This is actually a pretty popular story as far as everything else goes. To
me, there are many types of writers on this site. There are writers that
write really good stories with good plots, but get little or no reviews;
writers who are really good at plot and story who get many reviews; writers
who are not very good yet they get many reviews anyway because of their
interesting subject; there are writers like me who are diagnosed with three
or more mental disorders who write well, get a decent number of reviews,
and criticize and bother everyone else with their unnecessary analysis and
ideals that just hold up the story.
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Chapter 9: A Real Attention Getter
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Shippou was exploring the temple when he saw a little boy sitting in back of the temple kicking a ball around. He was cute and kind of looked like Kagome, which made Shippou automatically like him. He scampered over and the boy looked over at him. "Are you a demon?" the boy asked.
"I'm a kitsune!" Shippou said.
"Oh! Are you a good kitsune or evil?" the boy asked.
"I think I'm good." Shippou said. "My name's Shippou! Who are you?"
"Higurashi Sota! My mama's a nun here." he said. "And my grandpa's a priest. He wants me to be a monk."
Shippou just nodded and said, "My parents died."
Sota looked sad, "Sorry."
"No problem. Kagome's my mom now!" Shippou said smiling.
"Kagome?" Sota said. "I didn't think priestesses could have children, but," he picked up his ball and signaled Shippou to come with him. "Let's go!"
He brought Shippou around to the side of the church where there were farm animals and other animals in cages. There was a goat, some sheep and pigs, a cow, many rabbits, some lizards,a few cats and dogs, a panda, and a really big snake!
"Ah! Sugoi!!" Shippou said looking at the snake in its cage. The wiggled its tongue and turned its head to look at him.
"I know! Isn't he cool!" Sota started playing with the lock. "I named him Godzilla!" he opened the cage and draped the boa around his neck like a boa. "He'a awesome!" Shippou said.
Sota then smiled and said. "Do you want to see the other animals too?"
"Sure!" Shippou said.
Sota put the snake back in the cage but didn't close it right.
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"Whore! Bitch! Hell spawn!" Inu Yasha shouted.
Kagome sat in front of a grave stone, clensing it. Inu Yasha stood behind her yelling insults at her, but she wasn't responding to his indirect challenges.
She finished after a few minutes and started to clean up.
"Oh! You think you're done, right crackhead?!" he shouted. He kicked a wave of mud onto the tombstone. She just glanced at it, then started walking back to the temple. If she cleansed it again, he would keep dirtying it. It would have been best to come back later and re-cleanse it.
"You're ugly! The ugliest woman I've ever happened to lay my piteous unfortunate eyes on!" he shouted in her ear as she walked back to the church. Her non responsive behavior was driving him up the wall. "You're so ugly so could make an onion cry! You're so hideous Medusa took one look at you and turned to stone!!"
In reality, his comments did hurt her, but like her game, her poker face remained flawless. He followed her into the temple where Miroku was telling them all about the journey he made from his village to theirs. "So, I went inside the shop," he said inbetween laughter. Everyone else was laughing too. "I went inside the shop, and it turned out that he was the one with the extra persimmons!"
Everyone laughed and Kagome sat down with them. Inu Yasha sat with his back to her in silence. He was trying to figure out a new way to get her attention. He was a demon boy in a church with little more resources then his mind and skill. How would he get this priestesses attention??
All of a sudden, Sota and Shippou ran by screaming, "WE DIDN'T DO IT!!!" Everyone stopped laughing to glance at them as they ran by. Then a bunch of lizards and bunnies, and farm animals came seeping into the room.
"Whoa!" Sango said. Everyone jumped to attention as they got hit by the plague of animals.
"We must put them back before Kaede notices!" Kikyo said. She tried to grab a rabbit that ran past her. Sango grabbed the leash attached to the goat and tried to drag him toward the back. Inu Yasha sat there looking bored with his chin resting on his hand. The snake slithered over to him without him noticing. It came and sniffed the hem of his right pants leg.
Miroku walked the cow back. Kagome and Kikyo got the sheep. Now all they had to get where the lizards and the rabbits. They ended up chasing them around the church for a few hours. Kikyo was looking for the rabbits when she saw the lizards. "Ugh! I hate lizards!" she shuddered. Then all of a sudden the lizards launched themselves at her.
Miroku saw a really cute little white bunny on the ground. It looked up at him and sniffed innocently. "Well, look at you!" he bent down and smiled at it. "You're an adorable little cottontail aren't you? Come here!" he waved his hand for it to come over to him. It took a step and tilted its head at him. "Come here cute little fluffy one, you're so cute!" ^_^
All of a sudden the rabbit jumped at his face. "AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!! KUSO!! BUDDHA, SOMEONE HELP!!! THE YELLOW TEETH!!! AAAHHH!!!!"
"I've got my own problems!!" Kikyo said. The lizards where all klinging to the white part of her priestess uniform. She looked like she was hyperventilating. "Get them off of me!!!"Sango came over to help.
Kagome ran in front of Inu Yasha to grab a rabbit that she had backed into a corner. All of a sudden, Inu Yasha's eyes widened slightly. She turned to look at him, forgetting the lockdown she was supposed to be doing on him. "Well? Are you going to sit there daydreaming or help?" she said.
He looked down at himself and said, "There's something in my pants."
She blinked. "What?"
His eyes widened and he stood up quickly. "Seriously! There's something REALLY BIG in my pants!!"
She blushed slightly, still holding the bunny and backed away a little.
He shook one leg trying to shake it out and he said, "It's moving around!"
"Oh god!" she said and hugged the bunny. Shippou stopped, while holding his rabbit and stared.
He untied the front of his pants and reached in. "I got it!" he said. He pulled up the head of the snake.
"WAAAH???!?" Kagome screamed.
Inu Yasha tilted his head and started to pull the four foot snake out of his pants. "Here we go!" he said and held in up in his hand. The snake hissed at him. "Ew!" he said and dropped it.
CRASH!
He turned to see Kagome faint.
Well, I guess that sort of got her attention. ^^
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=^^= Don't look at me like that!! I saw Corky Romano!!!
Sugoi=wow -
Chapter 9: A Real Attention Getter
-
Shippou was exploring the temple when he saw a little boy sitting in back of the temple kicking a ball around. He was cute and kind of looked like Kagome, which made Shippou automatically like him. He scampered over and the boy looked over at him. "Are you a demon?" the boy asked.
"I'm a kitsune!" Shippou said.
"Oh! Are you a good kitsune or evil?" the boy asked.
"I think I'm good." Shippou said. "My name's Shippou! Who are you?"
"Higurashi Sota! My mama's a nun here." he said. "And my grandpa's a priest. He wants me to be a monk."
Shippou just nodded and said, "My parents died."
Sota looked sad, "Sorry."
"No problem. Kagome's my mom now!" Shippou said smiling.
"Kagome?" Sota said. "I didn't think priestesses could have children, but," he picked up his ball and signaled Shippou to come with him. "Let's go!"
He brought Shippou around to the side of the church where there were farm animals and other animals in cages. There was a goat, some sheep and pigs, a cow, many rabbits, some lizards,a few cats and dogs, a panda, and a really big snake!
"Ah! Sugoi!!" Shippou said looking at the snake in its cage. The wiggled its tongue and turned its head to look at him.
"I know! Isn't he cool!" Sota started playing with the lock. "I named him Godzilla!" he opened the cage and draped the boa around his neck like a boa. "He'a awesome!" Shippou said.
Sota then smiled and said. "Do you want to see the other animals too?"
"Sure!" Shippou said.
Sota put the snake back in the cage but didn't close it right.
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"Whore! Bitch! Hell spawn!" Inu Yasha shouted.
Kagome sat in front of a grave stone, clensing it. Inu Yasha stood behind her yelling insults at her, but she wasn't responding to his indirect challenges.
She finished after a few minutes and started to clean up.
"Oh! You think you're done, right crackhead?!" he shouted. He kicked a wave of mud onto the tombstone. She just glanced at it, then started walking back to the temple. If she cleansed it again, he would keep dirtying it. It would have been best to come back later and re-cleanse it.
"You're ugly! The ugliest woman I've ever happened to lay my piteous unfortunate eyes on!" he shouted in her ear as she walked back to the church. Her non responsive behavior was driving him up the wall. "You're so ugly so could make an onion cry! You're so hideous Medusa took one look at you and turned to stone!!"
In reality, his comments did hurt her, but like her game, her poker face remained flawless. He followed her into the temple where Miroku was telling them all about the journey he made from his village to theirs. "So, I went inside the shop," he said inbetween laughter. Everyone else was laughing too. "I went inside the shop, and it turned out that he was the one with the extra persimmons!"
Everyone laughed and Kagome sat down with them. Inu Yasha sat with his back to her in silence. He was trying to figure out a new way to get her attention. He was a demon boy in a church with little more resources then his mind and skill. How would he get this priestesses attention??
All of a sudden, Sota and Shippou ran by screaming, "WE DIDN'T DO IT!!!" Everyone stopped laughing to glance at them as they ran by. Then a bunch of lizards and bunnies, and farm animals came seeping into the room.
"Whoa!" Sango said. Everyone jumped to attention as they got hit by the plague of animals.
"We must put them back before Kaede notices!" Kikyo said. She tried to grab a rabbit that ran past her. Sango grabbed the leash attached to the goat and tried to drag him toward the back. Inu Yasha sat there looking bored with his chin resting on his hand. The snake slithered over to him without him noticing. It came and sniffed the hem of his right pants leg.
Miroku walked the cow back. Kagome and Kikyo got the sheep. Now all they had to get where the lizards and the rabbits. They ended up chasing them around the church for a few hours. Kikyo was looking for the rabbits when she saw the lizards. "Ugh! I hate lizards!" she shuddered. Then all of a sudden the lizards launched themselves at her.
Miroku saw a really cute little white bunny on the ground. It looked up at him and sniffed innocently. "Well, look at you!" he bent down and smiled at it. "You're an adorable little cottontail aren't you? Come here!" he waved his hand for it to come over to him. It took a step and tilted its head at him. "Come here cute little fluffy one, you're so cute!" ^_^
All of a sudden the rabbit jumped at his face. "AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!! KUSO!! BUDDHA, SOMEONE HELP!!! THE YELLOW TEETH!!! AAAHHH!!!!"
"I've got my own problems!!" Kikyo said. The lizards where all klinging to the white part of her priestess uniform. She looked like she was hyperventilating. "Get them off of me!!!"Sango came over to help.
Kagome ran in front of Inu Yasha to grab a rabbit that she had backed into a corner. All of a sudden, Inu Yasha's eyes widened slightly. She turned to look at him, forgetting the lockdown she was supposed to be doing on him. "Well? Are you going to sit there daydreaming or help?" she said.
He looked down at himself and said, "There's something in my pants."
She blinked. "What?"
His eyes widened and he stood up quickly. "Seriously! There's something REALLY BIG in my pants!!"
She blushed slightly, still holding the bunny and backed away a little.
He shook one leg trying to shake it out and he said, "It's moving around!"
"Oh god!" she said and hugged the bunny. Shippou stopped, while holding his rabbit and stared.
He untied the front of his pants and reached in. "I got it!" he said. He pulled up the head of the snake.
"WAAAH???!?" Kagome screamed.
Inu Yasha tilted his head and started to pull the four foot snake out of his pants. "Here we go!" he said and held in up in his hand. The snake hissed at him. "Ew!" he said and dropped it.
CRASH!
He turned to see Kagome faint.
Well, I guess that sort of got her attention. ^^
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=^^= Don't look at me like that!! I saw Corky Romano!!!