reassuring gesture other than a blank look before she walked toward the ship. It looked large enough to hold around 2,000 people, and was a dark purple and green. They were led up a metal ramp, with the prodding of a few Irkens, and inside the darkness of the alien spaceship.
I'm just adding this to *remind* you to R&R this, or else! I mean it, I've got an Uzi an I belong to the Mafia! J/k, anyway, please R&R